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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2 😛

"What!!!!" Maan asked as he stormed down the stairs.


The person at the other end mustered some courage and answered "Ji s-s-s-s-sir. Dadima ne subah ph-ph-phone kiya tha yeh kehne ke liye ki hum mein se kisi ko bhi oh-oh-office shift karne ki zaroorat nahi. Ab unka kaha hum kaise taal sakte hain?"


"Tumhara boss main hoon ki dadima? Tumhe naukri pe kisne rakha hai?" Maan asked as he resumed climbing down the remainder of the steps.

"Aa-a-a-aapne hain sir. L-l-lekin sir, dadima ne warning di hai ke agar hum wahan aaye toh humari khair nahi."

Maan had reached the bottom of the stairs and in front of dadima by the time Adi finished saying "I'm so-so-sorry sir." Dadima gave a smirk as Maan glared at her. He was so angry that he wanted to break something right then and there.

"Dadima yeh main kya sun raha hoon. Aapne staff ko aane se kyun roka?" Maan tried not to sound agitated with no success.

"Aap rules nahi modh sakte. Humne geet ko office jaane se isi liye roka tha taaki aap kaam ke bahane unse baat na kar sakein. Iska matlab yeh nahi ki aap ghar ko hi office bana lein. Rule toh rule hai. Aapko unhein follow karna hi padega. Ab aap jaldi jaiye, humein bhi shopping ke liye jaana hai."

Maan was silent and deep in thought for a few minutes. Finally a smile formed on his lips and he said
"Thik hai dadima. Main din ke kisi bhi samay Geet se aadhe ghante ke liye mil sakta hoon naa?"

"Haan"

"Toh thik hai. Main Geet se abhi milna chahta hoon."

"Kya?!? Soch lijiye. Aap isle baad Geet se phir kal tak nahi mil payenge."

"Haan dadima. Main jaanta hoon. Aap Geet ko bulwayiye."

Dadima was perplexed. She hesitantly asked Nakul to call Geet. She knew something was cooking in his mind but she couldn't do much at this point.

Geet was confused as well and kept looking at the time wondering why Maan was exhausting the entire time now but she decided to go with the flow. Anyway, she didn't have much control over things when Maan made a resolve to handle them himself. They sat together at breakfast and Maan thoroughly enjoyed the start of his day with his lady love. She was beautiful, but seeing her first thing in the morning added brightness to his day. After a few minutes Geet was smiling too assuring herself that after beginning the day with him, she was sure the rest of it would go smooth.

Dadima was keeping tabs at the time and before she could say another word about time being up, Maan got up and said "Mujhe pata hai time khatm ho gaya hai. Main jaa raha hoon. Bye Geet."

Dadima was shocked! She wondered if he had lost his mind or something. Not an extra second he wants to spend with Geet? This didn't sit well with her. She was now most certain something was cooking in Maan's mind. She closely noticed that although Geet was upset about his leaving, he showed no emotion. He quickly bid her good bye and made his way out. Dadima's eyes followed him till he went out of sight.

The whole day dadima was with Geet so she knew Maan hadn't called her nor tried anything else to get in touch with Geet. She kinda felt bad for Geet seeing her restlessness throughout the day. Dadima had thought of all possible ways to tackle him if he asked to have dinner with Geet. Maan at last called late evening only to say he won't be home in time for dinner as he was working till late. Dadima wasn't expecting this. Now all her plans were thrown out the window.

Once dinner was over and Geet had retired into the outhouse dadima stayed back in the hall till Maan came home. When he did, he was surprised to see dadima stay up for him. She said she would heat the food for him. She kept him company while he patiently finished dinner.

When he was done, he asked her to rest as he too needed sleep. He had had a long day and was tired. Dadima noticed his tiring eyes and gave him a pitying look but quickly smiled thinking he probably knew his day would be long and so he must have decided to spend the entire 30 minutes with Geet at breakfast itself. She kissed him on his head and both walked to their respective rooms.

"Geet!"

"Geet!"

"Darwaza kholo!"

"Geet!"

"Darwaza kholo!"


"Geet!"


Finally the balcony door opened and Geet came out. Her jaw dropped when she saw Maan standing on a ladder.


"Maan? Aap yahan? Is waqt? Dadima ne dekh liya toh?" Geet was nervously speaking in full speed while also holding his hand so he doesn't fall.


He took this time to climb up completely and into the room. He pulled her inside and shut the door behind him quickly.


When she began to speak again he placed his hand on her mouth "Shhh. Koi nahi dekhega Geet. Dadima ko lagta hai main so gaya hoon. Din mein sirf tees minute tumhare saath bitana mujhe gawara nahi. Main yeh rule follow nahi kar sakta. Tumhe nahi pata maine aaj ka din kaise kata hai office mein. Har pal yehi soch raha tha ki tum kya kar rahi hogi."


Geet was overwhelmed and at once hugged him. He held her tightly for a few moments before taking her to the bed. They sat there, arm in arm, talking about their day. Both were content to be with one another. It was a new feeling for them, sharing the day's activities with one another. They were truly living the moment.


After about an hour and a half, both were startled but some noise. They followed its direction and made their way to the balcony. Both looked down, then to one another all shocked, then again down, then to one another. "Eh lo. Yeh seedi toh gir gayi. Ab aap wapas kaise jayenge?"


"Upar wala bhi yehi chahta hai ki main tumhare paas ruk jaun" he said as he pulled her into an embrace. Shyness took over but soon she wiggled out of his embrace and said "Ab aap jaiye. Bohot der ho gayi hai. Kal office bhi toh jana hai."


She almost pushed him out the room towards the main outhouse door when he stopped her. "Woh dekho Geet. Dadima ke kamre ki light abhi tak jal rahi hai. Ab jaunga toh unhe pata chal jayega. Thodi der yahin rukna padega."


They kept checking every 15 minutes if Dadima's room lights went out. Finally after about 45 minutes they noticed the lights go out. Maan kissed Geet on the forehead and wished her good night before opening the door. She was right behind him when he opened the door. Both their hearts fell off their chests as Dadima and Annie stood in front of them, right outside the outhouse door...

Part 3 : Posted by sksg here
Edited by dolphinUSA - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Hi Partner, you outdid yourself this time. I loved the way you took the story. It is worth the wait adn thanks for surprising me on my birthday. While reading your story, I was thinking of making Dadi or someone else knock the door for the start of my part, but you did it for me. Thanks partner. I will continue from here and try to bring it back in synch with the ongoing story. But, not sure how long it will take.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
love it..
cant wait for the nxt part.
update soon
thx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
awesome! seriously love it i really wanna know what there reactions are gonna be when annie and dadima question them😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Lolz.. D last line.poor maaneet:-( Would another part be coming up?
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#36
ending was too good . plz do continue
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#37
Amazing and Interesting ... can you please add me to your PM list ... Please update soon :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
that was very cute OS......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 3

"Geet Bete. Kya aapne Maan ko yahan bulaya tha."

"Nahi Dadima. Mein.... Woh......"

"Mein yahan khud aaya tha", he intervened before Geet could say anything more.

"Dadi! Dekha? Bhai toh chupa rustum nikla. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki mera bhai itne deewane ban sakte hain ki apni mehbooba se milne raat ko chori chori aayenge", taunted Annie.

"Annie. Even I was saying the same. I was just telling him that he can't come to my maayika so late in the night. I was just sending him away. I ....", Geet stopped as soon as she caught the look in his eyes.

As he heard her words, his jaw tightened and his lethal eyes held the threat of a promise to get even with her soon. But, he is also perceptive to the agitation all this is causing her. The blushes in her cheeks and the way she is trying to avoid his eyes told him that she is saying all this in hope of hiding her embarrassment of getting caught with him alone so late in the night. The best way is to put an end to this confrontation before anyone had a chance to say anything else.

"Meine Geet ko wada kiya tha ki har sham uski muskuraathe chehre ko dekhkar hi khatam karoonga. Dadima, aap hi ne sikhaya tha na ki waade nibhaanekeliye hi banaaya jaathe hain. My promise to Geet was made before you made your rule, and I came here to keep that promise," he said and walked away without giving them another chance to say anything.

He finally reached the sanctuary of his room,and started to admonish himself for causing such an embarrassment to Geet. He should have made sure Dadi went to sleep before sneaking off to meet Geet. There was a sudden knock on the door that interrupted his musings. As soon as he opened it, Dadima stepped into his room.

"Maan, Hume Aapse yeh ummeed nahi thi...."

"Dadima. what is the meaning of this 30 minute limit anyway? You too have joined Annie to pull my leg? Whatever you are going to do or say, I am no longer going to honor this 30 minute rule."

"You talk as if you have been honoring it from the beginning. Tell me, how many times did you break it by now," Dadi smirked slyly as she continued, "Alright! Even if you do not honor the restrictions I place on you, you will have to honor the restrictions imposed by Geet herself. You can't go to her Maayika during night time."

And with that Dadi left him to his own reflections. He is now sure that he is not going to follow this stupid 30 minute rule anymore, but how to ensure that he can converse with Geet whenever he wants to. He brightened as he thought, "The first thing I will do tomorrow morning is to gift a cell phone to Geet................"
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
Alrighty.....challenge pe challenge. Nice!!!! Me likes 😃

BTW awesome one....you captured all their characteristics perfectly. Story is coming back on track...let's do it 👍🏼

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