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Posted: 14 years ago
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Following is a lovely post that explores multiple options for the same question which is explored through this OS. If you get a chance, please visit this thread too:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1561259
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Posted: 14 years ago
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really nice....hope something like this happens...but not with BDs plz...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi123_78

really nice....hope something like this happens...but not with BDs plz...



I definitely didn't imagine any BDs when writing it. 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sksg

The new FB pics seem to show a different story. If Arjun meets Maan this early, then the 1/2 hr limit / punishment may get forgotten.

i think this 1/2 hr matter will be postponed till DD resumes shooting...dont worry the CVs wont forget....we all r waiting to see a desperate maan doing all sorts of monkey acts just to meet his beloved....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi123_78

i think this 1/2 hr matter will be postponed till DD resumes shooting...dont worry the CVs wont forget....we all r waiting to see a desperate maan doing all sorts of monkey acts just to meet his beloved....



Thanks for making me feel better. I was getting scared whether they will lose this track while they focus more on Annie/Arjun track.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏 Really nice, and enjoyed reading, poor MaanEet, lot of restrictions, and morethan that they are monitoring them lolz...

Ok let me correct your urdu, mostly it's fine, but some words.....

You wrote "Ab mujhe aapki aadat padgayi hain aur aapki paas rehna meri zindagiki jaroorat bangayi hai. Aapke bina meri zindagi adhoori hain. Mein adhoori hoon."

I corrected "Ab mujhe aapki aadat padgayi hai, aur aapke saath rehna meri zindagi ki zaroorat bangayi hai. Aapke bina meri zindagi adhoori hai. Main adhoori hoon."

You wrote "Aap aane mein itna der kyu kurdiya?"

I corrected "Aap ne aane mein itni dair kyon kurdi?"

You wrote"Aaj Maan Singh Khuraana ko apnehi ghar mein apne hi mehbooba ko chori chori milna pad raha hain aur wuskeliye choron ki tarah apne hi kamre ki khidki ke baharwali pipe pakadke neeche aana pada."

I corrected ""Aaj Maan Singh Khurana ko apne hi ghar mein apni hi mehbooba se chori chori milna pad raha hai, aur uske liye choron ki tarah apne hi kamre ki khidki ke baharwale pipe ko pakadke neeche aana pada."

You wrote "Tho aaphi kahiyena - hum kal se kya kare?"

I corrected ""Toh aap hi kahiye na - hum kal se kya kare?"

You wrote "Dil ki baaton ko hoton se nahi kehte, yeh fasaana tho nigahon se baya hota hai. Aur in ankhon ki bhaasha hum dono se jyada koun jaanta hain."

I corrected "Dil ki baaton ko hoton se nahi kehte, yeh fasaana toh nigahon se bayan hota hai. Aur in ankhon ki bhaasha ko hum dono se zyada kaun jaanta hai."


You wrote "Agar bhai ko pata chala tho bahut gadbad hojaayega. Lagtha hai aap abhi tak bhai ko ache tarah nahi jaante."

I corrected "Agar bhai ko pata chala toh bahut gadbad hojaayegi. Lagta hai aap abhi tak bhai ko ache tarah se nahi jaanti hain."


You wrote ""Aise koi baat nahi"

I corrected "Aisi koi baat nahin hai"




Muniza
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: muniza75

👏 Really nice, and enjoyed reading, poor MaanEet, lot of restrictions, and morethan that they are monitoring them lolz...


Ok let me correct your urdu, mostly it's fine, but some words.....

You wrote "Ab mujhe aapki aadat padgayi hain aur aapki paas rehna meri zindagiki jaroorat bangayi hai. Aapke bina meri zindagi adhoori hain. Mein adhoori hoon."

I corrected "Ab mujhe aapki aadat padgayi hai, aur aapke saath rehna meri zindagi ki zaroorat bangayi hai. Aapke bina meri zindagi adhoori hai. Main adhoori hoon."

You wrote "Aap aane mein itna der kyu kurdiya?"

I corrected "Aap ne aane mein itni dair kyon kurdi?"

You wrote"Aaj Maan Singh Khuraana ko apnehi ghar mein apne hi mehbooba ko chori chori milna pad raha hain aur wuskeliye choron ki tarah apne hi kamre ki khidki ke baharwali pipe pakadke neeche aana pada."

I corrected ""Aaj Maan Singh Khurana ko apne hi ghar mein apni hi mehbooba se chori chori milna pad raha hai, aur uske liye choron ki tarah apne hi kamre ki khidki ke baharwale pipe ko pakadke neeche aana pada."

You wrote "Tho aaphi kahiyena - hum kal se kya kare?"

I corrected ""Toh aap hi kahiye na - hum kal se kya kare?"

You wrote "Dil ki baaton ko hoton se nahi kehte, yeh fasaana tho nigahon se baya hota hai. Aur in ankhon ki bhaasha hum dono se jyada koun jaanta hain."

I corrected "Dil ki baaton ko hoton se nahi kehte, yeh fasaana toh nigahon se bayan hota hai. Aur in ankhon ki bhaasha ko hum dono se zyada kaun jaanta hai."


You wrote "Agar bhai ko pata chala tho bahut gadbad hojaayega. Lagtha hai aap abhi tak bhai ko ache tarah nahi jaante."

I corrected "Agar bhai ko pata chala toh bahut gadbad hojaayegi. Lagta hai aap abhi tak bhai ko ache tarah se nahi jaanti hain."


You wrote ""Aise koi baat nahi"

I corrected "Aisi koi baat nahin hai"




Muniza



Thank you so much for the corrections. From next time onwards, if I use too many hindi or urdu words, I will get it screened by you before making my post. I have updated the post with the corrections. Now, it looks more clean.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aditi, there is now a new article claiming that Arjun will attempt to bankrupt Maan. So many points make me fear whether there will be a cut in time allotted for Maan's monkey tricks in order to see Geet Chupke Chupke. I really hope these moments, which have lot of scope for hilarity, do not get cut down.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Beautiful Sri..i'm so sorry dear my pm box is a total mess ..hence missed this post
love u
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: nanditasingh

Beautiful Sri..i'm so sorry dear my pm box is a total mess ..hence missed this post
love u



No probs Nandu. Glad you found it in the end. Wait for the sequel, which is going to be penned by Dol.
Edited by sksg - 14 years ago

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