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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Lion

Something about the rabbit caught the lion's eye- was it the plea for help, the beseeching look on her face or was it that smooth smooth fur?

Deep in thought he put down the beer bottle and made his way to where the drama was unfolding.

After all rabbits taste so good with beer.

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Pixie,

An eye for an eye, words for words?

:-) Nicely done.

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her_story

@her_story

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

wow!
yes, everythng did change after that..and wat a change it has been..
maybe u cud call it a flash fiction...

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@-Aria-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Wooh!

I swear this appeared so much longer when I read it in a tiny chat box :D

So the next one will be 9 lines with six words each?

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579908

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Sookie,

I am very intrigued, and this sounds like a smashing idea, but the 54 words paragraph looked much shorter than i thought it would be 😆, loved it nonetheless.

Nadia

xxx

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: -Sookie-
Pixie,

An eye for an eye, words for words?

:-) Nicely done.

I am flattered even though I am no storyteller like you

Just couldn't resist this.....since I love 55 fiction and 55 words is probably the best I can manage given my aversion to writing 😆

Will be following this thread closely..hope you update regularly!

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

@jasw: Thank you :-)

@Bri: :D

@kunataanya: Thank you. I will be following the series order with a little twist.

@Nirjhor: Hmm... Lets see :)

@Anu: Yep. Only 54 words. Why? Because I was bored :D

@Shevta: Maan-Geet. The first post refers to the first meeting of MG.

@NJ: Yeah yeah Yeah....That's what everyone said when Twitter came - micro blogging! But now, see how popular it is :D Why can't you read it daily? Like the way you read horoscopes? :D :D :D

@Vrush: Man! How do you do it everytime? I envy you!!!

@whitepearl: Thank you. Yep, its their story in nutshell.

@phoenixgirl: Yeah. Things changed and even went downhill :-)

@Aria: (No, I am still not used to your French sounding name). Even I felt so!!!!

@Nadia: Thank you very much :-)

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

wow interesting....................
cant wait to read further.................
so its on Maan Geet............
thanks for the pm...................

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Sai Prasanthi

@Prasanthi

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Hey S!

I am glad you did it. Well, a small question. Why concentrating on number of words? I meant here its okay, as you want it this way. But, offlate I find everyone concentrating(read couting) the words in their works.So...

Good work S. :-)

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Originally posted by: imshveta
Different style indeed. Just one question. Who are we supposed to imagine? Geet-Maan , AR or Nupur - Mayank? Or nobody in particular. This is one that goes beyond imagining somebody particular.
Love
Shveta

Ofcourse the right thing to do wud be imagine MAAN- GEET....since this is the GHSP forum....how can u imagine anyone else ?? 😲....This forum is under the magical spell of MAANEET...😍....

BTW Sookie, I totally loved the concept.👍🏼...54 words & so much said....Well-Said dear....Keep more short stories coming....Gr8 creativity & writing...👏

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