OS:Edge of Madness 1-2... incomplete, don't read;)

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#111

I thought u updated next part

But nopes ur toh busy making us go mad lyk Maan😆😆😆😆

Bechara he was jus on the verge of blasting by fire

Jus loved Geet

Maan wont leave Geet now paka😆😆

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sharanya

@shaaranya

Rocker

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#112

OMG was too hard 2 resist so read it

Now i noe y u said dont read or read at your own peril. its absolutely FABULOUS!!

PLZZZZZ update fast desperate

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Love the game that Geet's playing! Their sweet spots, niceeee. That includes your idea behind this OS as well, Anj. Love the teasing that Geet is doing to Maan and that YOU are doing to US....😆😆😆

Maan jumping out of the slow moving car : 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Maan running up the staircase, undressing himself in the process : 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Can't get it outta of my mind so u hafta continue if not i'll just be left with the image of Maan running to no where, non-stop, going mad AND calling GEEEEEEEEEEEEEEETH 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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Jaded

@Jaded

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Anj...😆😆 u know that was awesome....so i wont even say it....what i wanna say is.....can I implore you to NOT update it???😆😆😆 coz i m having more Phun reading peoples reactions to ur FF.....🤣🤣🤣 😈 Good Job 👍🏼😉

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aishwarya

@aish_punk

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#115

reserved, can't promise ill edit :P..kidding, will definately try!

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nahtani88

@nahtani88

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#116

its amazing continue soon add me to your pm list

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Sigma

@Sigma

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Anj that awesome, I loved it, esp your emotions they they were the cherry on the cake 🤣🤣🤣

Geet in white ofcourse, nice touch, Maan should know to wave his white flag in surrender then and there 🤣

Geet giving Maan his boxers and he couldn't tell her no when she wanted to play dress ups 🤣

He was half naked and on fire...and she was babbling about pasteries?! Maybe he was loosing his impact on her - maybe she has turned into Pinky like that film freaky friday 🤣

I love this wicked Geet and the games she is playing with him, all those innocent touches and Maan fighting with himself to keep CONtrol, using his tai-chi to help 🤣

She is very persistent in dressing him, the perfect biwi, I never thought I'd love an OS on Geet dressing Maan up 🤣

Then she gets him all worked up and sends him away to a cancelled meeting 🤣

His reaction when he reads the note 🤣🤣🤣

jumping out the car and undressing himself, after his wife dressed up soo lovely 🤣 he will probably be naked by the time he gets to the bedroom

Can't wait for the next part

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taqdir

@taqdir

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#118

@anj, you did one hell of a job by writin this. OMG i had no idea you could write so beautifully. I thought you were the campaign girl (ooopsie) 😆. I mean really i thought you logical mind was more active than your emotional one. Well the FF jst left me speechless. You clearly expressed a writer's mind when you emphasized on the boxers and the whole dressing ups. I meamn you really gave a whole paragraph on boxers! 😉

Undoubtedly we need pary two or we might have to screem AAAAAAAAAANNNNNNNNNNJJJJJJJJJJJJJJ the way the hero of your story screamed the heroine's name at the end of part one.

If you ever decide to write a book, let me know. I'm sure gonna buy a copy of that. No kidding. Dont think i'm into passionate stuffs. What i liked most about your story is that even in the most passionate moment you were able to keep the beauty alive and i'm actually after beauty. So i believe whatever you write about, you can keep the beauty alive.

Will be waiting for part 2, hoping for more beauty! And this is for part 1. 👏

Edited by taqdir - 14 years ago