Somethings are just meant to be : ff

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pavs

@pavs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

thnxxxx guys for this encouragement...it truly feels awesum..wil try to write more..

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

I flag this story line with a green. Good emotional drama. I shed tears thinking of Geet and her teary big soft eyes. And Maans honorable retribution!! I can actually weigh the pros and cons of Geet losing the baby.

But if at all a story line is conceived where G loses the baby, we should not be disheartened. Cause Maan exists for her and actually a new script to trigger the romance and love in its entirety would be born of their grief.

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pavs

@pavs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

hey love the serial..i agree a new dimension will be seen if geet loses the baby..but itl be too shattering for her considerign the fact tht she has struggled so ahrd to keep the baby safe... the baby is now pivotal to the story n maneet lyf.

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BheegiBasanti

@BheegiBasanti

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Pavs...love it! 👏 🤗

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

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+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

omg that was beautifully heart wrenching!! you did a wonderful job...what really got to me was the part with Maan crying...killer!!

JAZ

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SimplyAparajita

@SimplyAparajita

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Why dont you convert it into ff..you are simply gr8..and if you do..please add me to your pm list..you are such a good writer..

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pavs

@pavs

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

i have extended it into a ff...il continue as soon as i can...thnx guys

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maansa

@maansa

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

OMG...pavs....that was so beautiful 😭....
i feel like giving geet a hug.... so touching....

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

OMG Pavs this is just wonderfully written👏👏..it just left me speechless and I want CVs to read this and if at all they r planning anything against the baby,they will read this and will understand how much we as viewers value this Baby and what all can they show in this baby track with MSK and Geet😳..

Its a very touching scene and almost brought tears to my eyes😭😭...Geet needs some real love and care from MSK in the future and I can so see this type of scene coming in the future which will touch all our hearts😭😳...

Pavs just PM me whenever u continue the next part😳

Edited by jyoti06 - 14 years ago