Somethings are just meant to be : ff

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Antares

@Antares

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#41

That was so poignant....so emotionally unnerving.....both the parts really moved me...it's beautifully written! Do continue soon and thanks for the PM!

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#42

PAVS: A fantastic release of energy in ur writing.....

A tenderly packaged 2nd part - with love. Hey, just recalling part 1 of the story - "propping up the doorway - big, sexy and male" takes me to a part to the original GODFATHER SERIES, where Sunny steals himself to a room to bed his girl and he's described with this all-male........

Anyways, I love the way you bring the gentle emotions of Maan and Geet, like the wind that blows but cant be seen, or the smoke that incenses a room, to be gently felt but cant be captured..... I can feel the euphoric high in their touch and the dark low of their misery.. that spells well in your WRITING....

Btw Pavs: I love the baby to hold, something that would bring joy to the Maan and Geet relationship. Besides Geet has been "SUPERWOMAN", what with falls, bumps, being knifed, hit, and mercilessly taunted psychologically (even by Maan initially). But the original track of GEET was meant to be a storyline of more higher ideals: GEET standing in the gap for many other young vulnerable girls who would fall prey to ludicrous young rich men and their wild passions.

And her fight for justice untold.

Pavs: I am a sucker for love and passionately in love with Maan, honestly raise a toast for beautiful Geet and affirm that they should have that lil creature of a baby!!!!

Good work. Continue pls.....

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pavs

@pavs

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#43

am sooooo touched by these heartfelt comments...promise the next update will be long....the next update will reveal what led to geet losing her baby n the aftermath of the tragedy on maaneet :)

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shreya satish

@shreya satish

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#44

God... So sad.....but Nicely written the feelings.. waiting to know wht happend to geet... did NT harm her???/

pls add me in ur pm list..

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hindu4lyf

@hindu4lyf

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Eeks! I can't wait for the next update!

Please add me to your PM list :)

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_innocent_

@_innocent_

Achiever

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#46

love it pavss..... cnt wait to read more...😳 didnt knw u could write like this😉...

awesome...... do continue😳

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Zoya

@-Zoya-

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Continue soon!!!
Want to know what happened to Geet!!!

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@roseinbloom

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#48

oh gosh you dont wnna know how glad i am that u made this an FF!! tho i wud never want this to happen in geet.. i love reading it because even tho its real sad.. it brings some type of reality into it to... i mean just the way u express everything makes it seem so realll as if youre there! seriously if u wrote a book like this id buy it and read it over and over!! :) great job and do continue ur work is fab!

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pavs

@pavs

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: mkgh
oh gosh you dont wnna know how glad i am that u made this an FF!! tho i wud never want this to happen in geet.. i love reading it because even tho its real sad.. it brings some type of reality into it to... i mean just the way u express everything makes it seem so realll as if youre there! seriously if u wrote a book like this id buy it and read it over and over!! :) great job and do continue ur work is fab!

thankoooo sooo much//am flattered...i love ur comments..they r super cute!😛