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bluedreamz953

@bluedreamz953

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Posted: 14 years ago

#131

omg..don't tell me sameera? and naintara are here to kill her baby?

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Gagori Chatterjee

@jyoti06

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Posted: 14 years ago

#132

Pavs just beautiful👏👏...I never knew u can write such wonderful FFs😲...superb job😳..just loved the way u describe each and every scene which such beautiful words👏👏...about the other woman...it could b Sam aunty😳😆...waiting for your next update😳

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Amiiish

@Amiiish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#133

The beginning was really sweet, a nice update😉

And I seriously cant guess who the other woman is, hope you continue soon.

Edited by Asmiiish - 14 years ago

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SimplyAparajita

@SimplyAparajita

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#134

Nice update..when we will get next part dear.good night..will w8

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423728

Hibernated

Posted: 14 years ago

#135

Pavs! I looooooooooooooooooove this! Dear lord, I was blushing and smiling so badly at the screen when I was reading their bedroom scene. Oh how I wish this happened in the actual show. 😆

I wonder who the other woman is? 🤢 And the poem was SO beautiful. I love you for this fan fiction dear! Thank you! 🤗

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Esha

@esha143

Rocker

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#136

Pavs....where r u yaar??when will u update??/waitinggggggg..............

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SimplyAparajita

@SimplyAparajita

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#137

Pavs next part..am waiting buddy.. :( :( :(

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#138

PAVS

Loved your 4th part. The poem is the cry of the soul for something lost that can never be regained. Makes me intrinsically a part of the baby and its life.

A friend penned this down, when she lost her baby:

I felt my love wash over with tears the unfinished yearning of pining groW*H,

Yet a desperate pang of darkness looms like a shadow within me.

For almost 6 months now I had felt that there was a someone

Standing silently within my altar of pitiful tears,

The presence of something that played a cat and mouse game within me.

He who filled me inside was mocking my sightlessness,

testing my sense of hearing and smell, trying to confuse me with moments of

lust and abuse.

Sometimes a hot stare on my womb, swollen and smelt like dampness and teardrops stained,

The Phantom listener inside me, peered at me from inside, upside down,

The rhythmic clawing, a gasp for air, seemed far removed,

The pain of carrying a wound and a DNA stained by the desperate wolf of lust

Is something I would like to disown, but an ever so faint restlessness to grow or not to grow

Stares me in the face. Love an idealists poem dances on the wind of desire, not real.

The above was written by a friend who was abused and lost a baby by miscarriage. Jumbled thoughts, and now shes a family counsellor in California.

Pavs, I agree, in the episodes, this 18 year old young sweet girl, loves her baby like none else and would give her life for it. I would love to watch the episodes and the psychological impact if any, on the father of the child, and Geet, if any is to be shown at all. How they perceive a storyline to impact a message to the world.

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maansee

@maansee

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#139

SWEET THOUGHTS PM ME TOO THANKS

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KomaLSunny

@KomaLSunny

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#140

wow PAV !! u hve done it once agian 👏..... i m speechless .... no words left to describe ,, totally outstanding .... keep up the good work 👍🏼 im eagerly waiting wats gonna happen next .. plz do msg me . thanks

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