Somethings are just meant to be : ff - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Part 2
Geet wept and wept holding her husband tightly and kept on murmuring 'I am so sorry..I am so sorry'. Maan , for the first time in his life was rendered speechless. He could only just hug her as if his life depended on that hug, and let the warmth from his body seep into her cold, lifeless form. At that time words were not required. Geet just wanted to be in the safe haven of her husband's arms for the rest of her life.

His eyes were over-bright but dry when he lifted his head and smoothed her hair gently from her face. 'How are you doing? Sorry, stupid question.''I've been better.' She knuckled a damp cheek. 'Let me.' He cradled her face in his palms as if she might break and smoothed his thumbs over her cheekbones. 'You're a strong woman. You'll get through this.'

Guilt and misery stirred a deadly cocktail with the drugs in her stomach. Her head felt like a melon, too heavy to hold up. She had to tell him how exactly she lost her baby. She had to tell him what transpired before he had found her curled in a foetal position in the living room, with blood everywhere. She had to tell him the truth.

'Here.' He unzipped the bag and pulled out a parcel. 'A CD player. And Some film magazinges.' She shook her head, forced a smile. 'Only you would think of that.' Only you....As he was putting the things on the small table near her bed, he saw a swollen purple bruise on her elbow.His eyes narrowed and his lips compressed, when he saw similar discolorations on her neck. He blanched with shock and asked her . 'Geet what the hell happened? Please tell me .'
She wanted to pull the sheet over the evidence, but the damage was done. He touched her as if she was a fragile doll and untied her hospital dressing gown. She tried to stop him but he looked deep into her eyes and said ' I have the right to see you.' As he untied her dressing gown, he saw ugly bruises on her back and beneath her breasts. He was livid with anger and shock. Something really bad has happened to his Geet and he shamefully realized, that he could not keep his promise of protecting his wife and their unborn child.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
wow pavs it was so well written i just came across this..jaldi se update karo and mujhe PM karo..i will be witing.
aur yeh sec update kya tha..not even one page..kanjoos..agli baar compensate and make it longer..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Pavs i am really really really glad to see u here in this forum...trust me i m feeling elated...personally i liked you....though we were supporter of some different couple in some ahem forum which got corrupted after some ad****** scene....a big hug for you...🤗

and regarding this FF, oh my god i felt sooooooooo bad naa reading it...i was on the verge of crying....its soooooo heart wrenching.......i am looking forward to this FF.......plzzzzzzzz add me to ur PM list....

and one more reqst,plzzzzzzzzz give us a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong update....u c we cant get enough of ur FF....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jhinki143

Pavs i am really really really glad to see u here in this forum...trust me i m feeling elated...personally i liked you....though we were supporter of some different couple in some ahem forum which got corrupted after some ad****** scene....a big hug for you...🤗

and regarding this FF, oh my god i felt sooooooooo bad naa reading it...i was on the verge of crying....its soooooo heart wrenching.......i am looking forward to this FF.......plzzzzzzzz add me to ur PM list....

and one more reqst,plzzzzzzzzz give us a looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong update....u c we cant get enough of ur FF....


heyyy jhinki am super happy to see u here also....i like u too sweetheart😛...forget the squabbles we had in tht messy forum..its all in the past now. il update a longggggggggg scene next time i write this ff. thanxxxx so much for such encouraging words. love n hugs
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Pavs.......plzzz give us a loooong update next time...thats what i can ask for...😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanx for the PM.....

It is a really heart-wrenching FF....but very well written and put forward.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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emotional part
felt bad 4 geet 😭😭😭😭😭
update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh god ....what happened to her..........update soon please...........
Pavs........loved it ..👏......thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This is really something different.....would love to read more......very well written👏.....do continue soon.....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You seems to be a nice writer, though I just read two lines, will read it later😉

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