Somethings are just meant to be : ff

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nikipuki

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

very nicely written, please add me to your pm list.

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@roseinbloom

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

gosh this just keeps getting better and better!!! ofcourse i loved it pavz.. ure an amazing writerr and i just love the way you describe their feelings... theres not one sentence in there that isnt touching or makes u feeel like crying ur heart out!! i just cant wait till your next part.. keep up the fantastic effort! :) <3 👏⭐️

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Amiiish

@Amiiish

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Hey pavs, this was a painful reading, Who can be so cruel, to push down Geet.

But I must say you are really a good writer.

Are you new to this forum? Havent seen you here before.

So I assume this is your first attempt on Maaneet?

Do continue soon😉

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Natz

@natz

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

super cool Pavs! I feel sorry for them already 😒 and I love their ability to see through each other's lies, not every couple can do it 😍 continue soon 🤗

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A2Z_84

@A2Z_84

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

wow this was so touching and very well written

please PM when you update this i really liked it

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Mellowfellow

@Mellowfellow

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Pavs, that was very well written! You have managed to capture the pain and hurt well! Do continue at your convenience! 🤗

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

Pavs, a sudden foray into the deeper, darker side of feelings of loss for M & G - I was caught stumped. THink I am involving a wee bit too much into the nitty gritty of the story, allowing myself to be swayed. Very well written. Green all the way...

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Nickname : Zee

@Mrs.ZSK

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

omg!!!! such a sad story!!!! it feels so real!!!! u described such a sad and heart wrenching state in a such a way that it actual felt real!!!! Geet's state and even maan's state. especially geet's state how she felt so empty!!!!

plz continue....

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Bibi K-Villa

@lovetheserial

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

What is meant to be here:??

Pavs, I was wondering... We all talk of how imp. the baby is for G and that the storyline of GEET weaves around it. What would be the repercussions if she has'nt completely forgiven the circumstances of her getting pregnant and the person who (I'd like to state) raped her. Would'nt the baby be a reminder of that one MAN😡 and the helplessness, the repugnance she'd go through grieving over that everytime she was faced the baby bang on! feeding, loving, changing diapers..... Making love is a passion and an inbuilt desire and need and this certainly was not a two way rendering of a passionate moment with Dev.

Would'nt she be able to love MAAN more passionately and exclusively if H-E gave her that one child she longed for! The hunger for his love, body, and a baby! After all, an 18 year old, and in the prime of her womanhood!

Doesnt that justify a loss.....?????