Somethings are just meant to be : ff

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shivangi783

@shivangi783

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Hey Pavs

Just came across your OS turned FF!

Read the three parts.

What do I say, its simply amazing! I acually have no words to tell how deep your writing has touched me!

The emotions, the pain Geet is going through has been portrayed such that I can feel her pain. Emotions come alive through your words!

Superb!!!👏

Hope you continue soon.

Please drop me a PM when you update next.

Shivangi

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ambbiha

@ambbiha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

WONDERFUL PART

😉😉😉

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naina

@warriorprincess

Dazzler

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#83

beautiful...please add me to ur pm list

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maansa

@maansa

Rocker

Posted: 14 years ago

#84

@pavs....you have me hooked so bad😆....this is freakin brilliant....👍🏼

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Romenas

@Oblivion007

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#85

awesome!pls cont soon dear&kindly add me to your pm list.

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swan20

@swan20

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Pavs you are really good at weaving a story......beautiful flow....👏....i'm hooked.....waiting for next part...😊

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#87

awesome update yaar plz add me to ur pm list😊

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swetha10

@swetha10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#88

amazing update.. very emotional... OMG geet was pushed off the stairs.. who did it??? do continue soon

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Jazmin

@jnawaz

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#89

omg...what a twist...who pushed her...tell me and ill kill them...of course Maan will kill them before i get anywhere near them...lol...but lovely yaar...continue soon

JAZ

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Antares

@Antares

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#90

It's so beautiful and touching......could feel their pain......you have penned it awesomely.....and Geet was pushed......guess it was that NT's doing......anyways....do continue soon....

I too hope that they don't kill the baby in the show......it's gonna be sad then.....

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