Geet reveals her past and Maan is shattered...
First crucial moment which depending on the plots which cud have come and wud have been easily accepted this scene cud have easily come at episode 175 if not later...
How,well imagine episode 110 and add to it atleast 10 episodes even more cud be added but now consider only 10 where becoz of fake engagement Maan and Geet are thrown in funny situations..
followed by 25 episodes of a competitor coming in,Geet clashing Maan as client and above all a competitor's track forcing both feel and realise their feelings to eventually bringing them back together in khurana constructions..
In between add song tracks and dance performances and meetings and visits and common outings and parties and finally out of restlessness
Maan says "Maan ki Geet" infront of all elites in Delhi and people who know Maan shocking dadi and every one...
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Well ideally for me the episode shud have come as episode 175 atleast if not 200....
how was it possible?
Well I always blaim for lack of planning by makers and for right reasons...
It is well known that writers and creative people follow trial and error formula but when the team Geet knew Maan and Geet's love story was appealing fans then I guess the trial and error ends there.
From episode 50 to 115..nearly 4 months and a TRP of 1.5 during out house scenes,a formula tested and succesfull but was not understood by makers but was understood by unprofessional like me
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from episode 110 to 115: fake engagement plot and circumstances
from episode 116 to 150: competitor plot with 150 being Maan expressing his true feelings out of restlessness
from episode 151 to 175; Geet,Maan and office and their awkwardness restlessness,clients coming in,emotional scenes,manali trip,pyaar ka ghar concept and finally the big bang..
does it sound unrealistic,trust me 175 is the least..if desired and fans supported..cud have easily stretched to 200..
but now keeping it optimum just optimum...
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Geet reveals her past and Maan is shattered and follow all those scenes by makers which were shown after the truth was revealed...till the point Maan and Geet reach station
Those scenes were great and were loved and considered natural outcome...
So now
Maan prposes Geet unofficially and brings Geet back followed by a proposal and build up where Maan makes Geet comfortable and proposes her
Grand proposal episode 185...
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With proposal and everything done,dadi announces engagement and Dev and NainT are scared to watch geet making them flee the engagement party
Maan and geet get engaged it is fun all over and come next day in office Geet as fiance of Maan,making sasha and tasha feel sad and bad..office fun...and romance where Maan tries to come close to Geet..you know..like few moments where maan and geet are now engaged and are having fun in office
new officially approved couples and their romance...
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Certainly with this 200 episodes could have been reached with ease,with truth in episode 175 and engament party and fun till episode 200
Now for thos who will feel it is easy for me to say now,if you are lucky to read my earlier articles,you will realise i have been consistently writing as to how the plot where Geet reveals her truth cud have been extended
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Imagine a parallel track involving Dev and Nanint it wud have been fun to see them sweating and nervous...
well Dev,Maan and geet confrontation...Geet going away without saying a word..but definitely not at the time of wedding or engagement as shown..
Geet informing Maan she wud not be marrying him,Dev's identity is still a secret..to Maan and Maan feels cheated by Geet...
Offcourse this wud have brought the series back on the old platform where Geet earlier was..
good old days back..
where this time Geet is hiding her feelings becoz of dev and maan is unaware of it and feels geet is playing with his feelings ..giving ....a contrasting feeling
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Maan wondering what happened..resulting in Maan's accident
Geet Maan meeting in the hospital and offcourse..no adds and footage to SBS and SBB which ruined the fun,I had written it but my unfortunate status of being just a fan is insulting
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Geet after properly welcoming Maan back home leaves the job...
Since she has no proof and Maan's health is not good...she keeps dev's reality a secret only to reveal laterafter being forced
Now over here I had thought Maan indirectly provides Geet a job in his friends company,who later on signs a project with khurana constructions and sends Geet back to khurana constructions as a special person in charge..to give maaneet moments..
all this done by maan to bring geet back in khurana constructions..
office fun yet again but geet with a better position
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with episode 200 and 250 ...that is 10 weeks in my eyes..there is a mix of plot where early on
1) Maan feels he was cheated
2) Geet comes back to office
3) Geet registers complain against Dev
4) Dev is arrested and Maan comes to know the truth
5) Maan and Geet both feel sorry for each other
6) circumstance bring them together yet again
7) finally they clear the air..
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All this was shown but treatment was too negative and inconsistent and without any sequence..
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starting episode 251...Maaneet wedding and sequences of challenges thrown by naint where she comes out of jail,geet's family coming back...fun all over and in between after Geet family comes back..
just when wedding functions are to begin Vicky comes back
Yes Maan's brother vicky comes back
Maaneet wedding with full on fun and only entry of Brij..yess to add to twist...
no arjun even if naint was not available..brij only as a reason for future build up..
again brij's track wud end on a good note where he apologises to geet,an emotional scene involving brij and geet,who realises his mistake after seeing darji and others supporting geet
certainly from 250 episodes to 300 episodes from build up to maaneet wedding to finally maaneet wedding in episode 300..
if you feel if it was possible then offcourse it was becoz the present geet team took 40 odd episodes from build up to maaneet wedding
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Post wedding andepsidoe 300:
The most important track:
A parllel love story track built between adi and pinky and at the same time between vicky and geet's younger sister..
now what's wrong in it..certainly it wud give a feel good feeling
who want s a parallel track like arjun and annie which is so independent that maaneet scenes have no scope
Specially Vicky and Geet's younger sisters track wud have been fun providing great scope to watch dewar bhabhi relationship...as well and fun associated with..it..
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Post wedding :
following maaneet wedding the tracks where
1) stalker comes in,who is geet's lover i mean silent idiots who keep their feelings inside,great thought but unfortunately even this was wasted
2) Doctor's advice to keep away from physical relationship
3) Maan confronting Sameera
4) Sameera creating issues in Maan's life by trying to seduce him,wud really cast someone hot dman hot..
5) Baby of geet born..and life after baby is born...
These are the tracks which go with the mother plot or original plot..
Add to this a plot where Dev is step brother of Maan
Maan's parents are divorced and his mother is responsible who ran away..
these plots look pathetic and sound very boring though,but treatment is what matters..
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Specially after wedding it was possible for makers to add even more maaneet fun with geet going to office and treatment taking a comic turn where life of Maan and Geet is celebrated.
Parallel tracks would eventually come to take their love to next level:
Like court case and trial,sameera and other challenges...
100 episodes with short and precise treatment....
If want in details elaboration then wait for a while..
But post wedding it was easy to stretch the plot to 500 episodes with fun retained becoz parallel tracks wud support and with stalker's plot it was even more easier..
Becoz stalker's plot and doctor's advice itself cud have eaten up 50 episodes without anyone getting bored..
How is written in first comment of this article
36 minutes ago Delete Post Anyways that was just a jist of what I felt and what many fans were expecting and it was possible too...
Later when all plots were used my story would come in to add twist and continue with the same story and this time with Maan both with Drashti as Geet and Drashti as Maansi
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Vikrant Khatri
Now for those who opposed and felt my track was bad and unacceptable think again..
My story shoots off in 2012..so it means all possible plots of present story line would be over..
Considering the present scenario dont u feel my plot gives more scope to drashti and gurmeet and characters maan and geet where they can be shown more and parallel tracks wont come in
Becoz parallele track will be maan and maansi at times and maan and geet at times and venu and maansi at times.
If want to have a glance at what the storyline is all about,here is link to 20 episodes already written and an idea with only one reason
"Give alot more scope to Drashti and Gurmeet and all those mistakes which were made with the original plot can be rectified.
Title is:
"Dont be surprised if this happens in future"
http://www.facebook.com/topic.php?topic=2475&post=84244&uid=109723285713002#!/topic.php?uid=109723285713002&topic=2475
With lots and lots of love and support to Drashti and Gurmeet and best wishes to team Geet and salute to Maaneet's for their persistence and support.
Vikrant Khatri thanks all those who read my articles,hated and loved them and praised and criticised them..
With my last article defining journey with Geet and taking back with me one realisation that I am indeed addicted to Drashti and Gurmeet that I cant just keep myself away from them.
May God shower upon Drashti and Gurmeet all the success in the world and with Gurmeet getting married tomorrow wishing him great married life and hope to see Drashti soon with her real life Maan.
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