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Sana

@SanaH05

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+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#11

This is the most beautiful OS I've ever read.
Ive got tears in my eyes...

I know this is sappy and probably silly, but the part where he changes her kameez..the part where he lets his Respect override his desires.
That literally got to me.

And then the part where he says "Ive only drank Tea..coz you're a tea person" And then she falls in love again with him😍

I think I FELL IN LOVE with Him again. All thanks to your OS..
This was a real treat..Wish you could extend it.

Not only was it simple, serene beautiful and captivating..
I want to give you the likes of my favorite author's - Nicholas Sparks and Nora Roberts *thumbs up*
Cheers Dol

Sana

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

wow.....😊

LOVE IT.......BEAUTIFUL........ JUST........BEAUTIFUL!!!!!😳

AMAZING........ OS..........👏
LOVED..😃
THANKS FOR THE PM.....😉

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krishnaveni

@shiveni

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

oye Dol love u dear really awesome.i need the same scene onscreen pls creatives have a look at this meri Dol ko patha hein dil ko kise choona hein.very well written dear seriously i became a die hard fan for ur writing mind blowing tight jappis for u sweet heart 🤗👍🏼🤗

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Ranjna Narang Monga

@ranjnanarang

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Beautiful Simply beautiful. Loved it totally....

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-pixie-

@-pixie-

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Very beautifully written...⭐️👍🏼

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nandita singh

@nanditasingh

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Dol - aww! now i 'm confused all the while since the precap i've wished that they meet at the office & the staff that kept on cursing Geet see their love ...bla bla
but now i want this....' they were content at having found each other, their togetherness was above everything else.'
loved it🤗

Edited by nanditasingh - 14 years ago