OS - Pocket Full of Sunshine - Page 3

Originally posted by: sksg

👏👏👏Wow! It is hard to put into words what I felt reading this. What I liked best is that they are content with being together irrespective of yet to be answered questions and yet to be cleared misunderstandings. It is the power of their true and unconditional love that just each other's presence completes the other.

Yes...their love stands above everything else for them. Nothing...absolutely nothing can come between their love. And only Maaneet can pull this off in such a manner. Love them totally! I'm so glad you liked it 😊

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

wow.....wow.....was this a treat....or was this like a fattening treat???

omg omg.....Dol this was superb and absolutely brilliant!!

U just keep on gettin better and better every time....u come with awesome scenes....the descriptions.....they were just amazing!!!

I am just :0 still.....shocked as hell....thank u thank u....for such a wonderful treat!! I really needed one.....and i got it!!! Wow....it was amazing...bang on....i hope something like this or something similar to this comes!!!

After readin this I am more excited to see Gurti coming back fit and fine....as our amazing Maaneet....wow....what a reunion dol!! Loved it.....how they forgot what had happened and wanted to just live in their moment....nothing else should come in between them....nothing mattered.....they just wanted to take in each other......

they trust each other.....and maan knows that Geet would never mean to hurt him......thank u once again yaar!! Amazing

You deserved every bit of it sweetheart....treat is all yours :-)

Yes...nothing comes between their love...their togetherness is all they need...every else is secondary..

Originally posted by: muniza75

Hai hai hai neend nahin aaye chain uda jaaye lolz

Wah wah wah miss Dol, meri Sohniya.. kya bindas likha hai yaar...Really missing MaanEet, and i hope seriously i am hoping that CV's shows something like that, means Mera will tell Maan that Meet and Talk with Geet, better talk than listen to others....

Wonderful, beautiful OS...Lovely Poem...Pocket full of Sunshine....

Luv You Sweetheart....

Muniza

Me too missing Maaneet Moony....but I hope both DD and GC recover completely before they show their union....and when they come together....the wait will be worth it.

Originally posted by: SanaH05

This is the most beautiful OS I've ever read.
Ive got tears in my eyes...

I know this is sappy and probably silly, but the part where he changes her kameez..the part where he lets his Respect override his desires.
That literally got to me.

And then the part where he says "Ive only drank Tea..coz you're a tea person" And then she falls in love again with him😍

I think I FELL IN LOVE with Him again. All thanks to your OS..
This was a real treat..Wish you could extend it.

Not only was it simple, serene beautiful and captivating..
I want to give you the likes of my favorite author's - Nicholas Sparks and Nora Roberts *thumbs up*
Cheers Dol

Sana

Thanks Sana. Yeah I wanted to show the depth of his love and longing...so I made him drink only tea...how bad I am naa? And no matter how wild the desires grow in him, he will always keep her respect and dignity above his desires...Love him!!!!!

great work Dol, i love how they feel each others presence and meera leaving them alone to talk and the rain coming down as soon as they embrace

Originally posted by: elavenil

oye Dol love u dear really awesome.i need the same scene onscreen pls creatives have a look at this meri Dol ko patha hein dil ko kise choona hein.very well written dear seriously i became a die hard fan for ur writing mind blowing tight jappis for u sweet heart 🤗👍🏼🤗

Thanks soooo much Veni.🤗 I'm sure creatives will do something better than this....unhe bhi dil chhoona aata hai 😊

Originally posted by: nanditasingh

Dol - aww! now i 'm confused all the while since the precap i've wished that they meet at the office & the staff that kept on cursing Geet see their love ...bla bla
but now i want this....' they were content at having found each other, their togetherness was above everything else.'
loved it🤗

Even I want the world to see nothing...absolutely nothing can tear them apart....but I also want their union to be private, intimate and undisturbed. Let's keep our fingers crossed....hope both DD and GC recover completely before they meet...I want totally dhamakedar meeting between them.

Originally posted by: warriorprincess

i think you should go and demand a job with the creative team at geet! brilliant writing!!!

Aaaa I wouldn't mind. Do you have contacts there?😉

Thanks a lot tough 😊

Wow it is truly beautifully written............ great job 🤗