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Posted: 14 years ago

ok edited my take on PG4... srry i gota rush.. but pls do comment. n critisize...😆

HADH!! kardi AApne!!!😡😭

when i planned ki yehi meri reservation lin hogi.. it was totally reserved for t CVs n t eDiTor namoonas😡.. but thn as i typed it... n as it loaded *a full 5 mins n i had to quit t pg n decide to see l8r* i was lik Hadh kardi aapne dAd!!! he had kept net on his end n for dlding tat i had to wait for ages just for a pg to load😭 *saara mood pe paani..aur pata nahi kya kya😡*

khair.. t epi was tooo goood tat i still hav a huge smile on my face whn i am up early morning just spread my shmile ard😃😉😆

ok now lemme start with t bad news CVs n editor log **lafange *star* log** rather😡... just coz i want to end on a good note😡

why why why??? kyun kiya aapne aise.. is line is for two things now.. as i got updated of certain kaarnaamo in anj's reservation...n suddnly its t priority thks to her

1. how **fing dare u???😡 how cud you??? itni himmath... n we were gale padoing of t poor CVs (who infact chup chup khade hoke let thm chop - ur due is coming up dudos!!!) for being so inconsistent n sooo not real...n sooo..jerky or abrupt with t scenes.. as i hate to rembr!!

u really hav no right to medling with somone else's creations... coz in simple wrds "its not urs!😡"

n CV log... why did u let it happn *aatma sammaaaan NAHI hai kya???*😡

no.2. bY GoD CVs.. kyun ki aapne aisa..ek aur dina wait karna parega ab😡😭 i was so ready to watch it tonight🤣 *i mean yest night now*🤣

but thn as i said for t good things... i got to seee ek nahi 😲do beautifully sketched scenes btw Maan *Sir😡* n uski Geet!.. loved it...a zillion times.. n sach mein tats wht happns in a real relationnship... so frm logic point of view i am sooo glad u made me wait! "worth t wait" as we say it... n i hop tomrws ill b too.. without any n i mean *NO absolutely NO* choppings😡 agar maryaada ki baasha samajh mein na aayi... toh kya mein aapke shub charan pad jaaooo??? *huh* koi nai.. bas yehi kehne ke liye "hatt jaa badal... *sir* log zameen pe jo aajaaye*😡🤣see how u made me go😡 btw t good things.. so dont bothr messing!!😡

so errr where was i... oh yea...😍 Maan ki Geeet.. how i loved his possessivness.. i tel u *yea frm personal experience* any girl wud crave for tat frm her MAaN!!😍

but b4 tat.. ehem t whole number scene... i agree tat there wont b any misunderstandings btw em l8r regarding tat issue.. coz simply there cant b any!! n thn t way geet hugged him... u can notice how she was still t apprehensiv pold geet whn he marched forward *ek ek kadam* n she fubbled backward *do do kadam*... n frm there for her to hug him.. yes it was t subtle declaration of lov.. within herself n to her *MAaN* (how i adore him😍) n Cudos to Gurmeet Dhrashti for t perfect execution of t perfect scene!! n CVs n editor😡 log too for not messing up!!( see now-a-days we expect u to mess up!! doesnt tat feel lik *ouch*😡)

t *Maan in white Geet in yellow scene* was perfect... well yea perfect!! coz i hav a blind eye whn it comes to othr color ful namoonaas * did u notice how i must hav been n actually was n is blind to Dev-yra today??😡 if u r fast forwarding there story lin.. why cant i fast forward 'em??eh?? but btw a special mention to pinky... oh i lov her...bttr not put her amidst *blinding cheezon* ok?? n adiii i loved his lov for her... n me... seee how he wastedd no tim in wooshing his gal☺️ frm right under certain somones nose!!😆)... n see how i can drag n drag n still not talk abt certain namoonas...

but i wishh!! i wish geet had said she was buying tat chain n ear ring..

1. coz she looked absolutely gorgeous in it... not tat she didnt in t bangles... but it was more of breattaking.. drashti looked WOW!!😍

n on 2.nd tot.... we wud hav got to watch munda sketching his kudi.. rather thn som chindi *i am blind* log making her wear som chindi things😡... hayeee

ok now tats it.. well tats abrupt i know... but talking abt Maan n uski Geet... i absolutely hav no tim to get ready n catch my bus... n getting ready includes lik everything... so me runns offf.. cya l8r bye...

hugs n lov

resmi😳

PS: i ill copy al of urs n read in bus.. in my chindi n70😭 but i ill😃

Edited by mi7chimes - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Doodlebear - You ripped Mr M...whatever apart 🤣 That was lovely reply in editing topic! I swear I look up to you because you have a great way of getting your point across! It is a true talent! Keep it up!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Faz:- Post your take in Eagle Eye....fast.....today even there also we are bashing him in our takes...

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Posted: 14 years ago
my analysis for those of you online...its also on pg. 1

"Maan ki Geet"


Today's episode was very good, but there is one issue; the terrible editing. Can someone from the channel please explain what you people are in a hurry for? The viewers are not idiots and we can tell that there are scenes being edited out. I also did my research and found out that in fact many important scenes were edited out because of the channels demands. We want to see all the scenes.

Scenes like Maan's complete self-talk after Geet revealed her past to him was cut out. Then Geet's reflection on the proposal was also taken out. We wanted to see these scenes the most and the channel made the Geet team take it out because they are under some notion that all we want to see is half naked heroes all the time. Boy! They are under the wrong impression. We want the story to go forward without taking out any crucial scenes. We want to see character reflections!

Nissar today I have to say that you are a brilliant director. Your vision in creating Geet is impeccable! I know that more than anyone else, you want the story to stay on track and you want to bring out the essence of the story. But it is such a shame that you have to follow the mindless orders of the channel. The entire Geet team makes and outstanding amount of effort to create such great scenes and yet they are edited out because of the channels demands? The channel does not understand the story or characters. Nor do they understand us and what we want to see. They only understand TRP. There is news going around that Starone is making the Geet team edit out important scenes from the show and putting together inconsistent scenes, because they are under some impression that is what we want to see. Here's a news flash for them: THEY ARE WRONG!!!!

Starone let me ask you one thing, where will all you trp's go when the plot of the show has no logic and the fans become fed up with the constant disconnect in the story? Once the plot begins to lose its magic, you will lose your viewers. Even if they love all the romance and half naked heroes, what interest will they have when the show becomes just some random scenes put together?

Apparently there are some political/social groups that are opposing the "Roop tera Mastana" sequence because it may be too bold, or maybe because Geet is not married to Maan. But what do they have to say about the fact that Geet's innocence was taken by Dev? Was that appropriate? But now if she does any romance with her REAL fiance it's a problem? Maan has proved to be Geet's husband in many ways without actually being married. Everything that he does for her, a husband would do for his wife. Remember it is how a person views their relationship with their mind and soul that matters, not what society labels our relationship to be. Geet has accepted Maan with her mind and soul. Their marriage is more a symbolic union of souls than just going to a court and signing a marriage certificate for the sake of society. "Union of souls", now doesn't that sound beautiful?!

Please do not give in to the demand of these social groups as they don't have any idea what they are saying. Instead of tackling the real issues in society, they want to attack a TV show for no reason. they need a reality check and help the women who are suffering instead of trying to ruin a show that sends a great message, which is to allow women to live their life freely. And they want to say they fight for women's right when they are going against it while another women tries to live a happy life, and that too a fictitious character. Now that's a nice way to represent women empowerment; by showing hypocrisy for the same cause they fight! What a bunch of charlatans!

Now with all that said, lets move on with the episode.

Things I loved…

1. Geet has finally told Maan that he is the most important to her. Her doubts are slowly lifting. I liked the firs scene between Maan and Geet.

2. Maan's possessiveness. To all who worry that this may be permanent and too much possessiveness is not good: Relax. This was only to show that Maan really believes Geet "belongs" to him. It was to reassure Geet and to lift her doubts. This was needed to build up to the "Roop tera mastana" scene.

3. Maan saying "Maan ki Geet", I think I died an went to heaven during that entire scene. Gurmeet's brilliant acting was what saved the epi today. He had so much control over that scene it left me speechless. Only because of that scene I was able to ignore the mistakes in the epi.

4.Maan saying "Sirf mere". This was what Geet wanted to hear. It was the key to remove all reservations from her mind. That smile on her face said it all. That was the moment she had been waiting for since the proposal. Now she will be able to give her heart to him completely. We might even get some words of affection form her. I hope there's no holding back when it comes to her feelings now.

5. The dialogues in the "sirf mere" scene was great!

Things I did not like…..

1. The disconnect of the scenes. The trip to Manali seemed rushed. Probably because it was. I felt like the just put together any scenes they wanted. Even if it wasn't consistent. Cv's please take it easy with the pace. We're not running a marathon. Yes, I know channel made you do all the horrible editing. So here's to the channel; let the Geet team do their job. They know exactly what we want. They have a better vision for the show. Unfortunately your vision only sees TRP's so pardon me for thinking you have no right on the creative process for the serial.

2. The crowd in the market was OTT. Since when do people start giving shagun to the bride without actually confirming that there will be a marriage? But I guess it was done to justify Maan saying "Geet will only wear what my grandmother gives her."

Lastly, Cv's do not hold back on what you want to show us on the "Roop tera mastana" scene. We can handle it! Trust me all the viewers want to see the entire thing. Do not edit anything out! WE WANT BOLD SCENES!!!

Here's a few pointers to the channel on what we want….

1. We want both logic and romance.

2. We do not want the channel editing scenes out.

3. We want to see Maan and Geet having matured conversations.

4. We want the story and characters to stay consistent.

5. We want important scenes to stay in the episodes. For example, character reflections.

6. Geet team knows how to do their jobs; now let them do it their way

I'm too exhausted to write anymore.

BTW, Gurmeet looked very debonair today! His acting was mind-blowing in the "Sirf mere" scene.

Over all a good episode.


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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Ann:- Perfect Analysis. I know you are pretty angry today...but still you managed to write so nicely on Maan Ki Geet 👏 👏 👏

@ Faz:- Wonderful take. Loved your 19 reasons why the bold scenes to be shown....Way to go Girl...😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
What happened at the editing dept yesterday? In one scene we see Maan drag Geet after he puts the bangles on her and the next he is pushing his way through the crowd to reach Geet who is being hounded by the client and his relatives. How did she get separated from Maan and land there? I wish they give more attention to the scenes and ensure continuity before they chop. All the hardwork goes waste when the editing is poor.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Someone tell me what I am to do on Halla Bol - me iz having morning blues!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Reposting from Pg 28
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Like Geetakshi says, Aaj hamara dil garden garden ho gaya

Loved to see Geet's first confession and Maan's possessiveness ! Mashaallah !

Kahani us phone # ki
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Maan asks Geet about the phone # where did she get it from.
Geet, hesitant to disclose fibs that maybe it flew into room.
Maan berates Nakul (bechara, bali ka bakra) and asks Geet to make sure that he cleans the rooms well.

Geet feels guilty about lying to Maan. She is stunned, thinking I did not tell him and he still believes me. Me thinks Geet will tell him later because her primary focus is to see Maan happy.

When Maan says they'll be late for the flight, Geet's guilty conscious stops him … Suniye, but diverts by asking if Dadi has been informed. Maan nods, turns to leave. Geet stops him again….suniye ! Maan reads her mind….n asks, do u wann say something Geet ?

Her dupatta stuck in window sill….looks at Maan. Maan seems to be well trained in dupatta rescue, dutifully places bag down n walks towards her…Geet retracing her steps towards window. Maan leans across and loosens dupatta. As he is doing so, Geet places her left hand on Maan's left shoulder…almost hug…Geet is affected by his closeness. Such an adorable scene.

As Maan moves back Geet still retains her hand on his shoulder. Maan looks into her eyes and asks did u call me just to disentangle ur dupatta? Bolo Geet, tumne mujhe kyon bulaya ?

Geet's CONfession
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Aapne mujhe mere ateet ke saath aapki zindagi mein shamil kar liya Mein apse vaada karti hun mein mera atteet aapke aure mere beech kabhi nahin aane doongi;
Kyun ki aaj aap se badkhar mere liye kuch nahin.

Maan is floored. Maan toh kya, I had difficulty lifting my jaw from the floor. Haila, kudi's first confession. That's what ur munda had been waiting to hear from you Geet.

Maan lifts her chin n says paata hai Geet aaj pehili baar tunhari aankhon ne nahin tumne kuch bola hai.
Geet smiles at him with her heart in her eyes….and slowly caresses his shoulder. Haiiiyeee rabba !!!!!!!

Flight from D to M – I did not find this funny….have you ever traveled on a trans atlantic 16 hour flight ? Pataa hai, this chalti phirti picture in the plane keeps my sanity ….LOL !!!

A jhalak of Maan's adorable possessiveness….oohh yeah !!!!
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Scene - Manali market place, very cheerful. Maan is lost in looking Geet wondering what magic shes done. He does not seem to tire looking at her.…. work ko maro goli… but unable to take my eyes off her. What is going on ? Oye, munde you have a serious case of Lovaria !

Geet is enjoying the market place. After a while Geet asks Chalien? Maan embarrassed at being interrupted takes refuge in anger…so Mr Rawal called us here…I think u made a mistake on purpose so I don't take my eyes off u !

Ae lein, kudi chup rahegi, HP ki punjaban hain. Wo bhi toot padi….

Geet says– and u made me come here to yell at me. Look around u, people r smiling, happy ! why cant u be like that ?

A guy bumps into her and retraces step staring at her….Maan bitten by the green-eyed monster, shuffles her outta there and says stay here or lets go.

Geet at wit's end says why don't u take an allergy pill…if u see someone smiling, take one, problem kam ho jayegi … good one Geet….ROFL !

M takes her away from there and bumps into a local budhdha turns out to be Mr Rawal. Oh, Mr K, he says…I was lost in wadiyon ke geet mein (ley , yeh bhi dialogue maarne lagaa) M staaarrrrrreeesssssss him down. Surma lagaa ke, Maan ki ankhen bhi badi pyaari… I mean ….khatarnaak lag rahi thee ……<giggling>

Mr R says to Geet - u r here..charimgn voice, more beautiful than ur voice….budhdha saal line marofying…Maan totally uncomfy….sends Geet off to go site seeing.

G confused but leaves. Moves her open hair to the front. Open back. Budhdha ghooring, Maan upset, goes to Geet, shields her from back , moves her hair (bade pyaaaaaar se) to the back.
Geet askes confusedly, what now u have an issue with my hair ?
Maan – Geet tum jaao !

KC – Deveera trying to dig out more info on Geet
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Pinky happy she got her job back. Adi says Geet ka kamal else Maan has never changed his mind.

Great dialogue from Adi – Maan ka mood from 'Happy mood to Hitler mood'

Geet Sirf Meri hai !!! Oye mere sher ke pattha, yeh hui na baat !
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(M = Maan, R= Rawal G= Geet)
M talking to R abt food processing plant, R lost in ghooring G who is trying out earrings.
M p****d off at R,
R asks where is G from?
M – HP…. Continues talking
R – since when is she working 4 u ?
M – no talking abt my employees
R – but ppl must be talking abt her
M – idk, but why u asking abt her ?
R – Nothing SHAADI KARWANI HAI
M – SHAADI !!!, IMPOSSIBLE, CAN'T BE !!!!!!!!
M rushes to G…n says.lets go..
G - but I'm buying bangles.
M puts one bangle after another on Geet ….hint hint…completion of circle reader !
R watching frm distance
G confused…M forcing bangle. G in pain, M stops and caraesses her hand
R shocked !

Mahiiiiiii !!!!

M do u want anything else ?
G - No,
M pays bill and takes G's hand with such rightfulness and authority and leaves with her.
M stops when he hears folks talking abt 'Bunty key liye babli'…. Bunty turns out to be the boy who bumped into her, Rs son !
M watching, p****d.
Old lady in crowd places shagun on G's forehead. G shocked
Old lady blesses her…jewel looks good on u, she says
R asks son did u like girl ?
G tries to interrupt
M, has had enuff, EXCUSE ME he says and rips open the crowd.
Pulls G towards him.

M - Yeh aankhen sirf sagar ki tarah saaf nahhi hai'. Yeh ankken bina kuch bole kisi ka bhi dard aur dil ke baatein padh leti hai. Inhe samajne ke liye dimaag ki nahin, dil ki zaroorat padti hai.

Hai, kay bola….apun bola tu meri laila !!! Kkkkk…Vandana becoming serious….

R stumped !
M – she is definitely an achchi dulhan, par bunty ki nahin, G ka naam bunty ke saath nahin,MAAN KE SAATH ACHCHA LAGTA HAI …MAAN KI GEET < hai, mein mar jawaaan>

Mahiii !!!!!!

M takes off old lady's shagun, G will not wear this but will wear what my dadi gives her and returns old lady's jewel
R – What do u mean ?
M – G sabko meaning batayegi. Bolo G, batao sabko, mera kehne ka kya matlab…aj tak mein sabko batatey ayah hoon, ab tumhari baari hai, bolo G
G looks down shyly, mum.

M lifts her ring finger and shows them …GEET MSK KI MANGETAR HAI. Folks shocked.
M – pulls Geet more closer and says, SIRF MERI, SIRF MERI MANGETAR HO ….< hai mein mar jawaaan….again >
M takes G turns and leaves with her, still holding her hand. Geet looking at him adoringly as she walks

Deveera – 2 .....kabab mein haddi
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Deveera call Pinky to Sasha's cabin to find out about Geet. Pinky tells them that Geet is still very much working for KC but is outta town for a couple days. Adi sensing something wrong, interrupts and takes Pinky away. <Adi probably remembers NT fishing for G info, now its Deveera ….hmmmm…..dal mein kuch kala zaroor hai >

Precap - Roop tera mastana

Awesome episode. Perfect direction, a little shaky dubbing when Maan talks about Geet's aankhen.

Splendid acting by Gurmeet and Drashti….guys u have raised my expectation for tomorrow….take it up another notch !

Dil mera garden garden ho gaya :-))))))) Giving duvaayein to Nissar, Barry, Swati, GC and Drashti !!!

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