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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Marsh

No still working on it. It needs more oomph. 😆 😆 😆

I got distracted and wrote 3 poems on poor editing instead. 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
guys m sigging off now..damn tired..did halla bol..m at my aunt's place came here to study n m on lappy since evening😳 😆 so i shud read now😳
@marshmellow u better write something nice n post on thread plus post on geet n everywhere(sbs,starone) n mail too..use ur spamming ability😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Bye Gargi!! See you later!!🤗
I will write something Awesome and PM you!! 😃

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Posted: 14 years ago
Marsh - Now is the best time to put your spamming talents to good use! Spam all those emails and contacts Arwen gave on my thread.

I'm going now....I'll ttyl.
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Marsh...you are just NOW noticing it?? Talk about tubelight!! 🤣🤣🤣

@Jhan...loved your poems! Great work girl!!👏

@Ann....Great Going!! i am loving the Halla Bol!!👏
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Posted: 14 years ago

I added my 2 cents in the halla bol thread....Shall add more when I am back.

Thanks for telling me about it.
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For those who are online:-

"The Moment – Maan's Parineeta Geet" – Part XXIV – You belong only to me

Yelloooo all my Friends, Devils, CVs, Star, Mr. Mirchandani and Nissar. You know it's a bright and sunny day here. It seems today even Mother Nature wanted to celebrate with me on this successful day. Another couple of days we need wait for Parineeta Completion. Am I happy??? Oh. Yeah. Just perfect on how Nissar completed all the loops here. Its all about Parineeta Metaphor and Nissar's Brilliance today. Kudos to you Nissar and your entire team for carrying out the Parineeta Metaphor theory flawlessly.

Before I start talking about certain issues I need to clarify the doubts of certain fans that are still having difficulty in understanding the exact meaning of Parineeta Metaphor Theory. It is not about the full consummation. This is all about the SUBMISSION to one another in SOUL which is very important here. I just hope that Maan mentions that Geet is his "Parineeta" because since Nissar opened the circle when Neha explained the meaning of Parineeta when she said her name. So, I hope Nissar completes the circle here too.

They will be ONE in Heart and Soul. Entire Physical Submission is not very important but the heart and soul submission to one another is important and that will happen only when there will be partial CON. That is actually Parineeta Theory.

So, let's talk about the issue here. Another Milestone was achieved but I must my mood was ruined by the Officials of Star One and Mr. Mirchandani. Didn't I tell you earlier Nissar that I want you to be firm and strict when it comes to the decision on what scenes should be edited and what not before it is aired??? This is yours prerogative and how do you let the Channel to decide what to air and what not??? They know the flow of the story but do they really know what the brainstorming that goes behind each scene??? Tell me??? I know the work that you and your team go through each day. I know the changes that been made and what is the reason behind each scene. The channel definitely bothers about the story and I don't deny that but the main thing they bother is about the TRPs. Without the TRP they cannot earn the revenue. Get that. For them it is not important how each scene is moving ahead. For the channel it is important how they can pull the sponsorships and how they can approach the advertisers and to approach the advertisers they need to show data (TRP) and for the data they want to compromise on the story line. But at the end of the day tell me whose hardwork is being chopped off??? It's your's and your teams'. Get that. They won't be bothered later on about the quality of work you do but it should bother to you. Again I am telling you never ever suppress yourself under anyone's demands. Why??? It will affect your future only. Whenever in future you will showcase your work what will you show??? You can only show those works that's been aired and not the work that's been edited. Isn't it??? Why compromise??? Please stand for yourself and your work.

Now I will talk something to Mr. Mirchandani. You know this week and next week would have been the most perfect week for us but you and your team screwed up in a pathetic way. I thought you have a wonderful vision because otherwise you wouldn't have come out with such a nice concept in Geet HSP. Yes. I adored your vision completely but now I don't. Sorry it may hurt you as I am being very crude here but I am serious. I thought that besides having Hawk Eye you have a very wonderful vision and now I see you have proved me so wrong. When you all supported me in not expanding Neha Jhulka's (Pari) entry with the foolish storyline you really had earned all the respect. We don't know each other but you still have understood the "Parineeta Metaphor" and approved the concept when Nissar and team had presented you the same. But, I am sorry I was so wrong there. Now I know that you never approve anything just because it's a good concept or beneficial to the story line but you approve because you only see the revenue in a certain story line and the TRP and the sponsorships that it can gain out if it. But when you see that certain times you don't get the TRPs as you are willing then you start taking over the scenes. And while doing that you don't even realize what it all goes while building a storyline. I know that you are here not for Social Service but for Business. At the same time I know that even while doing business you can also maintain the story line in an intelligent manner. But you think of those demands who don't even contribute to the TRPs and the story line. Yes, you can talk about me also. I don't contribute any TRP to you but since I cannot do that I try to contribute in some other way. That is why I contribute my ideas and concept to make this series a masterpiece so that people can remember this series for ever the way people still give examples of Buniyaad, Hasratein etc.

At the same time don't even think that I don't understand business and I don't want that you reach the breakeven point. Please I do know that. All I am saying is even continuing good story line you can do business and can increase the TRPs. Don't you believe in that??? I really didn't like when you edited out Maan's self analysis. When Nissar had shot all the scenes then post truth revealation scenes then why did you and your team had cut them??? Just because of TRPs. Why you think that there won't be any romance scenes and that is why your TRPs will be down??? Isn't that a foolish thinking??? Tell me.

I know very well how Nissar works and today many have understood how his mind also works and in which direction. But why don't you have FAITH in Nissar and his team??? Tell me. They have sletched Maan's analysis after the truth revealation and you all went ahead and had edited the scenes. Didn't you realize that those scenes were so necessary for the story line to justify in future why Maan will never misunderstood Geet??? Just tell me how a normal human being can accept the fact his love is carrying someone else's child in just a day??? I hope you know the human emotions and believe in Logic. But alas you don't??? leave alone Nissar you didn't even realize that even Gurmeet and Drashti and other team members have worked hard for these scenes and when Nissar had shot these scenes then he did it for a purpose. Why then didn't you take into consideration those efforts??? Don't you know that Nissar won't shot a scene unless it is necessary to the story line? Mr. Mirchandani, you should have kept belief in him. Maan's breakdown scene was one of the most important scenes in the story and also his self analysis. You even edited the cliff scene??? WTH??? Being such a high profile how could you not understand the intricacies of these scenes??? Tell me??? That is the reason why everybody including me thought that there was no consistency in the characters??? But I am soo glad that even then also I didn't blame Nissar at all and then and there I realized that it was not his fault but rather it was your fault. I remember after the railway scene also I told Nissar to stay firm on what he did and not give in to your demands. But I believe since you are the client and that is why he had to listen to you. Otherwise you were also ready to edit yesterday's water scene too. This is absolutely ridiculous Mr. Mirchandani. Just not done. I didn't even expect this from you. I thought even if the team is not sensible atleast you are sensible. Then there are certain episodes where I said that it will not pass the six sigma tests. And I am so sure now why I it won't pass the six sigma tests. How will it pass tell me??? When you curtail down the flow of the story then how in the world you expect that it will have the continuity??? Don't think that only you have to run the business and only you need to answer your bosses; here everybody have to answer their bosses and run their business. The way you need to answer your boss in the same way even Nissar needs to answer his boss; the same way now you need to answer the viewers. So, now you see that we are answerable to each other.

What you think that only showing romance will give you the TRPs??? Then why DMG and MJHT is not the No. 1 show in your channel??? Then why the viewers who watch these shows are bored of the same scenes again and again??? What you think how long you can run the show with only romance??? Why then DMG's TRP is not crossing the limit of 0.5??? Tell me??? You think I don't have the data??? Yes I do have. And Geet's TRP is way high than DMG and MJHT and RBO. Even much better than Imagines'. But still you need to screw up the story line??? What was the rush of completion for Parineeta Metaphor??? Tell me??? Couldn't you wait for a week??? You should have let Nissar sketch the character growth properly and not you doing it. He needs to show the completion of Parineeta Metaphor because he knows how to justify when the completion will happen. It just cannot come out of the blue. You need to have the proper setting for that and you need to have the story to move forward in that direction. Think logically and then answer me??? You should have let Nissar do his job. Does Nissar do your job??? Tell me??? Then why do you interfere in his job??? He also knows that you need TRPs and he is not doing social service here. Mind it. He knows that his job will be gone if he doesn't deliver TRPs.

So, my only point is he knows that when the character needs a self analysis and when the lead pair need a mature talk between them. And you even curtail the scenes out from the episode??? What was the need for completion of Parineeta Metaphor this Friday??? You should have kept it for next Friday. All in all you are so hugngry for TRPs that you even couldn't wait for the lead pair to have the mature conversation before they move in to doing mature scenes. Logically you should have started promoting the promo this Friday night and aired the episode next Thursday or Friday evening. By that time you would have generated the interest in the viewers and also the TRPs would have been generated and also the story would have seemed logical. But NO. You won't listen and I know very well that after reading my analysis you will just have a laugh and thinking that I am a fool and don't know your job and the situation you are in. Laugh loud I don't mind but you know what I know that you don't have the courage to fight your own battle and you also don't have the confidence in yourself that you tell the "Mahila Mukti" organizations and the Politicos that what you are airing on TV is no way any kind of vulgarity and that it is needed in the storyline and the concept. See this is your inner strength and still you want to laugh at me for telling so many things to you then you are very much welcome. We all know in what position you all are in but what you do not understand that even though you are under tremendous pressure you need to be firm in the stand that you should not compromise the quality of your products. Like you all have compromised the quality of DMG and see now how a crap it has become. Do you even see any mature viewers who watch these serials??? Tell me. Just mind that do not take any such decisions in life which will lead you to such a situation when you cannot even do a damage control. Remember this. Think of doing a quality work and don't run after the TRPs. It will automatically come once you do an excellent job.

Just remember this quote which was in 3 Idiots:-

"The unfortunate truth is that the system forces people to pursue success rather than excellence. But if you pursue excellence, success is bound to follow."


Let us start with today's analysis. Well I may not go into the scene details today as my analysis is already pretty long because of the issues that I had discussed above. So, I will be brief in my analysis.

What do I talk today??? I don't have anything to write. Today for the first time I am floored by everything and only one thing that bothered me is the Jealousy scene sketch which was so lame and OTT. I just didn't understand why the scene was so lame.

Firstly, while writing the scene the CVs should have atleast understood the character of MSK. Atleast Nissar you should have noticed naa??? Tell me why in the hell Maan Singh Khurana would feel jealous of a cartoon like Bunty??? When you are comparing 2 characters then you should realize their comparison compatibility. The jealousy factor is very justifiable here both in the the love story and also for Parineeta Completion. So, tell me one thing why in the first place you have drawn a jealousy track like this??? At least you should have used your brain naa??? Do I need to give the example here???

The scene sketch was so OTT??? Atleast you should have made the client as sophisticated as MSK then it would have been justifiable for us to swallow the jealousy track. The dcor was really good but the sketching was really pathetic. There was no reason for maan to be jealous of that cartoon character. Anyway what I wanna say is that even the Shagun thing was also not convincing. This was one major issue that was in the episode. Now will talk about the the rest of the fantastic episode. I wanted to elaborate but since my analysis is already long so, will go by the points here:-

Let us talk about the title:-

"The Moment – Maan's Parineeta Geet" – You belong only to me

The best part of today's episode when Maan and Geet said to each other that "You belong to me". This is the entire essence of today's episode.

Many steps ahead in Parineeta Metaphor:-

Yes, those who are already following my analysis I think they already know that earlier I think last week I have mentioned about how Nissar's mind work. Yes I hope all of you remember that I said Nissar will complete the circle of the following things that he started:-

I said all these in the 20th Sep. analysis.

1. Maan on his knees for Geet (the one started on Friday --- So this is completed

2. Maan's dialogue of "I thought you were mine" will be completed by Maan making Geet his own.

3. Geet's dialogue of "Maine use apna maan liya tha" here Geet will explain the difference between like and love and that what she feels for Maan is actually love.

4. The bangle which he broke on the fake engagement night which was used to break off his first marriage


Hmmm. Didn't I mention to you all that Maan's statement of "I thought you were mine" will be completed in the future episodes by Maan making Geet his own. Exactly see that is how I know Nissar. Today Maan did the same thing in Manali but stating infront of all that she is only his. Yes, he did say this "Sirf Meri". He owned her today. Didn't I tell you I love Possessive and Persuasive Men? This is what MSK is all about.

The best part of today's scene was the outhouse scene. Yes, many may think that Geet had lied but I will say no she didn't. She just avoided and yeah even if this is a lie, then also I will defend her as any lie which is good for someone then that lie is ok to me. But still the best part was today's declaration of love by Geet. Wasn't it good??? And didn't I tell you that she will complete the circle of the statement that she had said in the locked conference room episode. Yes, she did today. That day she said that "Maine use apna maan liya tha" to Maan when she talked about Dev and then Maan was completely shocked but then today she declared to Maan that "No one is important to her above him". I must say that Barry did such a wonderful job today the entire episode. I loved the scene where Maan said that for the first time not her eyes but she herself has spoken. That was like WOW.

These above two lines are also can be named as "Parineeta" lines. The gists of both the lines are 'You are mine".

Did you all notice when Geet was declaring her love then the moonlight was on Maan's face. That was kind of symbolic. You know why??? I thought Geet entering his life is like a bright light and she will shine his life in future. Nissar had always shown these Moonlight and darkness relation in this love story and so I think that this also should be symbolic.

Let us talk the bangle scene. Well I hope all remember the bangle broken scene in the fake engagement night where Maan actually breaks the bangles while twisting Geet's wrist. Now that time I mentioned that it was symbolic as Maan broke off Geet's first marriage so that these two can be binded in the Holy Matrimony of Souls. Now, today Maan had put on the bangles on Geet's hand indicating their starting the journey of a new life. What the most I loved about the bangle scene is how Maan paid the money with full authority. That scene really amazed me today. So, this scene was also part of Parineeta Metaphor.

Well here goes one IMPORTANT THING about the Parineeta Story. In the original story, When Sekhar's MOM talks about his marriage in the end scene he says to MOM that Lolitha is her Daughter –in -Law and then tells Lolitha to do the "Pronam" (touching her feet) and take the blessing from his MOM. Here, Maan says to all that Geet will wear what ever his Dadima will give her which is a kind of blessing. This is not related to the "Parineeta Metaphor" theory but definitely it was in the original novel by Sarat Chandra Chattopadhyay. I think Nissar and team did this thing purposefully or may be it's just a scene.

Then we completed the emotional Vows of 7th Vachan today.

7th Vachan
Seventh Vachan is the last phera which adds completion to the ritual of seven pheras. In seventh Phera , Bride & Bridegroom plead for a joy full life. The couple begs the god for a long lasting bond enriched with good understanding, loyalty and companionship. They pledge to bear the relationship with love and honesty. The couple invokes and also prays for universal peace as well as social welfare.


Well the 7th Vachan was completed when Maan and Geet exchanged that they will take their relationship with Love and Honesty and then they made each other their own.

Apart from the entire Parineeta Episode I loved how Adi was so protective of Geet and Maan. I will talk about Dev's role as I need to think over it properly. Today I didn't have the time to think over it. Yes, in future it shows that he will be the shield when the problem will start to resurface these two love birds and we can more and more of Adi's role in Maan and Geet's life.

Tomorrow will be crucial if Nissar and Mr. Mirchandani decide to complete the Parineeta Metaphor. I just hope they don't Goof Up. Again I am saying that "Parineeta Metaphor" is not about the full consummation. This is all about the SUBMISSION to one another in SOUL which is very important here. They will be ONE in Heart and Soul. Entire Physical Submission is not very important but the heart and soul submission to one another is important and that will happen only when there will be partial CON. That is actually Parineeta Theory.

Overall a Fantastic Episode yet a little illogical in the jealousy scene part of the Episode.

Over to you all to join the discussion. Feel free to shoot me:-

P.S. Here is the link for "Eagle Eye - Constructive Criticism" for 23rd Sep. Pl Join in the discussion and post your views on the same:-

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Posted: 14 years ago
I went crazy, same thing on PG 1! 🤣

RESERVEDDDDDDD NT I MISS YOU🤣🤣

I'm missing Churail....I mean Naintara dearly Where's our bheegay naina? BRING HER BACK 😡

Anyways To the Geet Team 😉 and especially Star One Channel,😳 I won't be presenting much of an analysis on the episode today! We have some very talented analysists here who can do a better job than me 😆 My reason for posting today is regarding Maneet & also about the way Geet is being handled in the Donkey Race of gaining TRPs!
Firstly Loved today's episode, (EVEN IF IT WAS RUSHED😡) it was nice to see MSK in his old possessive avatar, its always a wonder to see him like that 😉 I would loveee to see Geet act posessive over Maan in the future 😳 Be it in Samira's case or any other way...how about with Sasha? 😉
Best bit was Maneet talking and Geet for the first time telling Maan (indirectly) that she indeed has accepted him and he will always be her first priority 😳 Also Maneet romance in Manali 😳 What can I say? This couple always had me going insane with their romance 😆😳😉
Let's get to the IMPORTANT points then shall we?

20 Reasons for Why BOLD Maneet Passionate Romance should be shown!

1 - Pretty Obvious...its our Demand!
2 - Passsion is a powerful emotion, referring to ardent love; Maneet are in that phase of their relationship where passion is needed! So show it!
3 - My personal belief is that Maneet's Romance can obliterate any couple on TV which is termed as "HAWT"
4 - TRPs will skyrocket!
5 - Maneet changed our Shareef Status to NON Shareef status - so GIVE US WHAT WE WANT!
6 - The BOLDER the better, we are a very open minded audience!
7 - Show us some real romance for once, we don't want to watch Maneet and think it has a PG rating!
8 - I doubt Geet is watched by 10 year olds therefore no giving us blurred scenes or cutting them off completely! It isn't Cartoon Network!
9 - We don't wanna see PuppyDog Lovin'! Its on every other channel, show us something different, something more intimate and realistic!
10 - Maneet are already balanced with their emotional bond, all thats missing is the Physical bonding...do you see where I'm going with this?
11 - Maneet are mesmerizing, we want them to captivate us audience once again with their romance!
12 - Maneet can create magic that I have never seen another couple on TV create...so what are you waiting for? Show us Maneet Magic!
13 - Don't think about Maneetians taking offence, we love seeing Maneet with logical romance and this is it!
14 - Quote: "My soul yearns for you every moment of every day." Remind you of Maneet yet?
15 - Maneet are in Manali, its winter, you can get cold & need to maintain your body temperature! Even nature is telling Maneet to get together, so why fight it?
16 - Maneet are alone together...it'll inevitably lead to more conversation, sharing and intimacy. Being holed up with someone for long periods of time is a natural catalyst to getting close on a deeper level!
17 - Maneet will submit themselves to each other later on anyway, so why not show us an sensous intimate start?
18 - Want Maneet's Fanbase to get bigger? Well I dunno if you got a clue yet...oh wait its in the title!
19 - Shakespeare once said "Be not afraid of Greatness." Well why not take a cue from the Greatest writer in English language?
20 - Read all 19 above and GIVE US WHAT WE WANT! Maneet going all out, bold romance, without cuts or poor editing!
Now coming to the channels recent mishaps; editing out great, logical Maneet scenes! Well I hope your willing to put up with the destruction that will cause not only in terms of the TRPs but also the fans faith in the channel (not the Geet CVs, they have been more than wonderful to us fans) I blame the channel & its stupidty!
In the Gadha Game of TRPs please do NOT ruin GUSP! This show is one of the best that Star One has produced so far, editing out logic, rushing scenes, competiting is going to devour GHSP! Look at what's happened to other Star One shows that havent managed to gain TRPs due to the exact reason: Gadha TRPs Game! Learn from your past mistakes and stop trying to butcher Geet's logical aspect in your bid to get TRPs!
Geet was always fast paced but it was constant & made sense, it moved fast but at a good pace in a good way! The pace of Geet's journey in HP all the way to Geet moving to Delhi was really refreshing than seeing the usual drag fest in other shows. It was intriguing & exciting to watch! That is the sole reason why I have stuck to GHSP like glue till now because it didn't disappoint me nor bored me! But now seeing my favourite couple being rushed in scenes and cutting out scenes, which us audience could link back to the characters feelings & situations is not justifiable! You must not destroy Geet! I think this is the only show on Star One which is doing well meaning that you should cherish it like no other, be extra careful with how you edit it & not just chop and drop scenes! Those are the signs of a simpleton!
Believe it or not, we the audience do have braisn which we use to make sense of the story in Geet but when loads of links are missing between the character (SCENES BEING CUT OFF...moving forward without any connection) then it makes it hard for us to relate back to the characters or understand their feelings or even the storyline! You simply cannot cut out good connecting scenes and expect us to take it lightly like all the utter crap on other channels! Have more faith in the Geet Team as they have done exceptionally well with GHSP! I think the Geet Team needs to be more involved in whats shown as opposed to just coming up with storylines and waiting on the channel to decide what's shown! That is truly unfair to them as they have worked hard to get Geet where it is today, they have a vision, let them follow through with it without holding them back! Freedom of Creativity as they say!
Another part that has managed to ruin every Maneet Bonding scene is cutting in with Dev-Meera scenes! Although their scenes are good and quite logical, you should not just throw any chunk inbetween Maneet scenes. It completely throws off the atmosphere that Maneet scenes create! One minute your feeling great about Maneet's understanding and BAM the next you get slapped with a Half Naked Dev popping out of nowhere feeling guilty ONCE AGAIN! Can we have consistancy in all characters and not just repeating the same thing over and over and over again with the same characters! It does get boring...and leads to a drag fest! Perneet has been fabulous since she entered, I hope to see her character grow more!
As for the Groups which are forcing you to stop showing certain scenes between couples, well TOUGH! We don't live in the 18th century, this is the 21st Century where the audience has learnt to be more open minded! And if they are worried about the younger audience, then children shouldn't be watching dramas in the first place! Rather it is up to the parents to see what their kids watch or don't watch! So the channel should not get forced into changing the storylines or cutting scenes of the Number 1 show GHSP in order to satisfy these backward people & their utterly absurd claims about such scenes! A show cannot be number one if you don't show us the original storylines! It cannot be number one if everything comes back to the same thing. It cant stay number 1 if instead of using your brains you use your chopper for potentially great scenes! On the contrary it becomes a "filler" show where the logic, the romance, the concept is missing and all we see is random repeats of the same old things which lose their charm if repeated many a times in order to gain popularity! If you want to experiment do so with other show but leave GHSP! If other shows aren't doing so well, axe them and air new shows which will get you the TRPs! Stop ruining GHSP for the sake of us fans please!
Again my advice is STOP RUSHING, us Geetians are very calm and loyal fans, we do not mind seeing the characters grow at a pace but again be careful, being too slow may turn into a drag fest!
I think this is all I have to say for now, I shall more if need be!
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