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Posted: 15 years ago
@Swati: Thank you!!! I had fun writing that one!! 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
@An-🤗👏

One blind editor
See how he chops
See how he chops
He chops off the bottom and the top
Cleans them away with a magical mop
He cuts them to bits with a carving knife
Why cant he stop and get a life
That one blind editor.
That one blind editor.

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

@Arwen: Episode was great! They all had new looks, almost all of them..But man Finn just looks so different and SO wrong with that hair colour...😆 Lots of stuff were going on in the first episode...Cut it short, they were recruiting new members into the Glee club after coming back from Summer vacation...😆




i saw a preview clip on FB before the episode aired ... so knw abt the recruitment 😆 are the new recruits any good or those actors havent been revealed yet?

and how were the songs?
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Posted: 15 years ago
@ An not only they cheated the viewers, they also cheated the artists for their hard work too! 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago

Episode was good in parts.....

Awful editing and silly client sequence.....1 minute mein bahu mil gayi n he declared to the world....totally over the top.
I loved Maan's possessiveness totally...trying to protect his girl. I actually like the love sick Maan today...am I being crazy here????😲
Geet's confession was superb...better than saying I love you...to me at least. Such meaningful deep words touched my heart😳 I like how she calls me...."Suniye" awwwww😍 cute! How he knows she is trying to say something to him and actually encourages her to speak what's in her heart. Geet doesn't even look in his eyes when saying that as if his eyes will prevent her from speaking her mind.
I need to watch the epsiode again with a better video quality.....can anyone help???
My 2 cents....
But I don't want any misunderstanding due to the phone number lie. Secondly I don't want Dev-Geet-Maan confrontation so soon.....
Maan must do some research on his own too....
EDITNG SUCKS! Big time
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Posted: 15 years ago
Guys, my take
page 1..



Hey everyone!

This was an important episode wasn't it?HAd to show Geet's confession, and Maan's acceptance of the fact that she is HIS now

It started off being so so beautiful..

We know how awesome the TEAM is...Everyone works so so hard and gives their 100 per cent...only to have their creative vision CHOPPED by people who don't even TRY to understand what that vision is.

I feel extremely sad for the story that seems now to be going in some directions and yet managing to be hanging by a thread.

Chopping off of important scenes, conversations BREAKS the flow of the narrative and gives a whole new meaning to scenes, to relationships.

The poignancy of the scenes can't come across if a segment doesn't have connect with the segment before and after.

We know how much pressure the channel is reeling under...but we feel editing NEEDS to be done sensibly...keeping in mind the story and the CREATIVE VISION

We had a great episode yesterday- a beautiful one.
We had a great beginning today..but then- it was disconnected.

This show is highly popular and TRP's are therefore extremely important, but then, if the channel doesn't realize that TRP's will come if there's a story...it's a kind of suicide.

Please please, it's an earnest request from ALL OF US to not chop off important scenes which make the show meaningful.

Like the coming up sequence- BOLD scenes will FETCH TRP's so...our request is to show it all properly..
It's a very very important turn in the story- and it MUST be treated and SHOWN as such

Now to the episode

A lot of loops were closed today.
A lot of symbols completed.




Geet lied.
then realized that he trusts her. And tried to tell him.
But was stopped ..Dupatta.

Future vision- DEV will be crushed by MAAN!!

NAkul came back in name! Bring him back fo' real!!😉

Geet's suniye is back again!!
Liked it!

Maan- Geet, kuchh kehna chahti ho?

She is stopped by her dupatta isn't she?
Her past holds her back...

Geet's past- her honor STUCK while she is straddling her PAST and her FUTURE in her present

Geet calls Maan to release her dupatta...and ends up hugging him..

I LOVED IT!!

HEre's a poem to express what I felt then-

come my love, to the cooling grove,
let me shower my moonbeams of love,
let me hold you and rest my head a while,
let me see the same love reflected in your eyes

Geet- being the moonlight here

1.under the blessings of the moon Goddess Diana.
Completes the loop of Chand-taqdir dialogue

And the shining engagement ring was sone pe suhaga

She hugged him...kudi ne definite chance maar litta...

And she confessed-
And such a beautiful confession it was-
Drashti was FABULOUS!!👏👏
GC- your expressions!!👏👏

He doesn't hug her back- why?
because he needs to be sure now..right?

and she gives him this confidence- she gives him the reassurance

"main mere aur aapke beechh mein apne ateet ko kabhi nahi aane doongi"
"kyun ki aaj aapse badh kar mere liye kuchh bhi nahi"

That is all Maan wants to hear.
For the first time- the girl has talked about her feelings...for the first time, she lowers her eyes, and SPEAKS out all that there is in her heart👏

LOVED Maan's dialogue here!

If her eyes are a reflection of her hear- her eyes fill up, her heart is overflowing with love for him!

Geet hugging Maan was beautiful!!
Last couple of times she did it- in the rain- she saw in him as a source of comfort, then it was by chance(when she was falling off stairs), then she just couldn't help herself during 100th epi

Today it was deliberate- and she hugs him with HAQ

Manali sequence

Seriously, it is my fave fave place...and yeh kyaa kiya??

MAp se seedha MARKET mein??

Poor guy- he still doesn't understand why he cannot concentrate on anything..

But he shouldn't be asking this now na?I thought he was over his phase of not knowing...

I guess this was just to pin-point the desire he feels and cannot help but show now..
but those eyes..😍

I still liked this scene..

STUPID SCENE CHOPPERS!!

Anyway- Maan getting jealous of that Bunty(who looked GAY by the way!)
Aw..was cute

he drags her and says
"geet tum yahan khadi raho"
😆

Drashti looked Beautiful today!
I don't blame Rawal!- She does resemble and have that charm of Madhubala ji..😊
I liked it...didn't seem bad.

Maan was especially adorable today!!😳

and then he became possessive..more about that later!

Adi-Pinky scene

Won't say much but it was all v v rushed.
UFFF

Dev-meera were sensible till yday..suddenly they have become detectives...ughh

Seriously...DIdn't like it...wasn't required at all

Adi stopped pinky na...I think it was intentional of him..
LOVE you ADI!🤗
Pinky was cute!

BACk to Business

MAan finally comes to his senses when someone else talks about Shaadi regarding Geet...

HE now sees the need to make her his na..

Bangle scene becomes symbolic here..he hurts her and gently apologizes for that hurt too by caressing her hand

This also symbolic?
A girl's hona waala hubby making her wear bangles..
hurting her in the process...is it symbolic of a kind of consummation?
😳
Anyway, i could see the link with the epi where he BROke her chhoodis while holding her back.
This time, he makes her wear them.

but What I didn't like was that he needed a wake up call to really put um...his seal of possessiveness over her so that no one could DARE even think of taking her away from him.

She therefore becomes his.

I would like to curb my feminism a bit here and say that perhaps when Maan had given himself to Geet in that ring scene where he bent on his knees and placed the ring on her hand..saying my life is in your hands- I'm yours.

this was him telling her that she is also his.
She has already shown her haq on him in the Outhouse scene today by hugging him.
MAan labels her as HIS on the basis of the confidence that SHE has given him.
Therefore perhaps, It is possessiveness but it isn't treating her like a possession.
😳
GEET-SIR BOLNA BAND KAROOO

😡😡

One moment he is walking with her- the next she is in the middle of a crowd surrounded and random people putting maang teeka on her..??

This was too OTT

DA SCENE!!

WOW...seriously..Now that I have come to a sort of reconciliation with his possessiveness...extremely powerful dialogue here!!

"yeh aankhein sirf saagar ki tarha shaant nahi hain. Yeh kisi ka hi dard aur dil ki baatein padh leti hain. Inhe samajhne ke liye dimaag nahi, dil ki zaroorat hoti hai"

"geet ka naam bunty ke saath nahi, maan ke saath achha lagta hai"

👏⭐️
Barry ji ne kya dialogue likha hai...hum sabke dil ki baat!!👏

Remember the outhouse scene where he asked Geet if she was scared of joining her name with his.

Today, he isn't insecure.
Today, he KNOWs, cuz she has given him the surity- today...they are joined in name for REAL
Maan has joined their name...and he wants Geet to also confirm it
"Maan ki Geet"

Links of course to The dialogue that made us exhaust 5 dens!

"Mujhe laga tum sirf meri ho"

She is HIS.
HE makes her HIS today.

He is more aware of her feelings, he understands her now.
PErhaps that is why she smiles a bit- CUZ today- HE understands that she is his and well..she knows he is hers.

But Maan KI Geet is all well and good(tum mere hoooo) but..wouldn't

MAan Aur Geet be more..um...equal...

HIs public confession has happened...
It's HEr turn to claim him now

But she doesn't say it.
IT needs time.
Maan- WOO her now!! FLoor her more than ever!!😳

So, he makes a public and private declaration

"Geet MAan Singh Khurana ki mangetar hai"

I like the sound and the pride of this.
this wasn't pride in his name.
this was pride in the fact that GEET is his mangetar.

And I like besides how cleverly the name was joined,
Geet Maan Singh Khurana...
HEr future name..😉

And then the private one-
"sirf meri"
"srif meri mangetar"

While the public man MAAN Khurana has made his declaration and publicly joined his name to hers- HE now becomes just Maan

The Maan he has become because of Geet
And whispers to her-
Giving her the conformation
Telling her that he has now understood that HE is in HER heart..and says
"sirf meri"

Echoing "mujhe laga tum sirf meri ho"

Great dialogue, great acting...HORRIBLE CHannel EDITING
GC, DD-Awesome today! EMoting was briliant

Please requesting the team AND the channel to give us the unedited COn sequence.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Arwen...



or whenever maan finds out ... this will be used as the proof via flash back 😆 or may be they show maan going on a trip to canada .. (leaving geet behind) and she for some reason calls up this number (i bet that house also belongs to maan) and maan picks up the phone and therefore find out everything 😆

@Bold: Ahh i like this thought Arwen! The CVs shd get some ideas for ya! 😉😆
I think using it as a proof would be possible..
@Swan: Yea she can't reach Dev with it..but if she happen to call..and Pammi is still there right..??..She might just blurt out everything...Coz Pammi, Dev's mother, was kinda guity then already....
BTW guys..i forgot that Dev has a sister! Do ya'll rmb..? I only rmbered again..when Polki mentioned it on ther other day! 😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
@BLue..
I agree with the way you described that number theory... to Swan's post...👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
@geets ... we as fans are feeling furious .. i never lose my cool for a show but like an even i feel like sending hate mail and virtually killing the dumb dodo who made this decision ...

and gurmeet and drashti .. and those writers and directors and all those ppl .. these are the scenes that require them to be at their toes ... really show their creativity and talent and look at wht the channel is doing [xX(]


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Posted: 15 years ago
@Swan:I said Maan will do jasoosi to find out the culprit...so later on that canada number flashback will come in his mind..so thats the purpose😆😆
@All:Dev is feeling guilty and sorry because he is not aware of Geet's pregnency...it will b interesting to see his reaction once he comes to know about her pregnency😉..remember I said he is a "CONFUSED SELFISH SOUL"😃
@Manal:Few Mahila muktis r after roop tera mastana sequence..they cannot see a guy and pregnent girl getting into a heat of passionate moment..its against our culture according to them😆

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