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Posted: 15 years ago
I'm done with my take on Page 2. Pasting it here for those who are LAZY!! 😡😆
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I THINK GEET EDITORS DESERVE A BREAK! DON'T YOU? THEY ARE HAVE BEEN DOING SUCH A WONDERFUL JOB WITH EDITING PAST WEEK 😡 THEY HAVE EARNED A VACATION!!!

Give the GEET editors a day off tomorrow and give us the UNEDITED Version of Roop Tera Mastana!!!


In plain English: WE WANT BOLD ROMANTIC SCENES FOR MAAN AND GEET!!



Short take for now:

I liked today's episode barring some illogical scenes and execution errors.😃 I didn't like that Geet lied to Maan...and poor Nakul got blamed for it!! Now he is going to be even more depressed! 😔 I loved Geet's statement she will not let her past come between them as for her he is the most important person.👍🏼 Hated the animated plane from Delhi to Manali!! 👎🏼😡 Loved how Maan was so possessive of Geet and simply could not take his eyes off of her.👍🏼 LOVED Maan ki Geet!! 😳❤️ Bunty and his dad, they brought out the uber possessive side of Maan so that is a good thing.👍🏼BUT who declares a random girl you met 5 minutes ago as you daughter-in-law to the public!!👎🏼 I guess Bunty really wants to make Geet his Bubbly!! 🤣 Illogical much!! 😳 Dev is just plain old incompetent!! 😳


Overall: 9.5/10 ( Maan ki Geet stole the show!!)


Now let's get down to business, shall we?


WHAT I WANT TO SEE FOR MAAN AND GEET IN FUTURE:

In case you still didn't get what I'm trying to say, WE WANT TO SEE BOLD ROMANTIC SCENES FOR MAAN AND GEET!!! GEET is a BOLD show dealing with a very BOLD social issue. So why not break new ground and show some BOLD romantic scenes between Maan and Geet. I have an example of what I mean by BOLD romantic scenes! We know that Maan and Geet are in Manali, and are going to have an UNEDITED version of Roop Tera Mastana. After that why not have them sleep on the same bed? Is that too much to ask? I don't think so. They are two people very much in love and engaged to be married. Why can't they sleep on the same bed? I think Maan should offer to sleep on the couch and Geet should insist that she is completely comfortable with sharing a bed with him. That would be a major statement of how much Geet trusts Maan and make their bond even stronger. If they happen to cuddle even better!!


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LETTER TO THE EDITORS:


My Dearest Editors,

How are you? Busy editing I guess!! I just wanted to personally thank you for all the wonderful work that you do. I was so happy about yesterday's episode and was on cloud nine. But later I heard a "rumor" that some of the MUCH NEEDED self talk scenes from Maan were edited out! Now I know for sure it's just rumor!! Why on earth would a LOGICAL human being edit out Maan's self talk scenes following the truth revelation? I know you are not that ILLOGICAL right? RIGHT? You always makes smart editing decisions right? RIGHT? Ok, that's about it. Let's hope that I don't have to write to you again!

Love,

Marsha

P.S: If I had my way I would have already given you a PERMANENT vacation.


Edited by Marsha_Patel - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@49 : tht Suck 😕 I Always Try Watchin Zee shows /... They Not There on YT 😔
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Posted: 15 years ago

Like Geetakshi says, Aaj hamara dil garden garden ho gaya

Loved to see Geet's first confession and Maan's possessiveness ! Mashaallah !

Kahani us phone # ki
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Maan asks Geet about the phone # where did she get it from.
Geet, hesitant to disclose fibs that maybe it flew into room.
Maan berates Nakul (bechara, bali ka bakra) and asks Geet to make sure that he cleans the rooms well.

Geet feels guilty about lying to Maan. She is stunned, thinking I did not tell him and he still believes me. Me thinks Geet will tell him later because her primary focus is to see Maan happy.

When Maan says they'll be late for the flight, Geet's guilty conscious stops him … Suniye, but diverts by asking if Dadi has been informed. Maan nods, turns to leave. Geet stops him again….suniye ! Maan reads her mind….n asks, do u wann say something Geet ?

Her dupatta stuck in window sill….looks at Maan. Maan seems to be well trained in dupatta rescue, dutifully places bag down n walks towards her…Geet retracing her steps towards window. Maan leans across and loosens dupatta. As he is doing so, Geet places her left hand on Maan's left shoulder…almost hug…Geet is affected by his closeness. Such an adorable scene.

As Maan moves back Geet still retains her hand on his shoulder. Maan looks into her eyes and asks did u call me just to disentangle ur dupatta? Bolo Geet, tumne mujhe kyon bulaya ?

Geet's CONfession
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Aapne mujhe mere ateet ke saath aapki zindagi mein shamil kar liya Mein apse vaada karti hun mein mera atteet aapke aure mere beech kabhi nahin aane doongi;
Kyun ki aaj aap se badkhar mere liye kuch nahin.

Maan is floored. Maan toh kya, I had difficulty lifting my jaw from the floor. Haila, kudi's first confession. That's what ur munda had been waiting to hear from you Geet.

Maan lifts her chin n says paata hai Geet aaj pehili baar tunhari aankhon ne nahin tumne kuch bola hai.
Geet smiles at him with her heart in her eyes….and slowly caresses his shoulder. Haiiiyeee rabba !!!!!!!

Flight from D to M – I did not find this funny….have you ever traveled on a trans atlantic 16 hour flight ? Pataa hai, this chalti phirti picture in the plane keeps my sanity ….LOL !!!

A jhalak of Maan's adorable possessiveness….oohh yeah !!!!
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Scene - Manali market place, very cheerful. Maan is lost in looking Geet wondering what magic shes done. He does not seem to tire looking at her.…. work ko maro goli… but unable to take my eyes off her. What is going on ? Oye, munde you have a serious case of Lovaria !

Geet is enjoying the market place. After a while Geet asks Chalien? Maan embarrassed at being interrupted takes refuge in anger…so Mr Rawal called us here…I think u made a mistake on purpose so I don't take my eyes off u !

Ae lein, kudi chup rahegi, HP ki punjaban hain. Wo bhi toot padi….

Geet says– and u made me come here to yell at me. Look around u, people r smiling, happy ! why cant u be like that ?

A guy bumps into her and retraces step staring at her….Maan bitten by the green-eyed monster, shuffles her outta there and says stay here or lets go.

Geet at wit's end says why don't u take an allergy pill…if u see someone smiling, take one, problem kam ho jayegi … good one Geet….ROFL !

M takes her away from there and bumps into a local budhdha turns out to be Mr Rawal. Oh, Mr K, he says…I was lost in wadiyon ke geet mein (ley , yeh bhi dialogue maarne lagaa) M staaarrrrrreeesssssss him down. Surma lagaa ke, Maan ki ankhen bhi badi pyaari… I mean ….khatarnaak lag rahi thee ……<giggling>

Mr R says to Geet - u r here..charimgn voice, more beautiful than ur voice….budhdha saal line marofying…Maan totally uncomfy….sends Geet off to go site seeing.

G confused but leaves. Moves her open hair to the front. Open back. Budhdha ghooring, Maan upset, goes to Geet, shields her from back , moves her hair (bade pyaaaaaar se) to the back.
Geet askes confusedly, what now u have an issue with my hair ?
Maan – Geet tum jaao !

KC – Deveera trying to dig out more info on Geet
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Pinky happy she got her job back. Adi says Geet ka kamal else Maan has never changed his mind.

Great dialogue from Adi – Maan ka mood from 'Happy mood to Hitler mood'

Geet Sirf Meri hai !!! Oye mere sher ke pattha, yeh hui na baat !
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(M = Maan, R= Rawal G= Geet)
M talking to R abt food processing plant, R lost in ghooring G who is trying out earrings.
M p****d off at R,
R asks where is G from?
M – HP…. Continues talking
R – since when is she working 4 u ?
M – no talking abt my employees
R – but ppl must be talking abt her
M – idk, but why u asking abt her ?
R – Nothing SHAADI KARWANI HAI
M – SHAADI !!!, IMPOSSIBLE, CAN'T BE !!!!!!!!
M rushes to G…n says.lets go..
G - but I'm buying bangles.
M puts one bangle after another on Geet ….hint hint…completion of circle reader !
R watching frm distance
G confused…M forcing bangle. G in pain, M stops and caraesses her hand
R shocked !

Mahiiiiiii !!!!

M do u want anything else ?
G - No,
M pays bill and takes G's hand with such rightfulness and authority and leaves with her.
M stops when he hears folks talking abt 'Bunty key liye babli'…. Bunty turns out to be the boy who bumped into her, Rs son !
M watching, p****d.
Old lady in crowd places shagun on G's forehead. G shocked
Old lady blesses her…jewel looks good on u, she says
R asks son did u like girl ?
G tries to interrupt
M, has had enuff, EXCUSE ME he says and rips open the crowd.
Pulls G towards him.

M - Yeh aankhen sirf sagar ki tarah saaf nahhi hai'. Yeh ankken bina kuch bole kisi ka bhi dard aur dil ke baatein padh leti hai. Inhe samajne ke liye dimaag ki nahin, dil ki zaroorat padti hai.

Hai, kay bola….apun bola tu meri laila !!! Kkkkk…Vandana becoming serious….

R stumped !
M – she is definitely an achchi dulhan, par bunty ki nahin, G ka naam bunty ke saath nahin,MAAN KE SAATH ACHCHA LAGTA HAI …MAAN KI GEET < hai, mein mar jawaaan>

Mahiii !!!!!!

M takes off old lady's shagun, G will not wear this but will wear what my dadi gives her and returns old lady's jewel
R – What do u mean ?
M – G sabko meaning batayegi. Bolo G, batao sabko, mera kehne ka kya matlab…aj tak mein sabko batatey ayah hoon, ab tumhari baari hai, bolo G
G looks down shyly, mum.

M lifts her ring finger and shows them …GEET MSK KI MANGETAR HAI. Folks shocked.
M – pulls Geet more closer and says, SIRF MERI, SIRF MERI MANGETAR HO ….< hai mein mar jawaaan….again >
M takes G turns and leaves with her, still holding her hand. Geet looking at him adoringly as she walks

Deveera – 2 .....kabab mein haddi
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Deveera call Pinky to Sasha's cabin to find out about Geet. Pinky tells them that Geet is still very much working for KC but is outta town for a couple days. Adi sensing something wrong, interrupts and takes Pinky away. <Adi probably remembers NT fishing for G info, now its Deveera ….hmmmm…..dal mein kuch kala zaroor hai >

Precap - Roop tera mastana

Awesome episode. Perfect direction, a little shaky dubbing when Maan talks about Geet's aankhen.

Splendid acting by Gurmeet and Drashti….guys u have raised my expectation for tomorrow….take it up another notch !

Dil mera garden garden ho gaya :-))))))) Giving duvaayein to Nissar, Barry, Swati, GC and Drashti !!!

Edited by starlite7 - 15 years ago
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@Blue .. yeh ... okay just pm me the link whenever u can 😊? how was the epi waise 😆?

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@Swan: I know u directed that question to Jyo..😆😆😆 ....Even i was thinking abt this..so thought of stating how i feel....It will confirm have relevance to the future..u see Maan threw the paper in the bin..Geet saw that..and i have a feeling Geet'll will take the paper out again...and the next time Maan would really catch her..and THIS TIME round she woudn't have any excuse.....OR he may not catch her..and she'll just use that no. to get to Dev...😃
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: an12345678


You need to go back to Kindergarten and read nursery rhymes again. You'll understand what to chop and what not to chop.

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CHOP CHOP
My scissors go SKIP and HOP
BOP BOP BOP
POP a WEASEL
CUT a EASEL
DIRTY a TASSEL
EMPTY a VESSEL
CHOP CHOP
My fingers go CLOP CLOP


- dedicated to my Rainbow Hues from Bri's book of Channel Nursery Rhymes



Edited by bDgT - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Cwezy_Manoola-

@49 : tht Suck 😕 I Always Try Watchin Zee shows /... They Not There on YT 😔



I know, but in the end its the channels product and it kills their ratings!!
Edited by 49erFan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Guyz Watz MAHILA MUTKI 😕 ? now wah probv they Got Wid the Channel / Geet 😕 Argh These ppl should getta Life
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Originally posted by: 49erFan



I know, but in the end its the channels product and it kills their ratings!!

I Betta Delete ma Ram Milaye Jodi Vm B4 they Banned me 🤢
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thank you Me Samurai Warrior 🤗🤗🤗

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