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Arushi. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
Edited Comment on Page 1.
Aarthi_01 thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG tat is not enof for u do u want him to cry tat much. POOR maan
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: Arushi.

*Reserved* 🤗

Okay first before I tell you how your OS was, I have to tell you this, I have seen you around IF alot, and never got the chance to say this, but I completely love your username. 😆 What does it mean? 🤣 hahah Im Manal 😆 n Ma Username is Actually an Arabic Version as im an arab 🤣 Cwezy Means Crazy & Manoola is Wah people Call me 😆 so ya People Think im Crazy So This is the perfect username for moi 🤣
Hmm, no chappals for you for the OS, rather jahppis for it. This is something I would always want to see in Geet. This OS had parts which describe Maneet and their relationship perfectly, this OS had scenes which i could just picture, and I think is commendable. Awwwww 🤗 I Always Wanted Such Scene for Maneet😳 Just Hope CV's Fulfill ma Wish 😆
I have been on an OS reading mission today 😆, and by far this is the best one I have read ! Kudos to you :) n haila 🤣 Im always like this Durin Weekends 🤣 Readin OS's 🤣 n OMG 😲 This Means Alot to Moi 😳😳
Also, one thing I really loved about your OS, was the fact that it brought out a very basic human pysche. Geet is dying to rush into his arms, yet when confronted by him near the train, she blames him and that is a basic human defence mechanism. Freud will be proud of you. ROFL 🤣 heheh this is Geet n Maan actually Always Blamin Each otha aLL the Tyme 🤣
I really liked the OS. Do PM me if and when you write more. Actually scrap that, make it when you write more, cause this surely cant be your last. Hope So 🤣 Cuz im More into Behoooda pan 🤣 im a VERY Bad writter 🤣 Buh Will Sure Let u knw When I'll Write more😳😳😆
Much Love.

thnks Alot Arushi 🤗 ur Comment means alot to moi 🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
WOw...........Absolutely oustanding....Manal...😃
Good job hun👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hmmm are we gonna get a full ff from you little madam??????😊
Please write another...... thanx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15
😆😆 😆😆........wen did u get time to jot this dwn??😕😕...i thght OMG/ABS 😛 was yr priority.....😆😆
Hav to say 2days away.......😉......n luk....👏👏👏👏👏.......Beautifully n simply written....i love that type of writtin.......4 me it has more impact......👍🏼
hav read it thrice.😃....still tryin to decipher all the hindi....😕🤣🤣
Btw....i guess yr influence on Prat forum..has reacHed SS....😲..Heard him say..Behoodi😲😲 in Thu epi😆😆😆.......
Edited by Sofna - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: arthirajendiran

OMG tat is not enof for u do u want him to cry tat much. POOR maan

im Bhery Greedy 🤣 I Want him To Cry Like Angad in Kaisa Yeh Pyaar hai 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
I find it so weird wen Sumone starts being romantic and sensible You see its just not you.. Why didn't you bring maan down to his knees right now like geet did on Friday and u kwn then wat happened🤣🤣 But I love this side of you too Romachicc Loved it..
Edited by Cute_Ash - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: aleena1

WOw...........Absolutely oustanding....Manal...😃

Good job hun👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
Hmmm are we gonna get a full ff from you little madam??????😊
Please write another...... thanx for the pm

Thnks Alot Aleena 🤗 @Bold : Oyeeeeeeeeeee 🤣 Baksh Do Mujhe 🤣
as i remember i Started a Kriya FF n New Continued Afta the Intro 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Sofna

😆😆 😆😆........wen did u get time to jot this dwn??😕😕...i thght OMG/ABS 😛 was yr priority.....😆😆

Hav to say 2days away.......😉......n luk....👏👏👏👏👏.......Beautifully n simply written....i love that type of writtin.......4 me it has more impact......👍🏼
hav read it thrice.😃....still tryin to decipher all the hindi....😕🤣🤣
Btw....i guess yr influence on Prat forum..has reacHed SS....😲..Heard him say..Behoodi😲😲 in Thu epi😆😆😆.......

🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣Sofu 🤣 I Worte This While Chattin wid Nadz 🤣 she was the 1st 1 to read it n thn i decided to Post it Here 😆
@Red : awwww Thnks Alot sofu 🤗
@ Blue : 🤣Yaaay Soo Me Passed in Hindi Shocked 🤣
@Greeen : 🤣Oyeeeeee We Got this Word Behooda Frm SS 🤣 he is Our GuruPapa 🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: Cute_Ash

I find it so weird wen Sumone starts being romantic and sensible You see its just not you.. Why didn't you bring maan down to his knees right now like geet did on Friday and u kwn then wat happened🤣🤣 But I love this side of you too Romachicc Loved it..

1stly YOU CHOR 🤣🤣Stole ma Tuzkis 😭😭🤣 Where is Ma SuperMaan Chapal 😡😡😆 n 🤣Im shocked to Seee tht I Can Actually BE SERIOUS 😲 🤣 Buh Wat to Do Yaaar u Knw how Evil i Am n I Reallly Wanna see our MundaMaan Cry 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Like CRY !! 🤣 n Hailaaa Wat did u do😡🤣Reminded me of the Friday Epi 🤪🤣 she ALMOST Felt His _____🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 n thnks bitach 🤗

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