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Posted: 14 years ago
#81
hey guys..m back with my update...i know its been a long tym..but sorry guys..there some problem with IF

sorry guys..


~*~ part 4 ~*~

next morning..

geet gets late and hurry up everything..and is running around..

geet comes running downstairs

maan:geet!!!

Geet stops

Geet:wo ..main..late ho gayi..nahi..hum abhi office jayenge..

Maan goes upstairs..

Maan:har waqt man maani karti rehti hai..ye kya play ground hai jot um bhaag rahi ho..

Geet:nahi wo main late ho gayi..

Maan:chup ..bilkul chup..pair slip hojata toh..agli se dhyaan se..

Geet nodes..hmmm

Maan:main nakl se keh deta hoon who tumhara saaman neeche wale room main shift kar dega..

Geet:iski koi zaroorat nahi..mainagli baar se dhyaan rakhoongi..

Maan:haan..wo maine dekha hai..

Geet:par..wo..

Maan shots a angry glare at geet..

Geet:okay jaisa aap kahye..

Maan:breakfast kiya?

Geet nodes yes and then no..

Maan:chalo take her to dinning table ..

Geet:maan late ho rahi hai..

Maan:boss main hoon..aur jaisa main kehta hoon waisa karo..

Maan makes her have breakfast and medicines..

And they both leave to office..

At khurana mansion

Daadi:nakul aapne maan ko dekha??

Nakul:haan dadima wo geet mam ke saath office chale gaye..

Dadi:office chale gaye..ye maan bhi na..unhone breakfast bhi nhai kiya..

Nakul:dadima maan sir ne outhouse main geet mam ke saath breakfast kar liya..

Dadima:accha..

Just then meera comes..

Dadi:arrey meera beta..

Meera:good morning dadi..

Dadi:hum aapse bahut naraaz hai..

Meera:naraaz mujhse??

Dadi:haan aap kal hume bina bataye chale gaye..

Meera:ahh..dadi..wo..actually..important.

Dadi:important kaam tha..mujhe pata hai..aap ka aur dev ka dobara jhagda hua hoga..aur har baar ki tarah is baar bhi dev ki hi galthi hogai..

Meera doesn't answer..

Dadi:hum abhi dev ki class lete hai..

Just then dev comes downstairs..

Seeing meera with he stops in his tracks..

Dev(thinking)kahin meera ne daadi ko sab bata toh nahi diya..

Daadi:aayi shab zaade..yeh hum kya sun rahe hoon

Dev:daadi ..wo..

Daadi:ab aap dono bacche nahi rahey jo har waqt jhagda karte rahenge..

Dev:haan daadi..(thinks)iska matlab meera ne daadi ko kuchnahi bataya..

Daadi gets a calland she leaves the place

Dev:meera..wo..main apne galthi..

Meera:galthi nahi..dev paap kaho..how could u??

Dev:haan meera main jaanta hoon..par ab main apne paapon ka paschyatap karna chahta hoon..

Meera:how convenient!! Ek ladki ki zindagi barbaad kardi aur paschyataap karna chahte ho..

Dev:main kya karta..paison ki sakt zarurat thi..bro naraz thay..aur naintara..

Meera:tumhare paas dimaag toh tha hi tum bacche nahi jo naintara job hi kahegi tum ankh bandk kar kar doge..

Dev:meera please meri baat toh suno..

Meera:tum us ladki ke parivaar se milo aur vo job hi saza de tum bhugtoge..

Dev:hmm..

Meera:mujhe pata nahi kyun..par main tumhara saath doongi ispaschyataap..tum maan se ye baat karoge..as soon as possible..

Dev:but hum unhe dhoondenge kahn

Meera:jahan tum unse miley thay..

Dev:hoshiyar pur..

At office

Maan geet are in lift

Asusual arguing..

Maan:geet jo main kehta tum maanti kyun nahi??

Geet:kyunki har waqt aapki baat aap hi ki tarah teedi jo hoti hai..

Maan:geet!!

Geet:e lo!! Ab sach kaho toh gussa bhi aajat hai..

Maan:tumhara room toh niche shift hoga..

Geet:nahi hoga nahi hoga nahi hoga..samjhe dusht daanav..aur ye office hai aapka ghar nahi..

Maan:ye mera hi office hai..

Geet:toh maine kab kaha nahi hai..jaiye aur apna kaam kariye sab par raub jamate rehte hai..

And geet leaves dat place..

In geet's cabin..

Geet:babaji..ye dusht daanav bhi na..har waqt mujhpar raub jamate rehte hai..ab main inpar raub jamaungi..aap plzz meri madat karna..

Maan watches her talking to babaji

Maan(thinking) :hmm babaji se madat maang liya..ab dekho main kya karta hoon..

Maan calls geet on her intercom

Maan:geet abhi mere cabin main..dictation dena hai..now!!

Cuts the call and give a lop side grin..

Geet:zaroor unki shaitaani dimaag main koi naya plan aaya hoga mujhe tang karne'(looks at the roof) babaji meri madad karna..

Geet knocks at thr door

Maan:hmm come in'

Geet gets in..

Maan:wo mumbai wala project ke blue prints lana..

Geet:aapne toh kaha tha dictation dena hai..

Maan:geet pehle blue prints..

Geet(murmering) :mujhe pata hai..ye dimaag main kuch chal raha hai..

Geet:sir coffee ??

Maan(thinking)sir??

Maan:hmm

Geet gets the blue prints and coffe as well

Maan sips his coffee.. and spit it out..

Maan:geet tumhe pata hai main sirf 1 cube sugar leta hoon..

Geet:sir..1 cube hi daala tah..baaki ke aapki kadvi zabban ke liye..

Maan:geet..

Geet:sir!!

Maan:pehle toh yeh sir sir kehna bandh karo..

Geet:aap bhi yeh raub jamana bandh kariye..

Maan:main raub jamata hoon??

Geet :aur nahi toh..tum ye karo tum wo nahyi medicines lo..wo nahi..main kya choti bacchi hoon??

Maan:tum tum choti bacchii se kam ho kya??

Geet:main choti bacchi nahi..huh!!

Maan:ohh!! Toh tum meri har baat mano..

Geet comes near him

Geet:oh..toh aisa ahi..sab manungi..but room nahi change hoga..samjhe maan singh khurana..

And leaves the cabin

Maan:zidddi.. and smiles..

Geet hears to his comment

and leaves his cabin smiling..

At night maan geet both reach home..

Maan:dinner saath karenge..

Geet:thik hai and smiles..

Maan enters KM smilimg..

Dadi:arrey maan beta tum agaye..hume toh laga hum aaj bhi aapko nahi dekh payenge..

Maan:dadi aisa kyun??

Dadi:kal se na aapki khabar nahi geet ki..breakfast par bhi nahi mile

Maan:wo..dadi kal busy tahy..aur aaj office jaldi jana tah..

Dadi:koi baat nahi beta..hum dinner saath karenge..

Maan:thinki:dinner toh geet ke saath karna tah..

Dadi:waise geet bhi hume join karegi ..

Maan smiles..

Dadi:Mumbai wala project kaisa chal raha hai??

Mana:acha kal meeting hai hum Mumbai jarahe hai kal..

Dadi:hum??

Maan:main aur..geet

Dadi:hmm..(before dadi could tell anything else)

Maan:dadi dev kahan hai..

Dadi:wo dev ..meera k saath banglore gaya ahi..meera ko kuch kaam tha banglore main..34 days main wapis ajayenge..

Maan:hm..

Dadi:ap jaiye fresh hojaye hum dinner lag wate hai..

After dinner

Geet and dadi chat for long tym..

Maan:amm..maa..dadi bahut late hogyai hai..

Dadi:haan beta..

Maan:geet bahut late hogayi hai..kal office jald jana ahi..aur shayd tumne packing bhi nahi ki..

Geet:meri packing ho jayegi..

Maan:geet abhi..kal late nahi honi chahiye..

Dadi looks at both..and understands that maan wamts to spend some time with geet

Dadi excuses herself and leave from there..

Man:geet outhouse main eek file rakh di hai'chalo hum saath chalte hai..

geet:hmm

they both go out..

maan:geet tumne medicines li??

Geet:hmm..nahi..

Maan:geet tumhe kitne baar bolna padega apna kahyal rakho..

Geet:aap ahi na mera kahyal rakhne..:)

Man:hamesha..

They both smile at each other

precap:- maneet in mumbai


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Edited by sweetshab - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
awesome update
loved it
looking forward
after a long time...
thanks for taking time and updating

Posted: 14 years ago
#83
hey shabzii

thank god u updated..

but this tym i forgive u..i know this IF problems
update was beautiful..
maneet nok jhok always rocks!!
and the SIGGY is outstanding
cont soon

muahh!!!
Edited by thejazzgal.s - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
Nice FF!!! I read it at a stretch and felt like had a tour of those good old days, kaash woh din wapas aa jathee...
Plzzz add me to ur pm list
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
Damn funny and sweet loved the part
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

hi

mujhe pm nahi mila 😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Shab meri...🤗
oye balle balle new updtae aa gaya..
usual update was mindblowing..:)⭐️
splly maneet cute nok jhok..:)😉
😉

[Geet:zaroor unki shaitaani dimaag main koi naya plan aaya hoga mujhe tang karne'(looks at the roof) babaji meri madad karna..😆

Geet:sir..1 cube hi daala tah..baaki ke aapki kadvi zabban ke liye..😆😆😆]


loved it..

plz cont ssoon..

aur..is baad late mat karo plzz..


me waiting..

mwaahh!






Edited by pritta - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
nice part do continue soon n thanxx for d pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
lovely update... luved maneet.. continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
love it love it
i'm looking forward
to read more of ur FF
sounds amazing
i read in one go
lovely update
pls cont soonnn
pls do pm me
thank yu so muchhh

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