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Posted: 14 years ago
#61
NOTE :-hey everyone...sry..

i knw its been a long tym since i've updtaed..
sry


im very busy with studies.. hope u all for give me..

srrry
i'll updtae it after saturday..

Edited by sweetshab - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#62

hey guys im back with update..

i know its been a very long tym since i've updated


sorry..

was busy with cuz wedding and than studies..

here the update


~*~part3~*~

geet goes downstairs..

maan follows her..

geet try avoiding maan.

Maan:geet..

Geet turns and raised her eyebrow questioning what??

Maan confused and ask what??

Geet moves away from there..

Maan pulls her from arm..

Geet bups into his chest..

Maan raise her chin..

Maan:kya hua geet..??

Geet nods in negative..

Maan:bolo na..

Geet:ello!! Aap hi nae toh kaha hai ki main bahut bolti hoon..jab chup hoon toh kehte ho bolti kyun nahi..??aap hi decide karo main bolon ki nahi ??

Maan:bas itni se baat??

Geet:yeh aapko bas itni si baat lagi??

And turns to other side folding her arms

Maan urns her to him..

Maan:geet.tum bolti ho toh meri duniya main har rang hai..tum khush ho toh meri duniya khush haal hai..tum aas paas ho toh meri zindagi..

Geet puts her finger on his lips..

Maan:ab kaho main kise na kahoon..??

Geet:aap bas aise baatein na kiya karo..

Maan:hmmm..

Maan goes closer to her and kiss on her forehead '.

She blushes and put her head down....

Geet:main dinner banti hoon..

Maan holds her wrist..

Maan:geet handa..abhi aapki tabiyat thik nahi..aap ab aaram karengi..

Geet:nahi ab toh main bilkul thik hoon..

Maan:chup..ek dum chup..jo main keh raha hoon wahi suno..

Geet:maine kaha na main bilkul thik hoon..

Maan:aaj dinner main banaoga..

Geet makes face..

Maan:kya hua??

Geet:aapke haath ka pheka pheka khana..

Maan prepares the dinner and they both have it together

Maan geet go out for walking

There a complete silence between themm

Maan:tum office join kar rahi ho na..

Geet:haan ji..

Mana:hum parson Mumbai jana hai..

Geet:wo kyun

Maan:humara Mumbai wala project accept hogay hai..toh project sign karne ke liye..

Geet:hmm..par wo toh sirf aapko jana hoga na main kyun??

Maan:geet..tum meri secretary ho aur..us project ke details bhi tumhe hi paat hai..toh..

Geet:ohh!! Thik hai..hum jayenge..

Maan:main tumse permission nahi le raha tah..main tumhe bata raha tha..

Geet:e lo!! Jab haan kahun toh pareshani na kahum toh pareshani..aapko meri kaunsi baat se problem nahi hai??

Maan just looks at her..looking at her jaan blabbering like always..

Geet:yeh dekho main baat kar rahi hoon aur yeh hai kii..

And geet turns to go away..

Maan holds her wrist

Maan:tumhari musurahat se,tumhari yeh khatam na hone wali baton se..aurr

Geet:aur'

Maan:hamesha mere aas paas rehne se..

Geet blushes..and look down..

Maan:aur jab aise sharmati ho..toh..aur bhi zyada acha lagta hai..

Geet:late ho rahi hai..

Maan:hmm

Geet:ab hume chalna chahiye..

They both walk back to outhouse..

Maan makes her take the medicine

Geet:mujhe nahi pasand yeh dawii..yakk!!

And makes a baby face

Man:geet !! chup chap dawii khao..warna tumhari health bigad jaeyegi

Geet mummers:waise bhi aap saamne hote ho toh waise hi meri health bigad jati hai aur main gadbad kar deti hoon..

Maan:kuch kaha tumne??

Geet:nahi..wo main dawaii le rahi hoon..aap jaiye..

Maan:geet abhi ..dawi abhi lo..

Geet takes the medicinemaking baby face..

Maan:take care..agar koi bhi baat ho mujhe kehna..good night..

And walks out of the room..

Maan mummers:bilkul choti bacchi hai..

An d turns

Maan:geet agr koi bhi pareshani ho mujhe kehna..kaho toh main yehi out house main rukta hoon..

Geet:nahi main thik hoon aur koi pareshani hogi toh aapko bataungi..ab aap jaiye..

Maan turns to leave

Geet:pareshaan khud hotey hai aur mujhe kehte hai..DD

Man again turns:geet kal jaidi ready rehna hum saath office jayenge.

Geet:haan..good night..

Maan half heartdly leaves the out house..


i knw its a short update..i'll update the nxt part soon..

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plz do leave a comment :)

Edited by sweetshab - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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that was awesome update....loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update.........
contine soon!......
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Superbbbbbbbbbb.
Lovee the part.
Continue soonnn.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was awesome....... loved it..........plzzz add me to ur pm list

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plz ad me. Its jst awesum. Plz
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love it.
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nice update.. do continue soon

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