Qayamat Se Qayamat Tak-upd PG 5/6

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Bri

Rangon ka badalna fitrat hai
Patang ka udna kudrat hai

Rang bhare hue rahe Berang na ho ye dua hai
Patang hamesha udti rahe, dor katt na jaaye umeed hai

Rang to phir bhi shayad rahe
nazar badal na jaaye

Patang to sadaa udti rahe
Hawa ka rukh badal na jaaye

badalte rang ko mausam kehte hain shayad
udti patang ko jhokein

rang hai jaise pyar
mann hai jaise patang

ye badal gayee to kaayenat badal na jaaye

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@bDgT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Wow Rush,

What a wonderful treat in the morning!

Brilliant words, so meaningful.

Loved how you ended it with universe and tied it with love and the heart in the previous lines. 👍🏼

Love
Bri

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Aw...Bri

i just played with the words..you used.

added to what you were saying...

i love..reading your quips... they take on a different plane...

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ash08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

Bri, post the words you posted on the Den. They are so meaningful.

Vru - You and Bri are giving us a treat here. Lage raho. And beautifully written dear.

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@bDgT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

Ash,

Sweetie, thank you! Which one? The "Dreams" ones?

Love
Bri

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ash08

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: bDgT
Ash,

Sweetie, thank you! Which one? The "Dreams" ones?

Love
Bri

Yes, the Cadaver of Dreams. On page 103 of the den.

Every word has a hidden meaning there. So much pain?? So much pathos?? 🤗

I will only say one thing. Life doesn't end with a bad experience. You learn from it, realise your strength and then go forward in life being more experienced.

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@bDgT

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

Ash,

Hmm...that one is sort of special from my blog because it was given for a War Poems seminar. You are right life does not have to end with one bad experience.

Love
Bri

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-
Bri

Rangon ka badalna fitrat hai
Patang ka udna kudrat hai

Rang bhare hue rahe Berang na ho ye dua hai
Patang hamesha udti rahe, dor katt na jaaye umeed hai

Rang to phir bhi shayad rahe
nazar badal na jaaye

Patang to sadaa udti rahe
Hawa ka rukh badal na jaaye

badalte rang ko mausam kehte hain shayad
udti patang ko jhokein

rang hai jaise pyar
mann hai jaise patang

ye badal gayee to kaayenat badal na jaaye