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Posted: 15 years ago
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Posted by Anjana

Den Duppatta Contest - N de Winners R????

Betcha u thought i forgot or was neva gonna announce it😆...But, these entries were tooo good for me not to share:
Honourable Mentions: These two r'nt "true" winners, but r great pretenders...
HM #1: Caco Spills it!

Dupatta theory- the signs of HE'S THE ONE

1) Dupatta flying miles only to land on the guys's face: Ishara by uparwala that "Ye tera hone wala hai"

2) Dupatta getting stuck in the button: aakhon ki ghustakhia maaf hoooo

3) Dupatta getting stuck somewhere and the girl thinking the guy is keeping her from going away: kuch kuch hota hai inside girl

4)Dupatta flying on both of their faces: both the guy and the girl feeling "hum tum ek kamre mein bandh ho aur chabi kho jaye"

5)Dupatta falling down and guy looking away: only to make the guy seem decent for the girl to fall in love with him

6)Dupatta falling down and guy covers the girl with it again: main tere izzat ka rakhwala hoon

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HM #2: Geeta A - covers serial with her duppatta
In Indian society, (i know North Indian so..I guess, NOrth Indian Society), A woman's dupatta has stood for a girl's honor- her chastity and her respect

In a wedding, the bride and the groom are tied with a dupatta- symbolizing perhaps the conjoining and passing of the girl's honor from the family of the girl to her husband

During the pheras, it joins the two together- it becomes a bridge for their life together- if it is broken, the marriage considered to be broken

In the light of all this,

In the show Geet- hui sabse parayi- Geet has always been conscious of her dupatta.

The first time her dupatta gets stuck Dev is unable to rescue it.
Symbolic of Dev not the ideal guy for him- because he is unable to protect that which stands for her honor.

And soon enough we see, Dev abandoning Geet, who's pregnant and she is asked to abort.

when MAAN comes into her life- she is being chased by gundas.
She asks for help, he doesn't say anything, she continues to run and then...her dupatta falls on his head

As if- "My honor and my life is on your head"

Thinking about this scene, I also thought that perhaps it symbolized, that no matter how hard this man is- he would feel a little twinge of conscience if he didn't save her- so, her dupatta/honor/life would be on his head, metaphorically

Before Maan saved Geet...Geet saved Maan.
She shielded him from all darkness, and she promised she would, if only he would pass the tests that destiny puts him through..


Geet again throws her dupatta randomly from her window..looking desperately for help in any form-"help, my honor needs to be saved" she was locked...he came and threw back her 'honor' at her
She binds his hand when he gets hurt-
I am giving you this-for your protection and mine are interlinked.

We see the acme this scene reaches in today's episode- when Geet binds his hand post his verbal confession

HE understands her unsaid confession there

"i am yours..I am giving you my honor- it's yours..you protect it, you raise it above ground."
" this is a part of me that I am giving to you...It's yours. It binds me to you"

We see the contrast to Dev-Geet-dupatta when Geet's dupatta gets stuck in office and MAan releases it from the..um..bush...

This man can save her. this man HAS in the past and WILL in the future

The one time he was not there to save her- when her saree got ripped..

He kept that piece- perhaps to remind himself..as always MSK reminds himself of his faults


HE respects her- can be seen all the time- he doesn't look at her when her dupatta isn't on..no matter how attracted he is.
The first time it happened in the coffee sequence- we got the first time MAHII

The first time they got bound to each other in the shaadi-phera style was in the HUM-tum sequence when Geet fell on him.

Symbolically, she gave himself to him..not knowing that..she got up embarrased but it was again the beloved dupatta that didn't want to leave Maan

got stuck and was telling Geet to go to Maan and get it herself..she got more embarrased..but she had to come.

After that, Maan really got a little more wild..with his feelings.

shows perhaps that they are bound?!

At the almost shaadi party

MAan threw the dupatta at Geet's head..making her a dulhan

Need I say more..?

At the dargah- she imagined him putting dupatta back on her head- parallel to the scene above!


when Maan went on his knees and pulled Geet towards him via the dupatta.

When MAan came back after Guru recovered from Malaria...She hugs him- and her dupatta gets stuck- v v symbolic this time as her suit was RED- the color linked with marriage.

The way this scene was shown conveyed how bound the two were in each other. Geet pulled him via dupatta and went back towards the wall and Maan went with her


Geet has saved Maan..Rasika episode when MAan used Geet's dupatta to wipe his marked face.
She has been the one who has wiped the darkness from his life.

in yesterday's episode
symbolic again of the past that had dirtied everyone's opinion, about her and her family's 'honor'

Geet's dupatta represents her honor- in turn represents her family's honor.

IT got dirtied by the past and obviously, MAan saving it..Picked it up- LIFTED it to where it deserved to be and not crushed on the ground.

With that dupatta, Maan again confirmed that he won't let anything happen to her.
He would not. and linking with her trials of the past, he will restore to her a sense of identity

*not to say she doesn't have a sense..but perhaps make it stronger somehow?*

I'd like to link it to the new promo...also symbolic

Geet determined to move on.
Her sense of self restored, she is ready to move on with him.
She has saved him from the case..He will save her again.


Okay, I see now that I have given you scenes chronologically..and not cohesively acc to my points..

In a jist-
Dupatta- has always been symbolic of Geet's honor and has occasionally stood for Geet herself. What she doesn't say- her colorful dupattas say.
Since the first day Maan stood in her life(he WAS standing) the dupatta has
1. linked them
2. saved both Maan and Geet
3. shown Maan respecting Geet
4. also been the symbol of their closeness- he pulls her towards him and she pulls him towards her via the dupatta..
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Funniest Entry: If "Phunny" was a word den Pallo "Phits" de Description Allways!
D- Dhadkan Amplifier
U-Upparwaale's according Dil se dil jud-o-fier
P-Paas Paas kheech-o-fier
A-Ankhon se Ankhein Lado-fier
T- Time stop-o-fier
T- Thought Process Crash-o-fier
A-Amazing Personalities mil-o-fier!!!
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Best Entry: Jhan wins it with Grace Style and Substance!
By Jhan

Long and winded is the history of the dupatta's tryst

With Indian TV so I will just give you the gist

Never have we seen a garment so versatile

To extol its virtues it is going to take a while

Let me start without much further ado

Of these dupatta incidents there have always been a slew.

People believe that the duppata is worn to cover one's modesty

Of that line of reasoning the TV people have made a travesty

The other uses of a duppata are indeed manifold

I was myself surprised at the list, truth be told.

To express her shyness, head bent, her dupatta a girl will twist

If she is a ghost, her white duppata will flutter as she disappears into the mist

If a girl is fixing her duppata it is considered rude not to avert your gaze

The dupatta can also help protect her identity by covering her face

The heroine duppata just starts flying, no matter the time or the place

Our hero always spots it and gives the dupatta the chase

On occasion people have also used the duppata to strangle

If you are in distress leave the duppata behind as a signal

Hero gets hurt, no problem, tear the dupatta and tie it around the wound

Link you duppata to a guy and walk around the fire, now in holy matrimony you are bound

The dupatta has been used on occasion to gag somebody so that they don't make a sound

Well you could use it to tie up the bad guys after chasing them round and round.

These are all the ones I can recall at this moment

Feel free to add on to these and please leave a comment.


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Edited by devilsden - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#12

^^ i was waiting to confirm if i cud reserve.. n u beat me to it !!😭

ok tats it thn...

*rEsErVeD*😛

n i here by...

*with hands on aag ka gola*

take t plegde..

tat i ill remain activ in t den.. as n whn i am heere as in i am hom 🤓!!

now add me pleeaaajhee!😆

lov

resmi..😳

PS: errr!!! to opera.. n all othr stuphid browsers...

doesnt let me color myself!!😡 finally me ijj RED!!☺️


Edited by mi7chimes - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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~~.: Poetry 4 :. ~~

Pooja

For Pinky Sasha got a gift

While MSK for the whole epi was stuck in the lift

Abt Geet being pregnant Pinky told Sasha

That definitely led to some tamasha

Geet once again saw Dev

Her from Sasha no one can save

Sasha ne kiya geet ko taunt

The past was back to haunt

NT -Dev- Meera ka bana zabardast triangle

NT cant stand Meera from any angle

Poore office ke saamne Geet ' Sasha

Creating total tamasha

Father of the child is what Sasha asks about

The whole office is left in doubt

Geet saying not to blame Maan and dikhao's tevar

She cant say that the child's biological father is going to be her future devar

While the guards are yelling the lift with MSK in it is abt to fall

Geet takes Sasha to Dev and asks him to tell all

Geet pe bhi ho gaya hai MSk ka asar

Sasha ko sunane mein she left no kasar

Epi ends on everyone's shocked face

The Cv's are doing the best they can to remain in the trp race

Dikha rahen hain twist pe twist

Abhi (is there to aise bhi aur vaise bhi )to there are lot of options left in the list😆


Polki


Maan ki lift ghiri

Sasha ko hua Geet ko banau bechari
Geet neh soccha- ja saali mein ho sherni
Dev seh hua bukabla
NT ki aakhe dikh rahi thi rasgula
Maan ha hua accident
Hospital janeh ko thi Geet adamant
Geet aur Maan ka hua milab
Dev aus pureh family ko laga julab...😆

Shreya_l

Nyaay ka darwaja hai mera rasta,
Kya Maan se sach mein rahega mera vaasta?
Aaj main ek nayi Geet
Boloon sacchayi ki hogi jeet....
.............................

Pooja


Geet ne kiye hazaron sawaal

Jinse khada hua bawaal

Geet ne ki sabki bolti band

Bechari NT could only say on us don't uchalo gand

Dev ke saamne aaya ek sach

Ab nahi Dev payega bach

the full truth is out

But Dadi and Maan still don't know what the story is abt

Dev ' NT ka khel hua khatam

Maan dha raha geet pe sitam

Har pal yaad kiya geet ne Maan ko

Aur police station ki taraf chali woh

Police walon ne kaha go get saboot

Till then what u r saying is all jhoot

Idhar meera ne kiya dev ko bye bye

Bechara Dev kismet mein NT hi likhi hai '.haye

Geet going to get DNA test and at hospital feeling alone

Missing Maan totally like us and recollects past moments already shown

Geet wanting his support today

But u don't always get what u want they say

Meanwhile MSk being rushed to OT all in pain

When Duppatta connects them all over again

She feels his presence

That's the dupatta essence

She runs in his direction calling out for him

But with Dadi NT n all to arrive she meeting him .....chances are dim

Yeh aaj ka twist

Jay entering as Aditya is next in the list

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Tanu


Faith can move mountains and heal wounded hearts;
Beauty will linger where'er hope imparts;
Love can bring comfort when life seems too tough;
But, when day is finished, strength shall be enough...!!



Inner strength is a fortress where sanity reigns,
A pillar of peace, far from grief and pain,
A place where the sunlight so effortlessly shines,
Enshrouding the spirit in warmth, undefined.
.......................

By Ykannan


Girl you are an inspiration

Today you dared which few would have done


Your determination sound


You stood your ground


You fought tooth and nail


Justice shall soon prevail


The sands of time shall fly away

For tomorrow he shall be by your bay


Your strength will be your biggest asset


Something that he shall never forget


His only regret shall be


Him being unable to see


For the girl you became today


And will always remain for everyday


His Geet!!! 😳
....................

By Shreya

jis mod se shuru ki thi zindagi,
aaj phir wahin le aayi hai kismat abhi,
aaj phir akele hain in raahon mein,
koi na ho saath jab in fizaayon mein,
jab pehle chale the toh hum the akele,
na aankhon mein sapne, na dil mein umeed liye,
aaj toh hum khud ko peeche chod aaye hain,
us manzar,us raaste ko chod aaye hain,
jahaan kabhi chale the saath,
jahaan pakda tha unka haath,
jahaan kabhi unse takrayee,
jahaan kabhi hum toh kabhi woh ghabraye,
pehle jeena ka bahna tha,
sirf ek rishta nibhana tha,
par ab unki yaadein saath le chali hoon,
jinse kaatongi apni zindagi unke bina yoon..

........................

By Darlunia

An ode to the Geet Writers:

The episode started
Exactly where yesterday ended!
I love when you display
Such perfect continuity!

Geet demands answers
From Dev and his evil partner!
Let the truth be heard so everybody understands
How an unmarried girl from HSP got pregnant!

You are pregnant? Dev asks
Alas...AS's single expression still lasts!
NT on the other hand,
Tries to stop Geet from speaking her mind!

But Geet, our fearless unstoppable heroine,
Lets NT know, she did not have an abortion!
I will not kill my baby, Geet said,
You & Dev will go to jail instead!

Geet laid her story bare,
Nothing hidden, no one spared!
Spoiling a life just for some money?
Dev, I will make sure NT & you pay!

Dev, as usual, stood and stared
Meet Geet's eyes, he would not dare!
NT remained her evil self
But Meera, thank god she left!

As Geet went to seek justice,
She could only think of Maan and his promises!
She missed his guidance and presence,
He was her strength and she felt his absence!

Maan, meanwhile, has an accident
In the elevator he was riding in!
But no one important at KC,
Seems to be aware of this catastrophe!

Meanwhile, as was expected,
The police think Geet's story is suspect
So a police woman quietly advices Geet
To go and get the baby's DNA tested!

Determined to punish the criminals
Geet rushes to the hospital!
Her sadness at Maan's perceived rejection
Stops her from seeing his condition!

But today, it was the dupatta's turn,
To remind Geet that Maan's around!
That man on the stretcher,
Oh Maan, could that be you?

So, in the end, Geet Writers,
Kudos for an episode well done!
You've left me debating the future plot
That's what I enjoy...so thank you for that!


By YKannan

Will my maange get poori??
Coz right now they are adhoori
the tent is never brought to use!!
and my aasha has just become another muse
Why is your birdie not giving much news??
that would help us pick up the cues!!

By Beagle


I set out on a journey long

To seek white blossoms of joy

I found them hidden in a sweet song

And in the soft whispers of a boy

They were in the white clouds across the night sky

sprinkled with millions of sparkling stars

I saw them through my hair, flying across my gleaming eyes

A true spectacle in the land afar

But then, the winds of change started to beat

the ground that was beneath my feet

And as the heavens began to roar

The wind shook me to my very core

I halted for a minute, alone

Infront of me was vastness of land

filled with tall trees of gloom

and not a single flower in bloom

The dark trees that stood strong and still

Were but a mask of my past

They stood firm despite the strong wind

And engulfed me, an outcast

Should I stand restive by the trees

Or should I fight the wind

Should I step out of shackles and break free

from those who have sinned.

Have I not the right to look for rainbows in the sky

Have I not the right to run through medows kissed by rain

Why cant I smell the sweetness of flowers

Why should I not shed away my pain

In my journey of loneliness so far

I have yet to find peace

The raging wind outside

Is a reflection of the storm brewing beneath

In my journey for truth

I still have miles to walk

I will not rest my weary head

Until the doors of justice unlock

....................

By Shreya_l

Ladni hai ladai dono ko is baar akele hi

Raasta ab bhi dono ka ek sa hi'.

Lad rahein hain dono jindagi ke liye hi

Vishvaas ki yeh dor najook si

Taveez hi hai jo isse bacha sakti'.

Rishte naa dil ke tute itni aasaani se

Pyaar na hoga kam is berookhi se

Samay ka hai yeh takaja

Himmat mat haar ab khol naya darwaja

Chal ab yeh hai Geet ka nanny avataar

Karein khud ko dehknein ko hum taiyaar

Jaane kya kya dekhna hai abhi baaki

Kab hogi Geet phir se Maan ki sakhi

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By Ykannan

Now I understood why the Geet on FB said: Do mom's watch the show!!!

This show is about selling its MEN
Cold showers and Black Vests
Lack of clothing in the Sets
Creates ruckus in the Den

Maan singh khurana decides to STRIP
Dev feels miffed
Denians are subjected to bare torsos
Sadly ending up like a competition strip show

Now we have Aditya on the list
He starts out covered in paint
But he is no saint
Leaving us no guesses on who will be next

By Ykannan

Maan just needs an opportunity to see GREEN

Aditya will do this in reel

As Maan goes ballistic

We will see PASSION rising in the mist

As green becomes red

Inhibitions will shed

History will offer us the best viewing

Of passion-foreplay-CON in the making!!
☺️
.................

By Beagle

witch-NT
Throw in a snail and three fat frogs
A deadly mosquito and twenty moths
Add mashed flies and a dirty flea
A centipede and a bumble bee
Put them in the cauldron and stir the broth
Utter your spells and watch it froth
She will come into being, the evil witch
With facial muscles that often twitch
Her words carry a poisonous sting
Her mind is filled with horrendous things
With her eyes she drills big wide holes
in peoples hearts and their souls
An old woman she turned to stone
She held her man and crushed his bones
She turned him pale and a yellowy green
Did acts of horror, unheard and unseen
Careful of the vile vitch
With facial muscles that often twich
She hides well under the mask of day
And she is waiting to catch you today
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Why should men always fall in love
with damsels in distress?
With eyes like doves
do they not depress?
Instead their soulful eyes never fail to impress
these men who fall in love with damsels in distress😆


By Cute Ash
Maan To NT
You made my Geet Cry
I will fry you and Dev dry
Every Drop of Tear you gave Geet
In Return I will chop u like Meat
Your Evil eye on my Business
I will snatch all your hapiness
You did not follow my Warning
So now you will never see any Morning.
By Shreya_l

Dil se dil ko hai rah

Ya rab mila de in dono ki ab har rah

Taveez ab bhi yeh keh raha

Tera meet hai yaheen tu dekh jara'.

Geet bole Maan ki jubaan

Chup bas ab chup hi rehnaa

Ab suno mera yeh kehnaa

Khel kood band bas chachu ko hai dhoondhna

Is beech chali Naintara ne yeh chaal

Karna hai office mein sabka haal behaal

Ab sabko apne raag pe nachoongi

Aur KC pe raaj ke lutf uthaoongi

Baar baar dil yeh ehsaas dilata

Who hain kareeb tujhe yeh batata

Sun le unki yeh pukaar

Chod sab aur milne ko ho ja taiyaar

By Tanu
Hope .... Geet shld have


Hope is bright shining light which keeps darkness at the bay
Hope is gentle cold breeze on a hot summer day

Hope that her Maan will come to fetch her
Hope that their luv shall keep them together

Hope is ubiquitous and free of cost
hope is the last thing Kudi ought to hv ever lost.....


Promise....dat Maan has made


I promise to b by ur side..
Thru darkness as well as light

And if ever d heavens above beckon me to appear
I shall break all barriers n stay wit u my beloved dear
.............................
By Ykannan
My life is incomplete
Without you I cannot see
No present no future
But I will live for you want me to be
Happy, but not sad

I will try see, the way you see
The world in reality
As you have taught me
Strength and fortitude
Will always be with me

I will not forget
The moments we spent
Time shall move on
But I will not drown
And soon you will find me
By Beagle
From Maan to Geet and from Geet to Maan-
In that book which is
My memory...
On the first page
That is the chapter when
I first met you
Appear the words...
Here begins a new life
By Dante Alighiri

By Beagle
She had love within her eyes,
Gleaming stones so precious
Her gaze so pure and gentle
The path she led him, auspicious
So humble, so warm
the true essence of Love.
The Love within her eyes,
like the celestial heavens above
So sincere and so true
Fierce yet Humble,
The love for him in her eyes
Will never let him stumble
Like night after day
Like June after May
Like Summer after spring
Like the sacred promise of a wedding ring
The love in her eyes will follow him
By Meg
Hum kaun hote hai pyaar ko juda karne waale
ham to sirf hai marzi-e-khuda se darne waale
Saccha pyaar hai to jeet hogi
Maan ki milan ek din Geet se hogi!
Nt ko milega seedha dhakka
Daadi ka maafi maangna is pakka
Dev karega paschatap in jail
Now everyone my mighty poem hail!

Cute_Ash
Bacha Party Make Yash Geet Mummy Daddy
And Tina Meena's Tata Bye Bye makes Chachu Saddy
Yash Uncle lost Tina Meena
Geet Thinks Yash is a Kamina
Dev's Denial to the claim of POA makes her think he is stupid
But Dev Decides to make himself Maaneet ka Cupid
Meera Churayofying Dev se Ankhiyan
Geet gonna go find her Saiyaan
Maan doing Geet's Chant Stares a her Helplessly
He cannot touch her even when he can see her
Nt Entry Maorying to stop Geet fiercely
Maan closes his eyes bcoz she cannot hear him Mumur
Geet Hunt on with Dev Nt Meera
Tabeez showing Geet Maan Milan ka Ishaara
Meera says the Truth Shock and Guilt on Geet's face
CVz took a 180 degree turn to Returto the TRP Race
By Shreya_l

Dev ka yeh guilt trip

Karega yeh TRP trip😆

Geet dhoondhe Maan ko

Dil kahe tu kyon bechain ho

Accha hi to soch

Aur Taveez ko tu khoj

Milna Maan se abhi mumkin na ho saka😕

Shukra hai serial khoj been pe nahi ruka😃

Meera ne bataya Maan ke haal ka sach

Geet hai behaal kya karein ab hum kuch

Aa gaya hai phir se saptaah ka anth

Kaise hoga hamare boriyat ka anth🤢

Tyohaar hai sab karein mazee🥳

Phir milenge Maan aur Geet se Somvaar sadhe nau baje😍

By Pallo
Pallo skipping in.....

Hmmm.....


I was a lonely lonely nurse
and saw a gal without a purse
she looked dead worried
and into the room she scurried
I caught her hand and pulled her away
I struggled to control the intoxicating sway
Ma pulse quickened rapidly
and I told her to go away stupidly
And I wished she reached ma house
but I unfortunately had a spouse!!!


Beagle & Pallo
Aditya or Yash? VICKY
Powder or Blush? FACEWASH
Hair wavy or curls? BALD
Shout or Scream? SHRIEK
Pink or Blush? PURPLE
Aditya or Yash! NAKUL
By Beagle
@Pallo-🤣
Nakul the cool
Bald and worthy of drool
Wearing a purple shirt
Is an awesome flirt
Nakul the cool,
Worthy of Pallo's drool
Makes her shriek
Makes a blush creep up her cheek
Well, Pallo, wipe it off with face wash
Dress up and get posh
Nakool is such a dicky
You'll be better off with Vicky!
By Shreya_l
Tabiyat hai kuch nasaaz aaj
bas likhoon jo aa raha hai man mein aaj

Geet dhoondhe Maan ko charon dishaoon mein
Maan bulayein Geet to apni panahoon mein

NT ne dikhaya apna triya chritra
Dev aur Meera kare koshish phir

Geet aur Maan ko milne se kya koi rok sakega
Ek duje ke liye hain, ek duje ka saath inhe hamesha rahega......

By Pallu
Maannnnnnnnnnnnnn meri Jaan, pumpkin pie, mushy wushy u r backkkkkkkkkkkkkkk☺️

Welcome song😳

aayeeye aapka intazaar tha 😳
der lagi aane mein tumako😭
shukrr hain phir bhi aaye toh 😳
aas ne dil ka saath na chhoda😳
vaise hum ghabaraayen toh
aayeeye aapa ka intazaar tha
☺️


My haalat😆

kaanto se khinch ke ye aanchal
tod ke bandhan baandhee paayal
koee naa roko dil kee udaan ko,
dil wo chalaa
aaj fir jeene kee tamannaa hain
aaj fir marane kaa iraadaa hain


By Bri
Pal bhar mein mil jaati hain duniya
Pal bhar mein mit jaati hain har dua
Saans bhi rukh jaati hain
Par tu na aati hain

Mein khud ko rok loon
Par dil hai ki manta nahin
Ki hum hojayange ek shok ka sila

Mil gaye tum mujhe
Har dua dawa ban gaye
Khil gaye har aarzoo
Askh sitam ban gaye

By Minnie
Jumping Jack Munda
Dressed as snow white ka judwa
Geetli crashing into this toota parinda
Might just break his unbroken bones ka potla
Munni Geetli will once again become badnaam
This time I think its time for some real Zandu Balm ROFLROFL

By Minnie
@ Blue - ROFLROFL Don't you think so.. par arrzz hai

MSK to Geetli:

Tere pyar mein main kya kya na bana
Kabhi bana constructionwala kabhi parathe wala! ROFLROFL

Geetli to MSK:

Tere pyar mein maine kya kya nahi liya
Kabhi lee angoothi kabhi fool gobhi ka tokra ROFLROFL


By Shreya_l

Do haftoon ki nakaali poori kasar

Maan aur Geet ke pyaar ka hai yeh asar


Gile shikve na rahen ab koi

Meet se meet mila kahani puri hui


Dilon se dil ke taar jude

Nayi hasratoon ke hain phool khile


Pyaar ka izhaar aaj dikh raha hai sab jagah

Geet barsaye apna pyaar Maan par is tarah 😊


Sach ka khulaasa ab bhi hona hai baaki

Geet batayegi Maan ko, ya Dev ki asliyat khud saamne hai aati.... 🤔



By Cute_Ash
Dev ki Kismat Phooti
Pehli waali Le gaye Bade Bhaiya
Doosri waali Le Jayenge Sab ke Saiyaan
Ab toh Dev ko poori zindagi khaani hai NT ki Roti
By Tanu
I will b there for u...
when the road is too long..
when the wind is too strong...
Wherever this journey...of ours will lead to..
I will b there for u...........................................................❤️
Through sorrows....
On the darkest nite..........
When theres heartache deep inside............
Just like a prayer.......................................................
I will be there for u....................................................................❤️
By Pooja
In your arms time stops, colors blend
The only words I hear is I love you
In your arms I feel no pain, have no fears never shed a tear
When I'm in your arms nothings matters
Day, night, night day everything seems to fade away
I feel the warmth from your arms, I see the love in your eyes
I hear the passion in your voice
I see that you love me not only for my beauty
But for me, my personality
In your arms is where I always want to be
Because I see you truly love me

xxxxxxxx

In your arms i want to stay
there is no other place i would go
you mean the world to me, you are my everything
and that i want you to always know

in your arms i should be
there is no other place else i would belong
just hold me tight
and make sure that you never do me wrong

in your arms i want to be
one like it i may never find
never wanting to let me go
never escaping my mind

in your arms i will stay
as i look in your eyes i now begin to see
that you want no one else in your arms
you just want it to be me

By Geet
A few lines on the hug..

The agony of suffering..alone, without you,
I was burning, I was yearning,
Without you- there was no sun, there was nothing,
Without you my life was a never ending bad dream,
Now you're back..back in my arms,
EVery step you take..brings you closer to that sound..
that heart which beats for you,
that heart which yearns for you
Every breath, every tear from your eyes,
Every moevement, every time you sigh,
I love you more...each moment passes by,
A moment to cherish forever, the world may pass me by

By Geet
My pillar of strength..the one who means everything,
standing in front of me..with wide open arms,
barely able to stand, and yet waiting for me..
alive, and well..waiting for me..
I am in your arms...my heart in my eyes,
This weak heart- that loved you when it cried..
The tears don't stop flowing..
to pay homage to those eyes,
those eyes that look into my heart,my soul,
and make me sigh contented sighs...

FOR I'm in your arms, and eternity may pass like this,
I'm HOME..And my life is encompassed within those arms,
You're my strength, my hope, my love,
I nearly lost you- but I'll never let you go..
I promise with a sigh as I stand in your arms...
I will stay in that moment with you forever...and the world may pass me by
By Geet
Cupping my face with his gentle loving hands,
he took me to a place in wonderland,
a place where nothing existed,
but him and me,
a place that had nothing but ecstasy
Looking into those eyes, I saw love for me,
Wiping my tears, she looked at me expectantly,
I pulled her closer, and kissed her softly,slowly, lovingly,
He kissed me..that whisper of a touch,
and yet the strongest ever reality,
his love shone clear in his eyes as I moved closer,
the intensity made me shy and smile,
I went back into his arms,for it had been a moment, a while
.............................................
By Ykannan
I wait by the shores

As the waves wash by

I wait by the sands

As the dunes blow by

I wait day and night

As the time tides by

I await everyday

I close my eyes, remember us smile

Happiness alive

I close my eyes, remember us cry

Moments pass by

I close my eyes, remember us together

Promises of forever

I close my eyes to live everyday

I want to hold on to the smile

I want to hold on to those tears

I want to hold on to those laughs

I want to hold on to those times

I want to live everyday

With you by my side

I await everyday

I shall not falter

I shall not lose hope

I will stand my guard

I will fight it through

To find a way

Find you my love

I await everyday

The stars have sighed

Hopes have been met

Destinies have been set

We are bound to meet

I have found a way

To see you my love

Today is the day

Fate has opened its doors

You steal my breath away

As you call my name

Happiness exuberant

I feel released

Here I come my love

Today is the day


I run to you my love

I see my guiding light

Your arms open wide

I ask no more

Heavens watch us meet

I have found you my love

Today is the day

..................................
By Shreya

Its not that i miss you,

Its just that i cant be without u,

Its not that i cannot be without u,

Its just that i cant live without the feel of u,

Its not my breath that needs u,

Its my heart which beats for u,

Not the world, nor the stars,

Nor the sun, nor the bars,

Can hold me away from u,

Can take my world far from u,

U are a part of me that never stops living,

U are a part of me that has all the meaning,

Lies, truth or be it pain,

Means nothing when it comes to u again,

I know not which will hurt me more,

To lie to u or stand up all alone,

The time stood still,

When u were gone,

There was nothing but darkness,

When u were not around,

But now i have u in my arms,

Thats all it matters to my strenght apart…


By Cute_Ash

NT ka Billa Haath se Nikla
Bada Samajhdaar ho raha hai Billi ka Billa
Daadi ne diya Green Signal Maaneet ki Sagayee ko
Ab kaun Bachayega Humaari Ankhiyon ko
Kyunki humein Dekhna Padega Badnaam Munni ka Nritya
Jo kardega humaari ankhiyon ka balatkaar
Bhagu Kar do koi Chamatkar
By Shreya_l

I'm with you always is all he says

In so many ways….

I'll be your strength and I'll be your shore

When you are tired of rowing your boat

Leave the oar

Leave it to me and come to me

As we are meant to be

I'll be your anchor in the midst of a tempest

Will sing you a melody soothing & quaintest

Don't fear my love

Leave it to me and come to me

As we are meant to be😍

Pain that thou hath seen

Will be the last with all my heart I mean

I'll be your gleam on the darkest night

You are my maiden & I'm your knight

So fear not my beloved

And hear what I say

I'm with you always…..in so many ways

...........................

By Pooja

I try to find the words
to express the feeling in my heart;
I try to show you that I care,
but I don't know where to start.
I guess I'll start right here
and I guess I'll start right now.
I'll tell you that I love you
and I'll tell you why and how.

You are the one I want to lay next to
when my time has passed.
You are the one I've given myself to
and you will be the last.
You are the one I want for life,
until the day I die.
You are the one God sent for me,
to be with me, and that is no lie.
You are the one who brightens my day,
with your smile bright and glowing.
You are the one whom I wake up for
each and every morning.


Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin Tere Bin Main Kya, Kuch Bhi Nahin Meri Jaan Mein, Teri Jaan Hai Hoo, Saathi Mere Meri Duniya Hai, Tujh Mein Kahin ...

By Minnie
I want a Daaku Daadi
Is it too much to ask, sadly?
Nain needs a partner
Her Billoo is on the reformer
Sam Aunty just won't cut it
She will be a damp squib
Munda needs some jor ka jhatka
Roj roj ka romance is just too meetha
Daaku Daadi will be a spicy pickle
To Nain's Devlish tickle!
😈😆😈
By Geet
You are my everything,
father,mother, friend, lover,
my diamonds,my sun,my moon and all stars,
my universe is in you, my life is in you,
If I'm not with you, there's nothing else,
there's no me without you
You are my eyes, my heart, my every sigh,
you are my wish, my dream, my every cry,
I don't want to be anything without you,
By Shreya

Woh hain yahaan toh saath hai yeh jahaan,

Woh hain jo paas toh na dil ko aur kisi ki aas,

Ab toh jeena hai unke liye,

Ab toh har saans tere liye,

Har lamhe mein unki yaad hai,

Unke bina jeena bhi dushvaar hai,

Na saath ho woh toh jeena hai kya,

Woh na ho paas so labon ko seena hai kya,

Unke liye toh kaanto pe chal jaye,

Unke liye toh duniya se lad jaaye,

Akele toh raahon pe chal sakte hain,

Jab tak hai vishvaas woh raaste mein kahin khade hai,

Haath phalaye humein sambhlane ke liye,

Humein har baar ke tarah girne se bachane ke liye..

second one


I knew what i lost when u were not around,

I knew not what was presnet when i couldnt hear ur sound,

The sound of ur heart, the sound of the breath that kept alive my heart,

The pain was less when i knew u were some where,

But the pain was more when i knew where u were ,

Where u were and u wouldnt talk to me,

I could see the eyes that held me to them,

I could feel the presence of the smell that belonged to him,

It could be no one but you,

No one who could love me as u do,

Ur love was my strenghth when i faltered,

Ur love gave me hope when i had given up,

Ur love was a medicine when i was ill,

Ur love was knowledge when i lost the light,

I know not what the world is without u,

But i know now my world cannot exist without u…


By Tanu

Maan

Dheemi Dheemi si hassi
Jhuki jhuki si nazar
Qatil yeh adda teri
mar gaye hum aur.. hui na kisiko khabar


Geet

Geet kehke jiya chura liya
Nazron mein apne humme basa liya
Azi hum to bethe hain issi inteezar mein
Ke kab aap aaein aur mehka de daman iss bahar mein


By Pooja

If you do love me, you will find me out.


Over the mountains
And over the waves,
Under the fountains
And under the graves;
Under floods that are deepest,
Which Neptune obey,
Over rocks that are steepest,
Love will find out the way.

When there is no place
For the glow-worm to lie,
When there is no space
For receipt of a fly;
When the midge dares not venture
Lest herself fast she lay,
If Love come, he will enter
And will find out the way.

You may esteem him
A child for his might;
Or you may deem him
A coward for his flight;
But if she whom Love doth honour
Be conceal'd from the day-
Set a thousand guards upon her,
Love will find out the way.

Some think to lose him
By having him confined;
And some do suppose him,
Poor heart! to be blind;
But if ne'er so close ye wall him,
Do the best that ye may,
Blind Love, if so ye call him,
He will find out his way.

You may train the eagle
To stoop to your fist;
Or you may inveigle
The Phoenix of the east;
The lioness, you may move her
To give over her prey;
But you'll ne'er stop a lover-
He will find out the way.

If the earth it should part him,
He would gallop it o'er;
If the seas should o'erthwart him,
He would swim to the shore;
Should his Love become a swallow,
Through the air to stray,
Love will lend wings to follow,
And will find out the way.

There is no striving
To cross his intent;
There is no contriving
His plots to prevent;
But if once the message greet him
That his True Love doth stay,
If Death should come and meet him,
Love will find out the way!😳
........................

By Jaya

There are hugs and HUGS
Hands on arms hugs
Around the chest hugs
And the waist grasp hugs
But, cheek to cheek and ear to ear hugs
Means arms around the neck hugs
These passion filled hugs
Are the very best type of hugs

😆

By Cute Ash
Colours make your life colourful😊
Geet's Colour Transformation to Day 1 of their first Meet😃
Dev in Popat coloured shirt didn't luk awful😆
Maan in maroon half uunbuttoned shirt makes me stand on ma feet😳
Maan Can make even a Kabadkhaana Office in an hour
Geet ki Hukumbaazi on Maan Singh Khurana ka Character
Maan Singh Khurana Promise to be Joru ka Ghulam Forever
MSK still making Nurses and ward boys do labour
Lift Mein bhi Maan in SRK mode
Geet ka Partly Confession makes Maan Suspicous
Dev knows NT's Behaal Conscious
He decides to fulfil the promise of suffering Pain and happiness on every road
Geet lost in her Devar ka Thought
Maan lost in Nangi Pungi Girls ka Photo
Geet runs back to gaze at the girls on her Toe
Geet hiding her worry from Maan is Caught
Dev-NT enter
Maan questioning abt da Meeting of Bhabhi Devar
NT's entry makes Maan furious
Now Maan-NT faceoff is gonna be hilairous
By Shreya_l

Yeh dard chupana nahin aasan

Par tujh se badkar nahi koi mera yahan

Rang teri jindagi mein

Bhar doon bas yehi hai aas….

Jalim hai jamana …

Karna hoga tujhe mujh par vishvaas

Sach ka khulasa to hona hai ab

Itna kuch to keh diya hai sabne jab

Apni is kashmakash ko mein kya naam doon

Haalaat ban gayein hain kuch aise kisko ilzaam doon

Meri sharam, jijhak aur dar ka tujhe hai gumaan

Par is uljhan se nikalne ka raasta nahin aasan

Bas Dua hai tujh par khuda ki rehmat ho mere 'Maan'...

Edited by devilsden - 14 years ago
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@devilsden!! take ur tim!😆
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Its me Geets, can we post pics here
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@All: ask doubts via PM :) Please :)

leave this place for comments :)

@Mi7chimes: PM me your name :) ok u already did.

@Geets: PM me those images, i'll add in teh images section with your name:)

ignore spelling errors...
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i gtg! breakfast time. dad nudging me 😆 will edit later.
Edited by devilsden - 15 years ago
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Reserve.... will comment when the corner is ready..... 😃
@neha - awesome banner neha.....
@ mehr - gal too good.... i loved ur quotes n poetry selection......
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Reserved 😊

@Tweeny (Neha) i love u!!!

Thats an awesome banner 🤣

@Mehr .. Twin u r one in a billion 🤗🤗🤗 this is awesome 🤗
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Yay!! 😊 It opened. Love the banner!! 😆

Will be back sometime this week, I hope. 😕
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Love the Banner! Hugs Neha! Hugs Mehr!

Unreserved
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