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Posted: 14 years ago
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in pointers :

1) d whole weddin ambience ws gud.....👍🏼
2)vows scene nice...expressions gud...😃
3)maan's gurtish smile.....yup i wsnt lk MSK...bt guess he ws super excited abt d day n expressin his feelings 2 geet finally...he mus b doin dis fr d vry 1st time in life....
also he nva ws kinda fond of kids..as he hd mentioned earlier....bt d smile n minglin wid d kids .....r mre of changing signs.....which he mus hv developed aftr fallin in love wid geet...
also i lkd d part wer geet wid her hand on stomach..wen she sees maan wid dos kids....thinks dat is i kinda signal frm babaji...dt maan wud b a gud partner n father fr her kid....sumhin lk dt....
4) hw much i lovedddd d CVs ...esp nissar...sry doods...😆.....
for choosin pee loon pee loon ..frm d time hd heard d song fr d 1st ime sum 2-3 months bk...hd alwaz wantd2 c dis song 2b picturised on maaneet...d song is bold n wud hv looked unsuitable on maaneet a month bk.......bt nw fr dis phase d song ....perfect.....wid all dt passionate love b/n maaneet...d song suits 2 d T....😍..😍..😍.......
bt here...d execution cud hv bn better...it looked rushed....d paras esp..😕..
n der ws absolutely no need of shoving mahhhiiiiiii in b/n pee loon lines..👎🏼..nt dt i hate mahi...bt......wen dey hv such beautiful song which suits maaneet n d situation so well
dn y is d need of d regular BG der..???....
5) jus 2 show d dramatic n shockin twist at d end of d epi.....sum fab oh so romantic maaneet moments wer edited....😡👎🏼👎🏼👎🏼..........
d idea of shwin d shockin truth revealation at d end is gud....bt fr dt it wud hv bn better if d last 2-3 epis wud hv bn properly edited so dt v wudnt hv missed sum sp moments lk d flower 1 which ws shown in SBS....
6) wsnt d cameo suppose 2 last fr a week atleast.....???......Mrdemello ka ab kya kaam......nyway may b nw d couple ll meet geet n maan separately...😆😆😆
7) d last scene i wud hv prefered a close up wen geet reveals d truth
bt nyway .......
m sure d black n white part is gonna b repeated on monday...😆
8) Dev : d guy looked gud.....bt yes seems lk he is hellbent on gettin mre screen space....bt nyway wid d dev confronatation coming soon as well d guy hs an imp part 2 play....
1 suggestion 2 d CVs if dey wanna giv sum imp 2 his character as well...dn rather go frm sum grey shades in it...dn mkin it positive.....bt dis can b in d later stage.....
ovrall a gud epi...
i seldom rate d epis...hv done it only 1ce b4...bt 2day me gonna rate....
pee loon tere neele neele naino se shabnam
pee loon teri saundhi saundhi sason se hardam..
pee loon hai peene ka mausam.........
9/10 fr d song selection.........gurmeet's performance...brilliant..his eyes mus say convey lot dn d actual dialogues......drashti superb...abhinav ws gud.....
Edited by adits7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
Want to write something..🥺
Reserved😆
-EDIT-
Okay so i lost the mood for writing already. 😆 Just try to make it fast and short!
Episode overall was wonderful!
Geet entering in----- She looked GORGEOUS in that brown Sari. The wardrobe department have got really good taste in Indian wear ! Loved it! Maan looking at her walking in, that whole moment was just perfect!
Pamelo ello and Rosey Rose -------- Them saying how Geet shd be the bride instead and that it shd have been Maan and Geet's wedding rather....ahh this was nt required i feel...😆 I don't know Pamelo n Wifey saying that just felt even more fake than they already are! 😆😆😆.....
Ring Moment ------ This i love! The way the priest was talkin abt the ring and how Geet looked at her own engagement ring..and Maan watching her..........LOVELY! It signified quite alot. Those words that the priest were saying, it reflected on Maan and Geet very much! The best part was that they both knew it!
You may kiss the BRIDE ------- So priest says that..and even before Pamelo could kiss his rosey on her rosey lips, Munda starts to walk forward towards Geet 😆😆😆😆 Dude that ain't you wedding! I know Pamelo told ya that this shd have been your wedding....but it ISN'T! So maintain the distance! 😆😆😆 and CONNNTROL PLEASE! *Haan!* 😆 Geet looked nervous....and of course Maan coudn't walk forward coz Pamelo blocked his way..BUT did u see the way he looked up at Pamelo...?? 😆😆😆 Totally annoyed i must say! 😆😆😆
Picture perfect ------- Love this as well! The way they were uncomfortable at first..and then Maan putting his arms around Geet...and when it says CHEESE..they both look at each other...Loved the snap shot...😳 Though yes this is the USUAL cliched picture taking scene (KKHT)...but heck it doesn't matter! Maaneet made it look all the more betta! 😉
Maan with kids ------ Awww what a cute moment! Yes his smile might have been funny here..BUT i coudn't care coz he looked adorable playing with those kids..and for a moment i was like "Ahh bless him! He'll make a GREAT father!"............Like how this scene made reference to Geet and her baby...it was a nice moment..Geet seeing Maan interacting with those kids...she might have gotten a flash in that moment of Maan being the father of her child...
Pee Loon moment ------ Will just say it was beautiful overall..Romance was in the air...Maan's passion..Geet feeling uncomfortable yet loving in and every touch of Maan's...but at the same time trying to keep a distance coz she has a truth to tell first....
Maan's lines in here.................GREAT! 👏...The way he said.."tell me ...i promise to be by your side no matter what"...and when he held onto her hands.... and asked her to say first....Aww he really thought that she was gonna say it..BUT judging from the way Geet was looking, all nervous like, he SHOULD have known that smth was up...OR maybe he was just lost in here.........😳..When he said that line "tell me..and i'll stand by you no matter what"......that just pulled the trigger and Geet FINALLY told "I'm pregnant"..
And boy what a moment!! PHEWWW!!
Breathtaking performance by both Guru and Drashti here!! 👏👏👏👏👏 Excellent display of the RIGHT emotions....Geet crying..and Maan not believing at first..but as her words slowly sink in.......he goes into a state of TOTAL shock! I REALLY LOVED his expressions here! Guru is a killer when it comes to speaking through his eyes..and DD....flawless acting...when her tears fell down her cheeks...i COULD ALREADY feel her pain! .........
Unnecessary scene ------- Dev on his bike! It was PURE DISTRACTION AND TOTALLY
ANNOYING!! WHY..?
(a) coz it's Dev 😆
(b) He was looking cool...??..😕 I mean what was with the attire...random.....?? Ahhh YES!
(c) It didn't fit with the "Pee Loon" moment! I mean we were seeing M and G in Pee Loon..and then the scene changes to Abhi on the bike..with a diff BG score..ANNOYING OR WHAT?!! 😡
Another redundant scene......Dev being exposed..I mean what was for the need..? That too so much..?..Sheeshhhh!! Plus he was having that SAME flashbacks as the episode before!! The CVs were just wasting time..and giving Abhi more screen space..which didn't even make much of an impact on the episode! Hmmph..Giving him screen space is fine..but it shd be meaningful..!! That bed scene..was just...nt required...
PRECAP----------- Maan walking away backwards slowly..........after letting go of her hands...I totally expected him to behave this way! I loved how he's walking backwards and still looking at her.......Just goes to show he's too shocked to even turn around..and walk away...this slow walk is even more painful...and the BG score..Man......So sadd..:(........
Dev entering..i think he might see Geet..?? Or maybe not..but i know for sure he won't tell Maan just yet..coz i don't think the CVs would want to show Maan handling two strong blows! I would rather this one blow from Geet's side alone..and they make him think carefully with a clear mind!
Promo ------- Seems like Maan is VERY angry here! He would be, i mean that is a huge secret being revealed from Geet's side..Just hope he manages to cool down..hear her out...think straight..and accept her.........that anger is scary......I love it..but i feel sad ....😆😆😆😆..i'd actually wanted to see Maan cry buckets for Geet.....😆...lets see if that happens...😆
What i'm thinking is that...Maan STILL hasn't heard Geet telling him that she loves him...So maybe he'll go into thinking that Geet doesn't love him..??...and that was the ONLY actual thing she wanted to reveal..that she is preggy and thats it...😕...
I hope he knows that she feels the same way for him as how he feels for her!!
Episode Overall : 9.5 for the BRILLAINT Acting by DD and GC..and scenes..😃
Not 10 on 10..becoz of the Dev scene and certain lines from Pamelo ello' and Rosey...😆😆😆 I STILL can't stand them!
BRING me back Nakul instead!! 😆😆😆
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

opps double post...my net nthin wrkin fr me 2day.....😡

Edited by adits7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Here's my take ...

Today's episode begins at the DeMello wedding. Geet – the bridesmaid is late. As Maan explains her absence, he senses her arrival.

- Loved the way she peeks from behind the curtain, seeks out Maan and only on a nod from him does Geet, resplendent in a saree steps forward. All eyes r on her as she walks to the podium and takes her place near the bride.

- Maan has eyes only for Geet….tere bin jee nahin lagta, tere bin jee nahin sakta; tujhpe mein hare maine vaare do jahaan

- Bride to tum lagti ho….agar aap log bole toh aap dono ki shaadi yahin pe karwa dey. Maan is not prepared for that question….BUT what does Geet say …. 'Nahi'….remember Maan, this is her 'Truth' fullness.

- 'Friends, we've all gathered here', begins the priest 'to bless the Demellos as they retake their wedding vows Do you promise in HAPPINESS and in SORROW, ZINDAGI KI HAR MOD PAR, HAR HAAL MEIN, ek doosre ka SAATH DENGE? … Yeh ring prateek hain inke us VISHWAAS ka, jo JEEVAN SE MRITYU tak inke saath hoga. Yeh ring pehen kar aap ek doosre ke PYAAR KE ATOOT BANDHAN me jood jayenge which will NEVER END….just like the ring which has no beginning and is ETERNAL.

- As the priest says these words, Geet looks at the ring on her finger and remembers how Maan had placed it there. These words seem to enlighten Geet as she looks at Maan who is thinking the same thing and smiles softly and blinks his eyes in affirmation. The ring was placed on the bride's finger by Mr Demello…so it seemed like Maan was saying those vows to Geet. Parineeta Theory, DB, Jo ?

- Oye hoye – when the priest says 'U may now kiss the bride'… why is Maan moving towards Geet ? <giggle>… if only Mr Demello did not loom in the middle … LOL

- Maan is keenly aware that Geet wants to express her feeling to him but he wants that moment to take place in a solitary place. Versus, Geet is afraid that what she has to say is so profound, she may stop breathing before her truth comes out.
- Maan senses the urgency with which Geet wants to talk to him but he misinterprets it as eagerness.

DEV SCENE
– One word - Y.U.C.K !!!!!!!! WTH happened ? Why did you have to insert this scene in such a critical Maaneet episode ? Who cares about Dev's bare torso or his bike ??? You guys ruined this episode for me with this utterly worthless scene.!!!!

MAAN PLAYING WITH THE CHILD

- Loved the scene where Geet finds Maan plays with the little flowergirl. GC loved ur grin too… a grin from your heart….very very sweet.
- Babaji…kuch kehna chahte hain aap ? I believe the CVs are giving us pointers with this scene, just like Geet noticed, that Maan will accept her baby (a girl too…..yessssss) and he will be a great, happy dad. And the best part is, after he sets the girl down and looks at Geet, he is not conscious that she saw him playing with that child !

THE KISS

- Oh so so so beautiful Blew me away ! Awesome execution, Nissar, GC, Drashti !!!!
- The kiss on her forehead signifies his love and respect for her.
- The kiss on her eyes signifies his love for the truthfulness in her heart. Her eyes are a mirror of her heart…remember what Maan said yesterday?

THE TRUTH
- Tumhara intezaar khatam hua…aaj tumhare dil mein joh bhi hai bol do geet.
- Woh baat jo baar baar tumhari hoton mein aake ruk jaati hain, bolo na Geet.
- Tumhe ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahin hai Geet.
- Mein har mod par, har kadam mein tumhare saath hoon Geet.
- Maan is fully expecting Geet to say ILU. He holds her hands (probably sensing her nervousness)
- Notice how Geet lowers her eyes – Maan is unable to read them
- Notice the solitary tear trickling down her cheek – Maan does not like to see tears in Geet's eyes
- These 2 signs should have warned him.
- And then Geet lifts her eyes as her tear rolls down …. Did I sense Maan bracing himself at this point or was I mistaken ?
- And then the fateful words – Mein pregnant hoon !
- Maan goes into shock, freezes, drops her hands, turns and walks away … without turning around. Wow, Gurmeet, wow….fantastic, awesome, behtereen expression.

I expect Maan to be humongously angry … but his anger is not directed to the fact that she is pregnant but because, after all that they'd been through, he expected her to confide in him. Expecting a lot of emotion from Maan on Monday but I sincerely hope that he does not break Geet. I don't think so because there were so many pointers in this episode that suggested otherwise. Look out once he comes back to earth, Dev, NT and possibly even her family in HP ! I wouldn't want to be in their shoes !

I'm not that devastated as I'd expected. The episode get a 4 star from me – u lost one star because u brought in Dev – that too with a bare torso. A bare torsoed villain or a biker villain was totally unnecessary in today's episode and I don't care how many females hyperventilate. Definitely not me, not now, not ever.

Over n out...
Edited by starlite7 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Every Rose has a thorn, for today's episode this is the Song

Time waits for no one,
So do you want to waste some time?
Oh, oh tonight?
Dont be afraid of tomorrow,
Just take my hand, i'll make it feel so much better tonight

Suddenly my eyes are open,
Everything comes into focus, oh,
We are all illuminated,
Lights are shining on our faces, blinding

Swing me these sorrows,
And try delusion for a while,
Its such a beautiful night,
You've got to lose inhibition,
Romance your ego for a while,
Come on, give it a try

Suddenly my eyes are open,
Everything comes into focus, oh,
We are all illuminated,
Lights are shining on our faces, blinding
We are, we are, blinding,
We are, we are, blinding

Suddenly my eyes are open,
Everything comes into focus, oh,
We are all illuminated,
Lights are shining on our faces, blinding
We are, we are, blinding,
We are, we are, blinding

Song: Illuminater
Artist: The Band Hurts


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=d9mupQHI4tw&feature=fvst[/YOUTUBE]
Edited by Poli.Geek - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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To all who are upset at the Munda for walking off, this is a big thing that he just heard, it wasn't like, hey I stole you rumaal or something trivial. So give him some time.

I think our Munda is going to go through the 5 stages of grief.

1. Denial
2. Anger
3. Bargaining
4. Depression
5. Acceptance.

This model is also known as the Kulber-Ross Model. Often people dealing with death or terminal ilness go through these stages.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@polki r u medical student????
yup i agree mudna will go trough these stages(ideally he shud bt cant be sure of cvs)
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Posted: 14 years ago
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in d new promo d mirror scene is d same which ws shown inSBS durin dt jhula...lifting wala segment...

geet in d mirror maan brks it......only dey din shw maan dn😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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One question 😃
Did we get a real kiss on the forehead..or was it those fake one..Like on Monday episode..Where GC was actually kissing his own thumb..😆😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Yet wathcing da epi but was it me or was the father of the DEmello ka marriage ghurroying Geet including Maan😆

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