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-Premeena-

@-Premeena-

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#21

she went away but ended up lying unconscious somewhere. then the family found out and brought her back home this is when she decides she will not anywhere and that this might after all be the place where she belongs...=)

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sona rai

@sona-rai

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#22

awesome 😊👏loved it a lot👏👏

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minuu

@minuu

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Zamee! Loved it.. really enjoyed reading it, really welly written.. your such a talented writer!

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-Premeena-

@-Premeena-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

thanx alot guys... m really really glad you liked it ...=)

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Hetal

@ibelieveinpink

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

ending is so beautifully written!! love it!

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-honeydew-

@-honeydew-

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

very nice .. the fear of losing someone you love increases the intensity of wanting the person more ... there are some lines i really loved in this ....

"My heart beat faster, an echo of fear in my memory. A vision of a woman with a kind warm face, draped in a white saree with a streak of white in her hair filled my head. Where was my mother?... but she wasn't my mother was she?"

"He kissed me right infront of everyone, but I forgot the audience quickly. This was easy and right, no division, no confusion, no objection, just maan and his geet and we would stay like this foever, bonded to never fall apart."

And he kissed me in the most unplatonic way possible.😆

sorry about the delay .. wanted to take sometime off and write ...!!

but it was lovely ...!! emotions were brought out so beautifully between the two... i couldnt have asked for better ...!!

love,
niha