Pal bhar ke liye (SS) - part 3, page 5 updated - Page 3

Omg, this was so much fun to read. Your writing is so fresh and engaging! Absolutely love it! Continue soon! This is really brilliant stuff! :D

This was so hilarious...confusion level...irritation levela and finally determination level.... continue asap...

awww soooo cute. already acting like a hubby-wife. Love it!

Really loved it!!!

Apni bhi soorat buri tho nahi hai -2

Kabhi tu bhi

O kabhi tu bhi humara deedar kar le

Jhoota hi sahi

So finally after trying on a million dresses and sarres it was time for her to try on the black saree which Maan had picked for her. Holding on to the saree in front of her, she turns here and there studying the effect of the fabric on her skin, "Not bad. Actually it looks really nice. Hai Babaji, saach me is there anything that he does not know how to do." Picking up the blouse though, "chi, chi, yeh kaise pahan kar sakti hoon. I will just go out and tell Daadimaa to see if there is another blouse or I cant wear this". Quickly taking the blouse outside so that she can go and complain (I mean, talk to) Daadimaa, she stops short at the site which she sees. Standing there was Maan in all his attitude and there they were swarming him again. Why is that girls always start swarming him, haven't they heard by now that he is engaged. "Geet, fake engagement remember" She tells herself, " Yeah but not for the world" "Really, girls today, so shameless". Looking around she also sees that the respective boyfriends, husbands, etc are also busy glowering at Maan. Hummmm............. Daadimaa seemed to be busy picking out more things for her to try. Looking down at the blouse, "Good thing I did not get to talk to Daadimaa yet". Rushing back to the changing room, she struggles on with the blouse. Now as for the blouse, it was ok from the front, a well sleeveless fitting blouse in black with silver details, it was the back which was the problem, it was just strips of sheer black fabric held together by multiple strings. "Mr. Maan Singh Khurana, lets see how you like the black saree, after all it was your choice". Wearing the saree and making sure that it was decently covering her back, she loosens her bound hair, she walks out again in search of Daadimaa.

"Ok, keep calm, don't fidget, hold onto to the pallu tightly, this was a bad idea, but aab pehen liya hai, ok, just show this to Daadimaa and change back into my clothes". Before she looses her courage and walks back into the dressing room, she walks to Daadimaa. Stopping as soon as she stands in front of Daadimaa, she quietly taps her shoulder for her attention. "Daadimaa (indicating to herself), theek hai?". As Daadimaa admires her, asking her to turn and show her the back, suddenly she starts feeling uncomfortable as if she was being scorched. Quietly rubbing her neck at the uncomfortable feeling, she concludes being admired by Daadimaa and before she can call That man over to ask his opinion, she turns around to quickly scurry back to the changing room. But to her dismay, there he stands not even a feet away, glowering at her. No wonder she had been feeling like that. "Babaji, after all the way he acts, why does he always become like this, this is like the chor kotwal ko daate waisa". With this we queue the internal monologue "ok Geet puttar, buck up, keep praying to Babaji, don't cover, you know what they say about dangerous animals, covering or showing signs of weakness can lead to being completely eaten, ok keep looking straight, chin up, try to spot the nearest exit and go to changing room". Now due to the very involved nature of her self talking, she does not realize that Maan was speaking to her. Now she does not realize this but that was mistake number 2. You see, Maan had been counting down, Mistake 1 was wearing this outfit in the range of people other than him, it really did not help that all the males within viewing distance had been gawking at her the moment she walked out in that saree.

So back to the present, Maan was speaking and Geet was not listening and ok course, the not listening caused the happening of Mistake number 3. You see Maan was in a round about way, asking her to get out of there and change her clothes. But all she hears when she finally tunes into the conversation is ".......Geet, tum humesha aise kyun karti ho". Of course, Geet being Geet, takes offense, and in typical Geet style starts arguing with him. Which leads to Mistake 3, while she had been arguing with maan, she does not realize she let go of her pallu, and of course, now with the arm movements which she was making, the back of her blouse was very, very visible and of course for the moment which she turns to look at Daadimaa for something, Maan finally gets to see why the men were gawking even more at her. Finally giving up speech, all we hear is the low growls emanating from him. Ok course, by now finally reading the danger signs, Geet takes his moment of distraction and slips away to the changing room.

Now as you know, after so many strikes, it is expected that there must be consequences, and with Geet's mistake number 3, there of course must be some sort of reprise from Maan. So as Geet had slinked off to the changing room to get back into her normal, comfortable clothes, Maan after breaking out of his stupor follows. For one to guard her, he was not taking any chances, who knew the intentions of men, and second to met out the appropriated punishment. So, as she is in the changing room, standing in front of the mirror once again struggling with the strings of her blouse. He quietly slips into the booth behind her, he grabs a hold of her around her waist and pulls her in, covering her mouth before she yelp at the sudden intrusion. As soon as she realizes who it is holding her, she gives up any sign of struggle , only filled with curiosity and a very familiar apprehension and tension. Holding herself still, she waits, looking into the eyes which were holding her mesmerized, like a prey held paralyzed by a cobra.

He proceeds to let go of her mouth and uses that hand to move aside any hair which is covering the nape of her neck. Still looking into her eyes, he bends down and kisses her nape. Taking her gasp and surprise at that, he uses her distraction to quickly but lightly bite down where he had kissed, once down he again kisses that spot. Now, at this point Geet was looking on with eyes half closed at this display of possessiveness and is given in completely to him. Sharing one last look with her, and now with a smile on his lips, he slips back out of the changing room, his task accomplished. Now no one could look at her without knowing she was his.

Of course, our story continues on from there, we can imagine the consequential questioning and teasing endured by both Maan and Geet from Daadimaa, the blushing and stuttering from Geet, the possessiveness, smuggless, and blushing displayed by Maan. And with that concludes the shopping trip for the engagement of Maan and Geet. As you have noted there is still no progress in the plan of maan to make Geet confess, but its safe to say that with happened in the changing room, there cant be doubt about just how real the feelings between them are.

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Fin.

wow....that was really awesome....

plz continue. would love to see how maan brings his plan to success. yes i have no doubt he'l be successful...though knowing he is up against geet...the unpredictable one...it'l not turn out the way he'd envisioned...but successful nonetheless.

*speechless* ☺️

Omg...I love ur writing stlye