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-Blossy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: uzmam1

Ankitia,

Surely this has to continue .. it cannot be left here ..

now please please continue to update .. and quickly!!

greeat job!!

Uzma xx

Thank you so much Uzma.I wrote this piece as a one shot after seeing Maans condition yesterday.I want him to fight for his love so... but I have a Fanfiction which I update regularly

Here is the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1448938/fairytale-in-the-middle-of-my-life-complete-pg36

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-Blossy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: JhankaaR000
SUPERB

Loved it to the core.....
dadi's dialogue is just brilliant. I wish they could use that dialogue in the serial also. If not whole then, this line....It's really magical...

"You say that love hurts Maan,but thats not true.Lonliness hurts.Rejection hurts.Losing someone hurts.Everyone confuses these things with love.But in reality,love is the only thing in this world that covers up for all the pain and makes us feel wonderful again."

With Luv,
Jhankaar

Thank you sooooooo much Jhankar.Yeah Dadi really can be inspirational sometimes....😆

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-Blossy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Prinnia
Hey ankita

AWESOME work⭐️
really beautiful
loved it
thanks for the PM

love
prinz

Thanks Prinnia.

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-Blossy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: Jes75
Real nice post Ankita and pls continue writing ....to fight for love and then gain it is far more satisfying and i think thats what Maan will do now.....

Thanks Jes I will continue writing ofcource...

But this piece was written as an OS I really dont know how to continue this.However I will continue my FF : Fairytale in the middle of my life😊

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Ayesha_MSK

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

Quitting is out of the question...when it gets tough we gotta fight some more 😃

You encaptured Maan's feelings and predicament really well and loved Daadi being the love guru 😉 😆

Congrats for writing your first OS and thanks for the P.M. 😊

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-Blossy-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK
Quitting is out of the question...when it gets tough we gotta fight some more 😃

You encaptured Maan's feelings and predicament really well and loved Daadi being the love guru 😉 😆

Congrats for writing your first OS and thanks for the P.M. 😊

Thank you so much...Yeah Dadi is all about playing cupid and being the love Guru😉

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Julie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

AWESOME!!!

"Because she was the heaven my heart could hold." such a beautiful line ... ❤️

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afsha

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+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Loved ur OS

U potrayed the feelings of Maan so well

The way Dadi explained all thgs to Maan it was jus sho fab n clear

The photos matched the situation very well

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hapinezz13

@hapinezz13

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+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Loved the last line!!!

Beautiful piece Ankita!!

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Tressa

@Tressa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

Ankita lovely ya.... Loved the way u described Maan & his feelings... esp the line

But she pushed me away from herself .She said she didn't care about all this.She said she didnt want my love.She said she didn't love me.She said so many lies together."..

I really want Maan to win in his fight for LOVE...

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