FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet part 96 new thread - Page 30

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Posted: 14 years ago
😭😭😭😭😭😭😭it makes my heart sink see her quiet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di tum ro man we know that these parts r much needed for that dumbhead Maan to do what geet has being doing all along. He needs to take care of her,
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Posted: 14 years ago
great part! I feel bad for both Maan and Geet. Update soon!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
muski,

just caught with the last few updates...!!!!

omg omg omg...poor geet ... gosh, i'm feeling so bad for her, yet her love for maan is so self less and unconditional and not to forget, irrevocable...!!!!!! šŸ‘

and maan can now feel what he gave her for the last 50 or so updates.....!!!! he's in pain cos she;s in pain.. he cant see her ignore him...!!! hmmm.... well i don t really sympathize with him cos he gave the same pain to geet for so long..!!! his ego kept coming in his way..!!!

but i'd like to see them happy .... well.. no worries..!!! they wud be happy.... some time right????😃

update soon...!!!!!

soumya
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Posted: 14 years ago
i think she is in denial that he bby is gone n soo she does not want to blame anyone 4 it!!
cont soon n thnx
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update height the lady breaks!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Okay Muskanp .. so where do i start .. hmm okay i spent my whole day on reading all those chapters of Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet😳 .. You needed only one day to get me being addicted to this story .. u hve amazing writing skills .. loved all of ur chapters šŸ‘.. especially how u describe their feelings for each otherā¤ļø .. and now i cant wait for the next chapter 😭.. Keep it up .. keep smiling .. and pls add me to Your pm list .. :)

Love SiašŸ¤—

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Posted: 14 years ago
hey
very sad part, man
dont understand how geet could keep so much bottled up inside her
well hope everything is better
do continue soon
Maheen xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
update soon....pls.......cant wait so long...
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Posted: 14 years ago

tum pas nahi aathi thi ..samjh gaya tha ki tum sharmathi hoo..
aise door javoo ghi to main kaise sambhaloo ga aapne aap ko...

part 76

geet please mujhe ek bar maffi magne to do...
kehne do mujhe...jo mera dil main hain...
tumhari ankhee aise dehkthi hain mujhe..jaise mujh sa koi
vastha nahi rakhna chathi ho...geet mujhe aapne se door math karoo..
please geet..mera itne kareeb ho kar bhi tum mujhse kitne door hoo..

maan gets ready & comes for breakfast...
nakul serves the breakfast..
maan - geet kanha hain
nakul - ji woh to..krish baba ke kamre main hain..
maan takes his plate & goes to krishs room
geet was feeding krish..he stands next to her & feeds her..
geet turns in suprise...
geet - aap..? main baad main kaa loonghi..
aap kaa lijiya..
maan - he still continues to feed her...(she takes a bite)
geet - aap ko office ke late ho raha hoga
maan - nahi..main aaj office nahi jaa raha..ghar se kaam kar rahoon hain
geet looked away..she felt spicy..maan quickly passed her water..
she sipped & looked at maan..wondering why is he doing all this
maan could read that in her eyes...he did'nt bother explaining..
after they finished maan called nakul & asked him to clear the plates..

maan spend the day working & geet was busy with krish and priya
maan walked every now & then to check if geet was not stressing her self
after lunch..maan made sure geet had her medicines..
he did'nt have check on krish at all..geet was already doing
a great job..saying or doing anything would just hurt geet further
geet was geting over involved with krish..
she was getting particular about..wat he ate..when he selpt
his medication..at night ..she would get up & check on him..
every hr..her obsession was taking a toll on her health ..
maan tried talking to her about taking it easy...
she would snap back..
it was a week since they had been back from hospital
maan - geet ready hojavoo ..hume hospital jana hain
geet - kyun ..krish to teehk hain aab..
did he complain of any pain..wat happened
she rushd to krishs room...maan held her back..
maan - geet..tumhari dressing karena keliya jana hain..
geet - lekhin krish?
maan - he is fine..
geet - mujhe nahi jana..
maan - please tumhara dressing karana hain..
geet - krish akela reh jaya ga..use kuch chaihya to..
nahi nahi main nahi javoogi
maan - daadi aur NT hain na..priya bhi aana wali hain
geet - nahi main nahi javoo gi
maan - geet please zidd math karoo
geet walks away..maan pulls her back & tum chalrhi hoo..
he just lifts her & puts her in the car...
she protest & start smackig him..very girlishly..chodo ..chodo mujhe..
mujhe nahi jana..mujhe..aapke saath kanhi nahi jana..
maan held her hands..& tried controling her...geet snapped back
maan looked into her eyes..she looked away..with tears..mujhe nahi jana
maan takes a long breath..acha..suno..we will quickly finish the doctors visit &
take krish for an ice cream...
geet - mujhe nahi jana..
maan - krish ka liya..please..
geet looks down..nothing much to say
maan helps her with the seat belt & they drive to the hospital..
geet kept calling krish every 5mins checking if he was fine..
maan stopped the car...geet please just relax..we have not even reached
hospital..& u have called krish 5 times..
geet - ab aap ko mera krish ko call kar ne pe bhi aitraaz hain
maan - geet ..tum mujhe galat samjh rahi ho..
geet - galath !!nahi maan...main to aap ko kabhi samjh hi nahi paayii
maan kept quite..he knew wat geet meant...those words were deeper than
wat they seemed...maan started the car & geet kept looking out of the
window..as they reach the hospital..maan takes her to the doctor ..
they check the wound & do the dressing..maan stood close to her..
she held on to him...really hard as they were applying the medicine..
nurse - hogaya..I guess one more dressing may be required after a week
maan - thanxs..(nurse leaves)
geet was still clucthing him ..maan slowly pulls her curls behind her ears..
maan - abhi bhi dard horaha hai...she leaves his hand..
her nails left marks on his wrist..he did'nt even notice..

when they reached home..geet rushes to check on krish..
geet hugged him & kissed him..
krish - I am fine mom...
geet - nahi..I was just worried(krish smiled)
krish - mom i got call from my teachers..they asked me when I could get back
to school
geet looked at maan..he was scared to reply..
maan - umm!! next monday..
geet walked out..& stood in the garden..maan ran behind her
maan - geet ..
geet went & sat on the bench
maan - woh!! I spoke to the doctor..they said he is fine
he could reasume from monday..
geet did'nt say a word
maan - next year I will get him back..promise
geet leaves ...maan stops her by pulling her dupatta..
she looks back...maan was holding on to it..she stood there
he walked closer to her...
maan - tum chathe ho to we shall go to drop him...
she snaps her dupatta from his hand & leaves..

precap
priya leaving
...

hi guys...hope u liking the flow..trying to make lighter & lighter...thanxs for all ur responses
please write ur feed back really matters
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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