ott maaneet madness- my prediction 4 monday UPDATE

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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy guys i know alot of people are already predicting what will happen but i really couldnt help it as the weekend is driving me crazy when there is nothing to watch to do and all i can think is what will happen on monday !!! so i wrote this as a text on the bus when i was going somewhere and came home and decided to type it up okay so please read and comment and like if u like 😃 (A/N mind my hindi sorry)

dev enters the room while geet is hiding behind a cupboard because she thinks its maan. he looks around and sees nobody yaha pe to koye nahi hai! he thinks lekin he is about to walk around the room when he sees the clock in the room and the time crap im late mujhe toh office bhi jana hai aur maine toh NT ko promise kiya tha ki main office peh upna poora dian rakoonga mujhe jaana chaye he takes his steps backwards and walks out of the room out of the outhouse to go to the office

geet is still breaking deeply as she thinks about maan staring at her, she decides to take the jewelry off she walks towards the mirror and while taking off the bracelets she remembers her past she closes her eyes trying to forget her past and the pain of finding out that dev had betrayed her. she is taking off the necklace when suddenly it gets stuck
while maan is walking down the corridor he sees geet and cant help starring at her in the mirror again he steps inside the room and touches geets hands and her bare back while trying to take off the jewellery geets closes her eyes as she feels maans hands on her back then feeling them moving to her ears gently caressing her skin her breathing becomes harder and she starts to feel his warm breath on her shoulders as he gently takes out the earrings geet resists the urge to put her arms around him and keep him to herself forever all her thoughts are ambushed with the effect of maans one touch she tries to keep her breathing normal but fails as her heart threatens to jump out of her chest. she can feel his hands moving moving down down towards her shoulder blades where he turns her to face him she doesnt want to open her eyes in case its a dream. as he touches her forehead and takes off the jewellery geet opens her eyes and realises how close she is to him his lips are just inches away they stare at each other as if something might happen to the other if they take their eyes off eachother.
"am i interrupting something" says dadi geet and maan move away from eachother "kuch nahi daadi mein toh jaa raha tha" says maan as he makes a quick exit. dadi smiles knowingly "dadi yeh leeji aapki jewellery" says geet as she also makes a quick exit

(in the home office ) geet is sitting at her table when maan comes and hands her a file "yeh kiya hai sir?" says geet "is file mein woh sare qualities hai jo uss lardke mein hone chaye isse parke phir mere liye ladki choose karna theek hai" when geet finishes her work she goes to her room to have a look at the file.... TO BE CONTINUED please tell me if i should update have a lot in mind so please comment !!!! 😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
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so far .... i completeli enjoyed reading it..... it was wonderful..im loved ur description and if this actuali happens in geet... it will be a treat for all maaneet fans😉... u should continue

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Posted: 15 years ago
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enjoyed it a lot u shud continue this scene!😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice... continue karo please... kal main bhi apna prediction likhoongi... infact you have inspired me to write as well... will wait... aage likho and keep me posted...

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niha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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pls continue...it wz so romantic!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I liked it.. Hate weekends. Can't wait for monday. I do the samething, I keep thinking about what is going to happen on monday. I make up my own maneet scenes that what I think would happen. anyways Oh god, One more day to go :(
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Its great...logical and realistic.....great job.... I hate the weekends too... missing Maaneet terribly right now
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was awesome!! looking forward to the next update!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wonderful....plzzz continue...btw best part was dadi catching them red-handed....wish i cud see maan's expression....and both running away like rabbits....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was tooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo romantic.but i had a clich here dont mind may be iam spoiling the scene but instead of dadi nt will peeps them as friday is near definetly some big mess is coming up.sorry ,ssssssssssssssssssssooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyyyy.

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