My Version of the Bed Scene!! - Page 2

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thats so funny🤣

pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Ok Guys I'm back with part 2b:(last part)

Geet takes the jug and throw the water right on Maan's face. "wha..wha..what the hell?"he get up frantically looking around to see who did that. His tanktop was drenched and finally his eyes landed on Geet.

"Geet!!!!"hoe growled"what the hell?"

"what sir?"she replied innocently

"ohh don't you dare play games with me,now tell why did you throw water on my face?"

"well sir first you come in my house and claim that its your, then barge in to my room and tell me to get it and finally sleep peacefully on my bed.Now tell me sir would I ever let you sleep peacfully on ym bed?"

Maan just glared at her,

"No I wouldn't let you sir,anyway if your from Dehli,then I'm from Houshiyarpur(sorry if i spelled it wrong)."

She stood with her head high and her hands on her hips.Maan stood up,anger showing in his eyes.

"Geet I think you should run now cause YOUR DEAD NOW!!!!"he roared

"oh come sir!!! seriously"she said as she ran out he door and down the stair.

Maan running after Geet like a cheetah runs after its prey, she ran into the office room.She around the table and pushed the chair in front of Maan.He tripped alittle but went after Geet.Who now was in the kitchen, Maan came in and she took the knife.She pointed the knife at him and threatened him she will use it.Which was a lie cause her hands were trembling,he started walking toward her.As she moved backward,he kept coming closer.She was now trapped between him and the counter table,he stared right into her eyes.She was hypnotized by his stare that she dropped the knife on the floor.It fall right in Geet's feet and she didn't notice the blood oozing out from her foot.Until Maaan broke the gaze and his eyes landed on her feet.

"ohmigod! Geet your foot is bleeding"Maan blurted out

"what?"Geet asked confused

Then she saw her foot and saw the blood coming out.Now she sensed the pain ,

"ow!! sir my foot its bleeding"

"wow!! captain obvious,"he said sarcastically

He picked her up and placed her on the counter and went to get the first aid kit.

"you don't know how to take care of yourself"Maan stated as he cleaned the blood from her feet with a cotton ball.

Geet didn't say anything except just look at him as he did the work.(Mahi playing in the Bg)

"Done!"he announced as he was finishing dressing her feet.

Maan gently placed Geet on her floor, but she couldn't stand up.Maan saw she couldn't stand and there was no way she could walk up the stairs.He sweeped her off the floor and picked her up bridal style.Their eyes met again and stared right into eachother eyes they felt like they were the only ones on the palnet right now.After Maan looked away, he took her upstairs into the room.He placed her on the bed and put the covers over.He sat near her feet,him leaning against the pillow he took from his side.He watched her sleep,little breeze was coming from the open window.There were strand of hair on Geet's face,he moved close to her and moved them behind her ear.He went back and watched her,

"Geet you might be the Queen Of Diaster, annoying,create a problem where you go and I could go on,on but I'll stop.Because the Geet I'm seeing right now, I see the innocent one and non-annoying one.You always get on my nerves and argue with me all the time.And I have to resue you from danger cause you can't look out for your self, but you tell me you can.HI don't know how my life would be if I hadn't met you in Houshiyarpur."He talked tot he sleeping Geet.Soon he drifted to sleep......

Thats the end of my version of the bed scene. hope you liked!!!

shud i make a confession scene?
luv,
amerra😊
Edited by Maneetforever - 14 years ago
.sireesha. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13
Thats Lovely dear
Maan always takes care of Geet😊
Edited by .sireesha. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
lovely , nice part.
loved it.
continue soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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It's really gud...

And why ask for the scene... Just go for it...
I'm always hungry to read anything about Maaneet.....😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks Everyone for liking and there are 2 new scenes i will post!! hope you like them!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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This one shot is a continuation from the last scene from yesterday's episode.I hope you guys like it and comment and Press the LIKE BUTTON!!!!!😊

Maan is dancing with all the girls, while he's drunk.Geet comes and takes his hand and brings him to the side where nobody is.They both stand away from eachother quietly.Geet doesn't whether she should yell at him or not cause right now he's drunk and its not his fault.It's Pari's fault that she spiked his drink.She thought she should get Pari so they could go home, she was about to leave when Maan grabbed her hand and pulled her toward him.Her hand around his shoulder and his hand on her back and his other hand in her hair.They both stare into eachother's eyes completely forgetting their surrounding.Maan pulls her closer to him until there's no space between them.Slowly they both hug eachother and Geet closes her eyes,savouring the moment.Both of them in eachother's arms who are crazily in love with eachother and want to hold eachother close to them.Slowly he takes her hair and gently moves to the other side og her shoulder.He buries his head in her neck, she could feel his hot breath on her neck.Her heart beat is at range of a cheetah running!Slowly they both start slow dancing,Geet's heartbeat beating harder even now.She loves him so much that it hurts her on the inside.Maan breathing slowly on her neck,then right then he kisses her there.When she felt his soft lips on her skin,her breathing became unstable and got butterflies on her stomach.She stand in his arms like statue,until she realizes what's going and goes even further more.She breaks the hug and backs away from him.She could still feel the kiss on her neck, she turns around and her back facing Maan.There's an awkward silence between them.

"whats happening to me?Why couldn't I control my self?WHy my hearts races when ever Maan sir comes near me?Why can't I stay away from him?Why do I get angry when ever I see Pari and Maan sir together?Lastly why did I come here?"she asked her self those question but she had no answer to them.

When she slept she dreamt of him,his face would appear when she would just close her eyes.When she was awake she thought of him.Maan stood there watching her,he loved her so much but couldn't come to accepted it.She changed him,drove him crazy and he craved for her.He knew she had the same feelings for him as he did for her.He slowly approached her and wrapped his hand around her stomach.He was drunk to know what he was doing.He was only doing what his heart was telling him to do.Geet gasped at his touch, he slowly removed her hair from her ear that was covering it.Geet stayed till and Maan pecked her ear before saying to three most magical word to her.

"I LOVE YOU GEET"he whispered into her ear.

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"I Love You"Maan whispered the 3 most magical words in he ear.

Geet stood there not knowing what to do.She was too shocked to breath right after what she just heard.They both stood in that position until Geet recovered after a few minutes of silence bewteen them.she thought that he was drunk ans didn't know what he was saying or doing.But in her heart those word felt right to her, maybe she lov- she erased that feeling away.Her brain was telling her that Maan was her boss and she was his secretary and there was nothing between them.He couldn't lover her, and out of all the girls in Dehli he chooses her.She only came to Dehli,to find Dev and confront him and justice for her baby.She would leave as soon as dadi got better.She unwrapped his arms around from her stomach.And made him stand up straight but that didn't work out well.He couldn't satnd straight because he was in a bad condition.

"sir..I think we should head home now"she told him not looking directly in his eyes.

He was ready to pass out right there.She came up to him and put his hand around her shouldr and her hand on his back.She took him out of the disco and she saw the driver standing outside the car in the parking lot.She approached the driver and he helped her put Maan inside the car.As soon as Maan was inside, Geet got in too and they drove away.Maan had his head rested on Geet's shoulder and was saying something she couldn't undertand.When they reached the outhouse, the driver helped her take Maan upto the room.

"thanks you can leave now"she told the driver politely

She placed him on the bed and took his shoes off.His eyes were still half open, she was about to leave when he grabbed her hand.He pulled her back and she fell on top of him.Her hand was on bare chest which was revealing from is open shirt.Their faces were close and their lips were inches apart.

"Geet....I.....Lov-" he was about to say I love you but he passed out.Geet's hand was still in his Maan's tight grip, she tried hard to get her hand of out of his hand but failed.Finally she gave up and rested her head on his chest and fell asleep.

The End!!
thats the full scene!! hope u liked it!
Edited by Maneetforever - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awesome part yaar 👏👏

kash aisa episode mein hota 😍😍😍😍😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i just hope we get to see the continuation of Friday's hug scene and not just a new day😛
Edited by sujsub - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi.... loveddddddddd this scene and wud request you that if possible for you... plsssssssssssssssssssssssss do continue the scene to next morning and ahead.. :-)

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