Maaneet scenes-update on Pg 142 (28/11) - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
My god - chupa rustam 😆😆... Tangy flavors in Maaneet Love and we doing tango ----> lame jokes 😆😆😆..Loved today's epi 😍
Yeah, Maan was so hot and cool at the same time. Love his new soft husky tone. His eyes are also more mesmerising and smoldering at the same time. Poor Geet, can well imagine how difficult it must be to keep her senses.
Aside: Malaria seems to have made Guru hotter.
I know - today he just sizzled the screen... I was literally salvinating.. And I was thinking of something... Sharam aathi hai 😳😳☺️☺️☺️
Eh Maaneet bhi kya kya mann se nikhalwaathe hai .....
I know the fever has defo increased his appeal.. He has become hot -->literally and figuratively and today his eyes were oooooooooolalaaaaaaaaa...His expressions when she says she will find a girl and then later at office when he asks for the girls--> the expression was UFF ....kya ada ...
uff teri ada
i like the way you move
uff tera badan
i like to see you groove
uff teri nazar
it says i want to ....... with you(defo not dance... SR ki taraf hai ishaara) 😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Opti,
I love u r stories...used to read 'em in Kayamath forum. Ur writing style is awesome..so easy to imagine to scenes.
Waiting to read how Maan will react to big "outburst" of Geet.
-Sona
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Posted: 15 years ago
the shocking ending was so good!! Loved this part!!! I can't wait for the next part!!! Thanks so much!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

I know - today he just sizzled the screen... I was literally salvinating.. And I was thinking of something... Sharam aathi hai 😳😳☺️☺️☺️
Eh Maaneet bhi kya kya mann se nikhalwaathe hai .....
I know the fever has defo increased his appeal.. He has become hot -->literally and figuratively and today his eyes were oooooooooolalaaaaaaaaa...His expressions when she says she will find a girl and then later at office when he asks for the girls--> the expression was UFF ....kya ada ...
uff teri ada
i like the way you move
uff tera badan
i like to see you groove
uff teri nazar
it says i want to ....... with you(defo not dance... SR ki taraf hai ishaara) 😆😆

You are on a roll,thanks to Maan Mania!!! As I had taken an anti-histamine for my cold I was having trouble keeping my eyes open but I held my eyelids apart only to see him!
Edited by Opti - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sparikh

Hi Opti,

I love u r stories...used to read 'em in Kayamath forum. Ur writing style is awesome..so easy to imagine to scenes.
Waiting to read how Maan will react to big "outburst" of Geet.
-Sona

Thanks Sparikh. Looks like quite of few of my KYM mates are here, all thanks to Maaneet madness.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet coco

the shocking ending was so good!! Loved this part!!! I can't wait for the next part!!! Thanks so much!!!!!

Thanks sweet coco.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Geet's words were not only shocking to Maan but were also painfully familiar. Maan felt himself being swiftly transported into another place and another time zone when he heard these very same words from the lips of another damsel.


"I am pregnant."


She informed a tired Maan as he stepped into his house after a hard day at work. Maan looked in surprise at the breathtakingly beautiful woman who stood before him.


"Are you sure?" he asked anxiously.



When she nodded her head in confirmation, he felt a twinge of disappointment at first. After all they had been married for hardly two months and were still struggling to adjust to each other. He felt for a moment that a baby at this juncture of their relationship would add to their responsibilities and mellow down their passion for each other. But these thoughts were soon replaced by an unfathomable feeling of exhilaration at being instrumental in bringing a life into this world.



He broke into a broad smile and lifting her in his arms, he twirled her around in excitement, not noticing that she did not share his enthusiasm. He made passionate love to her that night to celebrate the prospect of the new addition to their family. Little did he know that the woman who moved physically in sync with him as he ravished her, was mentally completely out of sync with him for she had already made up her mind to negate the baby's existence.

Sameera knew that Maan will never agree to her decision so she informed him only after the deed was done the next day. He felt as though she had just punched him in the gut. His breath constricted in his chest as he struggled to breathe. When he heard that the reason she terminated her pregnancy was because she did not want it to interfere with her busy career, he was furious that she would so heartlessly sniff out the life of their baby for such selfish reasons, that too without taking him into confidence.

Both of them were strong personalities who fiercely held on to their individuality without wanting to give an inch to the other. It was this very trait of holding her ground that had attracted Maan to Sameera when they were still in college pursuing a course on business management, for he admired strong women with a mind of their own but he did not know that her obstinacy and determinacy would one day cost the life of their baby. In marriage, there needs to be compromise and adjustments from both sides but he soon realised that while he was the one who was willing to accept this and meet her at least half the way, his wife remained unbending.


The baby could have cemented their relationship but the abortion rocked it to the core and from then on the two of them emotionally just drifted apart and although they lived under one roof, the chasm between them kept getting wider by the day. One fine morning she confessed to having an affair with a much older and richer man and sought a divorce from him and with that their fragile relationship finally broke up, exactly six months from the day they tied the knot.



The bitterness he experienced in his brief tryst with marriage three years ago had hardened him to all relationships and he firmly shut the door to his heart to protect it from getting wounded again. He managed to keep it that way till Geet came along and gradually broke down his resolve without even being aware of it. While everything about her was attractive to him, the qualities that drew him to her were her endearing innocence and her genuineness.


His mind quickly rewound to the day they bumped into each other at the fair in Hoshiarpur and images of all the incidents that occurred since then flashed rapidly before his mind's eye. His mind lingered lovingly on the vision of Geet clad in white, looking as pure and innocent as a lily. The image suddenly spun out of control and shattered as he slid to the ground on his knees, bowing his head in defeat, totally oblivious to the fact that the woman who triggered all this emotional turmoil had long left the place.


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Edited by Opti - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
yay! first to comment I caught up on all the updates, and they were amazing!! Fabulous job! I'm glad Maan confessed and Geet finally told him. It was good to know about Maan's past. Keep up the great work! Can't wait til the next update
Btw, can you pm me when you update?? Thanks
Edited by bmtdluver - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bmtdluver

yay! first to comment I caught up on all the updates, and they were amazing!! Fabulous job! I'm glad Maan confessed and Geet finally told him. It was good to know about Maan's past. Keep up the great work! Can't wait til the next update

Btw, can you pm me when you update?? Thanks


Thanks. I'm afraid this update may not read very smoothly as I had to struggle to complete it. Hope to make up in the next one.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Poor Maan...he lost his baby due to callousness...and Geet was given a baby due to callousness....its tragic how life works. There is a lot of heartbreak in store for Maan...at least till he hears the complete truth of what happened to Geet.....poor guy....but this pain is not avoidable!!

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