OS|| Just another day|| Updated Pg 13 (19/8) - Page 9

Originally posted by: lghosh

Ash iraada kya hai? Kaatil karne ka? 😃 Geet went back feeling floated all the way!! Its me who is floating now after reading this! 😆

Wow what a passionate OS! And I could so relate to it all, I can see both of them reacting this way when the time comes, specially Maan. 😃 After seeing him in the show now, all desperate, I can imagine he will be exactly like this. 😉

Really beautiful, fabulous! This was after that fair, no? The initial phase of courtship after confession of one's love, a wonderful phase for all! 😍

Thank u so much for this treat! And as always in future also let me know if u pen down such awesome OS! Once again splendid!

Thank you Lana. 🤗 Yep, this was the drive back home after the fair.

These two are beautifully passionate people and when you are in the company of the person you love, desire takes over. Thats what happened here.

Thanks dear for the kind words.

Phew!!!!!!! Definitely, NOT Just another Day.

Geet felt she could have floated...well, i certainly AM.
Maan in the show too displays the leashed passion as much as his anger - just roiling under the surface. thats what makes it more intense to watch and read your O.S.

thank you for the beautiful piece.

rocking one partner... tussi chaaa gaye,,,🤗 you know i m getting inspired by all this and wanna try my hands in FF and OS writing ,,,but i m scared if did that i'll get banned,,,,,😆

Oh Ash..🤗...I had read your previous part on the carnival but had forgotten to leave my comments... :(...

Originally posted by: KriHaan_GurMaan

Phew!!!!!!! Definitely, NOT Just another Day.

Geet felt she could have floated...well, i certainly AM.
Maan in the show too displays the leashed passion as much as his anger - just roiling under the surface. thats what makes it more intense to watch and read your O.S.

thank you for the beautiful piece.

Thank you for the wonderful comments 😃. Yep, not just another day!!😆
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Originally posted by: shonuu

rocking one partner... tussi chaaa gaye,,,🤗 you know i m getting inspired by all this and wanna try my hands in FF and OS writing ,,,but i m scared if did that i'll get banned,,,,,😆

Thank you partner 🤗. You should write too. Tumhe kaun ban karega, hum bhi to dekhen!! 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: rdfan

Fabulous Stuff Ash......wish the show was something like this ......but never the less yr OS makes up for it !!!!👍🏼

Looking forward to yr next update 😊!.

Thank you Pooja. 🤗

I guess you will have to wait for sometime for the next update. 😊

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Oh Ash..🤗...I had read your previous part on the carnival but had forgotten to leave my comments... :(...

I love it! 😛....if only Adi didn't come inbetween them...but it doesn't matter actually, coz the other moments in made up for it....the parts where Maan was talking abt his parents...

Gosh i just love the way you write..it's so neat and straight to the point..and at the same time it draws me in totally..I always don't want it to finish and so i read it very slowly..kinda like trying to save the parts....😳😆

The lastest one.......Oh you got me smiling once again..from ear to ear..and still while typing this..I don't think it's going to go away anytime soon....☺️😃😍

Love the flow of your OS..the lines in it..from Maan and Geet...👍🏼

I didn't know Geet has a past in Horshaiypur here..i thought you eliminated that Dev story..but looks like it's in...makes it all the more better actually.😊 Geet is more daring here definitely.....

Am with the rest, i'll be wonderful if the show goes this way..BUT it's Indian TV..and we'll never get something like this on a daily soap..😆....

Ash, you have to carry on with this..Me will be waiting eagerly...😍

Vini 🤗 Thank you. You are too generous with your praise. 😊

I did not want to have Dev, but he just found his way into the story. I don't want to make it a FF. I want to have it such that I can write a scene based on my mood for the day. If it continues with the earlier one, it does, otherwise a new day in the life of Maan and Geet. So maybe you will not see Dev anymore. But I promise I will write but not a continuation of this story. 🤗

Whoa....wat is it that you have here....??? Os or a full fledged fic...??? Watever it is, I m thoroughly enjoying it....you have a superb writing style...!!! ⭐️⭐️

PM me wen u update next...!!!!