OS|| Just another day|| Updated Pg 13 (19/8) - Page 7

Originally posted by: lghosh

Ash thanks for the PM! Or else wouldn't have known about it. It was so sweet, just cute & romantic! I mean look at the easy way they r interacting with each other! And getting intimate in public, wow! Way to go MSK, actually that is what u expect from him, don't care attitude about what the world will say or think, that is what he taught Geet all along.

Wonderful Ash. And pls PM me if u write up something next time.

Thank you Lana. Yep, it was intended to be a easy, carefree, into-each-other kind of a moment. Glad you liked it.

Yep will pm you when I write next.

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

I like the way you write Ash... the flow is smooth and transitions without a hicccup... I loved "young grasshopper" reference which sadly I can never hear either Maan nor Geet ever saying that on screen.

The third chapter came in a little soon for me... I would have loved to read more build up, more confusion and finally coming to terms... Maan, as usual makes the first move, which suits his characterization and Geet...well, it seemed as if she was also floating the same boat :-) Oh whatever my whimsical musings are, this was one good read...

I will keep an eye out for this story "Just another day" (Quite honestly it made me read my own OS :D) and will write back after you update.

Oh yeah, after I read third update, a song ran in my head -

Can't get enough of your love - Barry White.

Do you know about this song? If not, give it a shot. I like it and I felt that that it matched the second update...

Sookie

Thank you Sookie for your kind words. I do not want to write a FF for I do not have the time to commit myself to it. This was just a piece on my thoughts. The latest update is just another day in their lives. I plan to write sometime, but do not want to have a common story. Its just my thoughts at that particular moment in time. Guess thats the reason why you found this chapter a bit rushed.

Thats a very beautiful song. I have heard it and I like it too.

Thanks for commenting. Appreciate it.

Originally posted by: rdfan

Awwww Ash that was Fantabulous .....seriously it had such a soft sweet feel to it ......cudnt have asked for a better morning treat .....seriously ....u rock big time !!!!

Thank you Pooja. That's very sweet of you. 😃

Originally posted by: anufa

brilliant!!!

loved iT!!!
update sooN!!!!

Thank you anufa. Will update soon.

Hey Ash,

now this one..makes me smile not just my lips but inside..it has such a feel good factor...one can't help but smile...and say

oh so sweet... i love his confidence...well the bugger is way to confident..must be the name what say?

and She is cute..bubbly but shows she is besotted with him...

cute Ash real cute...i like their days...it does not seen like just another day...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Hey Ash,

now this one..makes me smile not just my lips but inside..it has such a feel good factor...one can't help but smile...and say

oh so sweet... i love his confidence...well the bugger is way to confident..must be the name what say?

and She is cute..bubbly but shows she is besotted with him...

cute Ash real cute...i like their days...it does not seen like just another day...

Thanks Vrush for those nice words.

Actually I was feeling happy in the morning and I guess it ended up in the story too.. I wanted both to have a nice time with each other, enjoy each other's company.

Yep he is confident, but guess thats what makes him Maan right? And she is totally besotted with him.. Birds of a feather eh?

oye partner you just rocked it again....................👏👏👏👏

Originally posted by: shonuu

oye partner you just rocked it again....................👏

Thank you shonuu partner.... 🤗

This was so cute!

awwww that was awesome plz continue