OS|| Just another day|| Updated Pg 13 (19/8)

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Vinitha

@Blueberry_07

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#101

Yes yes i agree with Gouri, you totally made my day Ash!!... 😍 Gosh..i L-O-V-E it!!.....Esp that last line of Maan to Geet.... Thanks for this part Ash, it's perfecto..🤗....

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Arunima

@arunima_LUIT

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#102

ow dear me😳😳😳..ash ..its sensous n how well u write ....umm😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳

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sweet cherry

@sweet cherry

Inactive

Posted: 14 years ago

#103

great update

cant wait to read more

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@-RD-

Stunner

+ 9

Posted: 14 years ago

#104

Wowie.......That was awesome .......U r super talented Ash ....Keep it up !!!! Look forward to yr next update !!!!

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Dhara Singh

@Dhara_s

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#105

That was absolutely fantastic....!!! Your writing set me on fire...!!!!😳😳

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kiran naryani

@kirannaryani

Navigator

Posted: 14 years ago

#106

your too good plz add me in pm list

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Ayesha.

@cooldude10

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#107

i was fasting! 🤣 anyhow... 😍☺️ i love you! 🤗

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asmaanixx

@asmaanixx

Achiever

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#108

This is just amazing Ash!

I just simply love the flow of your writing.

It was so adorable to hear Maan call her Mrs. Khurana.

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Richie..

@Richie..

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#109

😍 😍 😍 😍 😍 😍

I am speechless.....
Thanks for the PM.

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Lana Ghosh

@lghosh

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#110

Ash Ash Ash.......OMG finally read it!! In the morning got my brains fried after the show & now its ur OS. 😃

It was so passionate & yet so like Maan! Easing her into intimacy, taking away her nervousness & uneasiness! And yet full on desire! Seriously Ash it was brilliant! Sometimes we know Maan more maybe than he knows himself. 😆

Keep it up & u know I want a PM when u update next time! U r an amazing writer.