OS|| Just another day|| Updated Pg 13 (19/8) - Page 6

Oh...my....God!!! Can you believe where I have just been to Ash dear?? our State Fair and we went on rides and had funnel cake(bleh...nothing like Geet's chocolate pound cake) albeit no cotton candy. I have not even read the whole O.S. but just began and had to post this.

Will write more after I read the whole thing.....:)

Done. pudh liya baadmein laga...itna hi?? guess good things come in small packages huh??

Much as I like Adi, timing bhi kya hai uska?? then again don't know if Geet wud have been comfortable in public.

Your writing entices us like a spell. The time I am going to post this is 12:51 am. in the night but had to read your O.S. It lures us with the promise of laughter and a dash of naughtiness and you have come through each time. Keep it up.

will wait for ur next update. cheers!!

awesome ash....

Ash thanks for the PM! Or else wouldn't have known about it. It was so sweet, just cute & romantic! I mean look at the easy way they r interacting with each other! And getting intimate in public, wow! Way to go MSK, actually that is what u expect from him, don't care attitude about what the world will say or think, that is what he taught Geet all along.

Originally posted by: bDgT

Ooh La! Lalala! Ohoo lalala! Remember that Kajol song in Minsara Kanuvu! Just remembered that reading your sweet stuff! Love it!

Thank you Bri. 🤗

Originally posted by: sapnaajay

loved it🤗 loved it. i can fill the whole page with these 2 words

Thank you dear. Glad that you liked it. 😃

Originally posted by: KriHaan_GurMaan

Done. pudh liya baadmein laga...itna hi?? guess good things come in small packages huh??

Much as I like Adi, timing bhi kya hai uska?? then again don't know if Geet wud have been comfortable in public.

Your writing entices us like a spell. The time I am going to post this is 12:51 am. in the night but had to read your O.S. It lures us with the promise of laughter and a dash of naughtiness and you have come through each time. Keep it up.

will wait for ur next update. cheers!!

Thank you dear for your kind words. State Fair is it? Hope you had fun...

Before I went too deep, I wanted to develop a kind of understanding between the two. And this chapter was just that. Both of them enjoying each other's company.

Originally posted by: deniac

awesome ash....

u know u shud write a bit of these parts in hindi.... as u know if we wnat this act in English then they will hv to get a new MSK..... Guru ke saath english mein dialogues.... hahahahahahahaha i can imagine what will happen.... drashti will pull it off very well.... but Guru.... that wud be hilarious.... 😆

Thanks Gouri.

Actually forget the actors, I find it difficult to think in Hindi, if you know what I mean. My thoughts have more clarity in English. 😆😆😆