OS|| Just another day|| Updated Pg 13 (19/8) - Page 4

Originally posted by: shonuu

wow,, partner you just rocked it.. you i read OS first time.. it was so real..it seemed i was actually watching it... your command over the characters was just too good,,keep writing and make me know when you write it next time....👍🏼

Thanks shonuu 🤗 Glad you liked it... Sure will send you a message when I update it next. 😊

Originally posted by: ash08

Yay! Kiss happened!! I wrote this for you and vrush. Hope you guys like it. 😊

Ash 😍-- Maan in command .....is there anything more secsayyy than that .....loved what you wrote .......could ttly imagine it all ...

Originally posted by: Priya.

Ash 😍-- Maan in command .....is there anything more secsayyy than that .....loved what you wrote .......could ttly imagine it all ...

pl inf when u update nxt ...would love to read..

Thanks Priya. 😃 Will send you a message when I write next.

Oh my God, you write so well ! You turned out to be a chupa rustam !

It was wonderful reading both the parts..

Originally posted by: VJ-LNMDJ

Oh my God, you write so well ! You turned out to be a chupa rustam !

It was wonderful reading both the parts..

You must write more often, I insist ! 😊

love,

VJ

Thanks VJ. 😊 Will try and write more, I promise.

Originally posted by: deniac

Vrush kiss aint xxx rated yaar.... what u hv described.... making love when geet was pregnant that xxx..... n she aint married to maan yet.... that xxxxx .... thats what i like.... hahahahahahahaha

ash to janti hai meri xxxness..... u will know too soon when i make xxxx comments on ur posts......

oh silly me...just a kiss will it be..have not read the post yet will do now..

yahan to meine sapno ke mahal bana diye..aur aap ret ke tille se kaam chalane ko keh rahe ho...

😭

oh darling Ash..

that is wow..

i love the way he speaks..well that means the way you write...

i loved his last line...kissing is so much quicker than food...well bugger had both isnt it..!!

i love the storyline..

and hope you dont leave us stranded on this one..

Originally posted by: rushtrip

oh darling Ash..

that is wow..

i love the way he speaks..well that means the way you write...

i loved his last line...kissing is so much quicker than food...well bugger had both isnt it..!!

i love the storyline..

and hope you dont leave us stranded on this one..

Thanks Vrush 🤗Nope, no stranding. Planning for a office scene and a date scene too.. Maybe tomorrow?😊

Originally posted by: rushtrip

oh darling Ash..

that is wow..

i love the way he speaks..well that means the way you write...

i loved his last line...kissing is so much quicker than food...well bugger had both isnt it..!!

i love the storyline..

and hope you dont leave us stranded on this one..

@red : Too good , too good ! You said it !! 🤣🤣 VJ