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Richie..

@Richie..

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#21

I got the link from den i liked reading the first part and second is ultimate for me....... 😍

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@anufa

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#22

superb!!!!

loved iT!!!!

continue soon.......n pm me wen u do so!!!!

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#23

Gosh Maan's so full of himself, his reactions after leaving her dumbstruck were totally adorable! And Geet, I can totally imagine her expressions! Him muttering a curse and then grabbing her for a kiss was sooooo like MSK, wish it was possible to see that in Geet...😍

Awesome OS, otally love your writing style, would love to see a continuation of this in the office!

Anjali

Edited by *angel94* - 14 years ago

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: rdfan
Very Well written with a very different feel to it .......seriously not much into the show itself ..have seen quite a few scenes ....thats abt it ...but am always game for a neat FF....and this one happens to be one ......

Hope u find the time to update this soon enuf ....cause i like the others will be waiting ......

Once again Fabulous Stuff......👍🏼

-Pooja

Thank you Pooja. Hopefully I will update it soon. 😊

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: deniac
yaaay yaaay yaaay....... kiss kiss kiss happened.... yaaay yaay.....thanks ash for giving in to mine n vrush's demand...... 😆😆😆

Yay! Kiss happened!! I wrote this for you and vrush. Hope you guys like it. 😊

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: abi2010
wow keep it up.... want some more

Thank you. 😊

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: tv_rocks
I got the link from den i liked reading the first part and second is ultimate for me....... 😍

Thank you RIcha. Glad you liked it.😊

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: anufa
superb!!!!

loved iT!!!!

continue soon.......n pm me wen u do so!!!!

Thank you. Shall send you a message when I update next. 😊

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ash08

@ash08

Dazzler

Posted: 14 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: *angel94*
Gosh Maan's so full of himself, his reactions after leaving her dumbstruck were totally adorable! And Geet, I can totally imagine her expressions! Him muttering a curse and then grabbing her for a kiss was sooooo like MSK, wish it was possible to see that in Geet...😍

Awesome OS, otally love your writing style, would love to see a continuation of this in the office!

Anjali

Yep, it was total MSK wasn't it? Grab what you want!! Thank you Anjali. Will try and write a continuation of this in the office.. 😊

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shonuu

@shonuu

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 14 years ago

#30

wow,, partner you just rocked it.. you i read OS first time.. it was so real..it seemed i was actually watching it... your command over the characters was just too good,,keep writing and make me know when you write it next time....👍🏼