(O-S) Aogay jab..tum o saajana..*MAANEET* - Page 2

@swetha10: thank u soo much dear! i'll try to :)

@pikachu: aw thx dear! so sweet,will surely try to continue!

@Starry_night: haila pri! r u sure? i mean u liked it that much? awwwwwwww i feel so good after reading all ur wonderful comments! i mean sure it took me 1 whole day to write this & another day to check & do all the corrections...& ofcourse i liked it too..but i dunno i hav this feeling of uncertainty? dunno anyways lol! thank u soooo much dear! will try to write something more!

@chullbulli:haila shukriya shukriya jee hum GEET aur MAAN ke shukar guzaar hain,jinhoun ne humain itni inspiration dee ke hum un par DOU shabd likh paeyn :P lol i also wished something like this happens! lekin real main bhi jo horaha hai ME IS LIKING THAT TOO! cant wait for parineeta's entry :D

@flamingo_aries: maithliiiiiiiiiiiiiii KI KARDITA? hayeee mera dil baag baag hogaya! lol u liked it more than the actual song! thanks alot dear! its comments like these that v literally wish for!

@Jenifer: JEN-JEN! UR HERE WOOHOOOO! m soo glad u came & read this :) but i dunno...i want ur honest comments with criticism! besides there is always room for improvement isnt it? anyways m glad DILSE that u enjoyed it :)

@anufa:lol anufa it seems everyone liked the ending more! & to be honest m more into comedy! this is my FIRST serious & emotional one shot! technically my second since i had written one before it & it was NOT AT ALL SERIOUS lol! thanks dear!
will surely PM u :)

Thank u once again to all who read,liked & commented!
u guys r the best :)
~hugs~

omg that was awesome love it how maan is so determind to get his love

thank u dear! yeh he is MAAN after all lol! so he is gonnna get geet in any way possible :)

waisay m sooo happy maan is doing some what similar to what i wrote!! he is actually gonna make Geet confess her love for Him! even yest he was thinking that wat he had read in her eyes was not a mere illusion! HE HAD SEEN LOVE IN THEM FOR HIM WOOHOOOOOO!
the only difference is here maan will be taking daadimaa's help..but in the actual show..he is working on his own lol!
MAAN SINGH KHURANA KABHI GALAT NAHI HOSAKTA!!
ohhhh m loving this show man its just EXCELLENT!! 👏

Its Awesome👏👏👏

Amazing Yaar

Originally posted by: SuhaniSonia

<font color="#009999">Nicely written Alia!! I especially enjoyed the lyrics intermixed with the descriptive scenes!! </font>

THIS IS WHAT I REALLY WANTED TO HEAR!!
thnx alot dear! m glad uliked it! cz i was a bit confused as to wether i should just write down the whole stanza of the song & AFTER that write abt them OR describe the scene & their emotions along each line of the stanza! :)

Originally posted by: .sireesha.

Its Awesome👏👏👏

I Just Loved these lines

Bring it on Geet handa! i'll show u what the meaning of stubborn is....after all "MAAN SINGH KHURANA KO AAJ TAK JO CHAIHYAY HOTA HAI..WOH USSAY PAAKAR REHTA HAI ..what do u think geet? i'll let u go that easily? no dear m gonna fight for u..for myself.. & for the sake of our love :) I'll make u realize what love really means..I'll do everything to make u realize our love....& EVERYTHING IN MY POWER TO STOP U FROM LEAVING …I promise… & u cant stop me… SAMJHI TUM?!! (understand?!)
& For that I haVE to join forces with some one who thinks just like HER…..
Hmmm who could that be? YESS…OFCOURSE!!
DAADIMA HERE I COME HA HA!!

Amazing Yaar

pls continue soooooooooooon😊

lol yeah cuz its sooo MAAN-ISH no? & i cant believe HE IS ACTUALLY PLOTTING TO TRAP GEET IN THE SHOW TOO! but there he is working all alone MAAN-STYLE!

yes dear i will surely..as soon as i get some time!
thx alot for ur wonderful comments! 😊

fantastic yaar!!! really awesome!! hey check out my update

lol thanku amerra! that is really soooo sweet of u!

will surely check it as soon as i get some free time alryt :)

cheers!

M LOVING THE CURRENT GEET TRACK!

gosh i still dont believe maan is being naughty now lolzzzz! 😆 😆