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Posted: 14 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: cute-aly


Soumya

update is great. maan's concern about geet is

Geet smiled. "Maan, main aisa insaan ke saath kaam karti hoon, jinke gussa bhi extremes mein hoti hai, aur pyaar bhi".

She bit her lips, when she said the "pyaar"but


"Geet, though I'm very tempted to tell you that I can pay for your college, I will not! I realized I would be underestimating you or hurting your self-respect if I do that.


Geet started laughing. "maan singh khurana cheeze bhoolne laga, yeh kab se?"( jab se tere naina mere naino se lage re)

"jab se tum meri zindagi mein aaye ho!"

Maan pinned her to the door of the car and put his hands on either side of her. He looked around one final time to make sure no one was there. He moved her hair to one side and moved his lips around her neck and throat gently

Geet moved in closer to him and said, "pata nahi maine aisa kousa accha kaam kiya hai jo aap jaise insaan mere zindagi mein aaye, ek aisa insaan jo mujhse itna izzat karta hai, itna khayal rakhta hai mera, zindage ke har kadam pe mera saath deta hai"


He then pushed her hair back and said, "chale ya is dhoop mein, is sadak pe aur baitna hai tumhe. Geet, itna bada farmhouse chod ke tumhe yahi jagah mili thi baithne ke liye?"

Geet rolled her eyes, "tuo aapko bhi itna bada farmhouse chod ke, parking area mili thi romance karne ke liye?" and shut her mouth with her hand.


"tuo, aap chahte hai ki main yeh sab farmhouse mein karu?theek hai chalo phir andar" and pulled her hand and slowly made her stand. Geet looked at him in horror, "now, what was he upto? This man never fails to surprise her".



hi honey,

after a long long time, I've seen your comments...!!!!!!!!! thanks for reading....!!!! 😛

i love the way you select your fav dialogues and then add the appropriate emoticons...makes me feel so good...!!!

thanks a ton...... 😊... looking forward for more comments .... for the future updates

Soumya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: NoorFatima

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yeh tou aap nay pehlay b PM kia tha
anywayz luved it



hi honey,

Sorry for the confusion...!!!! and thanks honey...!!!

Soumya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
nice update.... is kapil a -ve character???? continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
SOumya,

Can you please update the thread title to reflect the new update ?.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25


Thanks a ton sweetheart….!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg...this is so sweet... thanks honey...!!!!
maan taking care of her
i was wondering that why doesnt he just marry her ... maan and geet are not ready for marriage yet...because dev and naintara are still on planet earth...!!!!! 😉... i will not be getting them married until and unless they know everything thing about each other regarding their pasts....!!!

than he can take care of her with full rights(although he already does) at his house where dadi can also look after her and she can still study and work if she wants

i really respect her decision of being independent but still,would love to her become Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana... that will happen sometime... dont worry...!!!! 😃

Thanks a anyways....please update soon
love you
hope ur work finishes soon so you can relax too

congrats on ur new thread... thanks honey..its because of your wonderful posts...1!!!!
you've written so much for us
thanks



thanks a ton shaila....!!!!! 😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pickle6586



omg...this is so sweet... <font color="#6600ff">thanks honey...!!!!

</font>maan taking care of her
i was wondering that why doesnt he
just marry her ... <font color="#660099">maan and geet are not ready
for marriage yet...because dev and naintara are still on planet
earth...!!!!! </font>
😉... <font color="#660099">i will not be getting them married until and unless
they know everything thing about each other regarding their pasts....!!!
</font>



than he can take care of her with full rights(although he already
does) at his house where dadi can also look after her and she can still
study and work if she wants

i really respect her decision of
being independent but still,would love to her become Mrs Geet Maan Singh
Khurana...<font color="#6600ff"> that will happen sometime... dont
worry...!!!! 😃


</font>
Thanks a anyways....please update soon
love you
hope ur
work finishes soon so you can relax too

congrats on ur new
thread... <font color="#6600ff">thanks honey..its because of your
wonderful posts...1!!!!
</font>
you've written so much for us
thanks







thanks a ton shaila....!!!!! 😛



love you Di
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: deejagi



Thanks for the new thread.

Jaya



Jaya, I should be thanking all of you....!!!!! 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29


thanks jennifer....!!!!! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: sravani899

soumya

yeh kya kar diya yaar mein ne apne comments puri tarah complete nahi kiya aur emotions bhi laga na tha aur thread bhi close kar diya
nahiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn
koi baat nahin mein phir se wo sab yeha paste karroge wo bhi emoticons ke saat ha ha ha
i will be right back dear
here it is part 46
soumya dear
oh sorry for comming so late and commenting so late dear
well nice and awsome update dear though it had no x-rated thoughts but i loved it as it had the lite romantic touch which i adore alot ha ha
well liked the jodi alot dear not maneet yaar i am talking abt jeeju and saali yaar
wah kya salli hai yaar jeeju ki itni maddat wah
arre jeeju apne saali ko bhi koi gift do na yaar inte maadat ki hai aur karti hai to toda to farz banta haina
wow nice pone cov and maan taunting geet ha ha ha
its nice that she is said ulu nahi jeeju i thought she might say ha usse ulllu ka naam maan hai tho geet ke saath saath maan ko bhi jatka lagtha na yaar soumya chllo koi gal nahi agli baar yese mouke math chodana ok dear
daadim taunting maan so good go daadima go make a feast of it daadima
maan yelled to daadima lage jatka mujhe
maan looked at her as though she had asked him to give up breathing untill the next day
and not interested in project wah pyaar ka assar hai daadima dont worry
wow soumya nice cov of devtara
and i pinched myself as dev can talk to her back that to in loud coive and slamming blue prints yaar phir laga jatka
kya soumya last update u blasted with kisses and now with jatkas wow dear keep it up
ha ha ninatara what is she saying chalo aur kya expect kar sakthe hai usse
hello chulrail blue prints ko samjne ke liye brain ki zarrorat hoti hai aur tum mein brain hi nahi na tho kya samjogi
chalo accha hai ki maan ne people with brain ko job diya takki tum aur dev apni brain ko use na kare samji ha ha ha so dont think abt thinking ok live it to employees there they will handle much better than u people
how dare nainatara called maan ahhhhhh
chalo acha hai ki maan ne jalde baat par aaya aur solve kiya nahi to pata nahi mein usse kay kar deti
nainatara dont be on cloud 9 dumbo coz maan will send u to hell when he comes to know abt ur true colors i mean what u have done to geet u fool
soumya so good dear as u do the things in right way as u placed nainatara and dev character so inice and apt amazing work dear
the 2 women dialogue really cracked me yaar
maan bhi geet ki tarah bangaya hai not stopping if he started talking ha ha ah what a change daadima again taunting maan so good go daadima go
and daadima yeh kya kah diya aap ne age not allowing u ohhh
waise aap 25 century ke daadima hai na tho aap ko old fashion dialogue shoba nahi deti ha ha ha
jab aap honeymoon wo bhi before marriage keh sak the hai to ab kya hua?
ye le abhi age ki problem thi aur abhi marriage aur honeymoon ki bathe kar rahe hai lagta hai aap ko memory lost ki bhimari lag gai hai
hota hai jab maan ko haste huye ayr work ko reject karthe juye aur ilu bolte huye aur openly kiss karthe huye dekha tha na is liye aap ki memory loss ho gayi hai daadima ha ha
maan as 5 year kid
wah wah geet to maan ki tarah perfect hone lagi hai yaar so perfect at her work and adressing him to sir at office and maan at home wah geet wah
chalo education ke baar mein baat kar rahi ho so nice dear ca oh ho
and pregnancy wow dear nice i think parent side of maan is coming out
i think he wanted to save her and i think he will advice her to stay in outhouse so that he can take care of her and save her from the people useless and nonsense talks
soumy dear
i loved the way u present yaar
ur way of writing is so perfect and apt and fab and soumya
i loved and enjoyed it alot dear
and jappiz to you dear
and really love u alot dear
yes soumya how i forgot the point 10. commitment so true maan is a gentle maan yaar
11. he tied dori though she is abt to change her dress so nice of maan yaar
he is a perfect gentleman with wonderful and adorable principles yaar
i love u maan singh khurana
and to u soumya
@ uzma : dear u r so amazing dear and funny at the same time sense of humour is outstanding yaar
wah kya dialogue that maan ka raging harmouns it cracked me yaar
note : soumya my break time is finished when i am commenting so thought of continuing my comments and latter add my emoticons but when i am back the topic is closed and she i have edit it again but sorry its abit long post na but i know u will enjoy it ha ha ha
i will be back after reading the next update dear ha ha


sravs






sravs honey....!!!!!
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i'm so sorry for closing the thread but i had to/....!!!! dint have a choice u know....

coming back to your comments, as usual they just keep getting better every time...!!! and i love all of them...!!!!

cant wait for you to read the next part and reply...!!!

in the morning before updating, part 47 i was thinking , "pata nahi yeh srava kaha reh gayi... comment nahi kiya ab tak..main next update kaise karu..." and i was fidgetting around for sometime when i realized u posted ur comment and said u will come back later and edit it... that was sufficeint enough for me and i immediately put the next update....!!!!

thanks honey....!!!! love you so so so so so so so so so much......❤️.....!!!!!!! 😛

Soumya

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