Strangers- The sequel (Parts1-5) (Pg 1,2,3) - Page 5

Originally posted by: sweet scorpio

just read the remaining parts!.....they were awesome!

continue soon!

Thanks but the story is over!!!

Rev, I do think you are my twin! My thoughts exactly. I was about to add Anil Kumble but thought better not to drag him to justify my fic. I really admire that man. He stood by her even through the ugly custody battle. When I had read about him, my respect for him grew.

Yes, unconditional love is difficult to understand and even more difficult to follow. Unconditional love is best exemplified in the relationship a mother has with her child but here I took it beyond that. Here is a man who feels that sort of love for a child who is not his. That requires a lot of courage and magnanimity. Can we dismiss it as impossible? I thought that we can't, at least we can hope such people do exist, can we not?

Actually the inspiration for this fic was a Tamil serial by the name Rayil sneham (by the way I am a Tamilian). I dont know whether you had seen this show which was telecast sometime in the early 1990s. I do not remember the whole story but like in my story, the guy rescues a girl from jumping over in a running train. He later realises that she is pregnant and shelters her. I don't know whether they got married in the show but I think she dies during the child birth and he raises the girl on his own. The story is told in flashback where the girl ( a teenager) finds her mother's diary and finds the truth that the man she thought was her father was not her father. It is a K.Balachander serial.

Taking this seed of a man's love for a child who is not his, I spun my own story.

Glad you liked this story.

Hey Opti =)

Originally posted by: wintersunshine

Hey Opti =)

You're an awesome writer yaar... I did not comment on your first thread didn't get a chance to, but read each and every chapter!! Your fic was amazing even though I am really happy that I knw the story now, I am extremely sad that it's over.... you knw the day you posted your fic I loved your initial chapters so much that I went and found all the fics I could written by you and currently reading them!! The way you potrayed relationships, specially relationships of heart more than blood mind blowing, total unconditional love it was amazing and also Dev's role in this..... don't have enough words to describe it!!!

Please please convert all your other fics to Maaneet also... can't wait to read more story's from you... or maybe even a Maaneet original wat say??? *wink* *wink*

Please do think about it...................... please

Love,

Heena

P.S. I don't think i found all of ur fics so can you pm me the names and the links if you have them... or just the names will do... and i'll search for them =)

Thanks Heena. I am very flattered that you took the pains to find my other fics.

Here is the list (excluding Strangers which is already covered here)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1121463/ff-destinys-children-pgs-1-to-5-also-ck-pg-84 – Destiny's children (The first and the longest fic I wrote)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1152380/invisible-bonds-complete-ff-5-parts-pg-27 – Invisible Bonds (short story)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1170546/great-expectations-part-xxxi-pg-202-23-5 – Great Expectations (The most difficult one to write but one I enjoyed writing)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1203345/the-reconciliation-epilogue-page-18-15-7 – The Reconciliation (Short story)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1192449/the-break-up-one-shot-michi-fanfic – The Breakup (One shot)

Originally posted by: MaaneetDD

😆😆..Twin ?? Do u want me take ur Twin!! wow thanks 😉.. I can comment and u write beautiful stories - deal ??

I have not watched the serial..Geet is my singular tele-obsession.. I do understand tamil and used to watch tamil movies quite a lot.. But serials- nope.And 1990s - I doubt I would have been allowed to watch the TV for more than 30 mins (in school nah 😳) . But sounds to be a beautiful concept. Wish they show such lovely serials again.. It would be a nice change from the unrequired tears and emotional overdose !!

Since you mentioned that you were still in school in the early 1990s, that would make you a bacchi in comparison to me! So we cannot really be twins age wise but yes, we can be mental twins since our thoughts seem to match! As to writing stories, its a pity I am now hopelessly out of touch, have not written in more than a year, the last being "The Reconciliation" written in July 2009. In fact I felt I had lost my touch in that story itself.


Rayil sneham was a beautiful show (13 episode long). It featured Nizhalgal Ravi in the lead. If you know the actor. There were several good shows then and nothing stretched beyond the 13 episode mark. So are you a Mallu, then?

Originally posted by: Opti

Thanks Heena. I am very flattered that you took the pains to find my other fics.

Here is the list (excluding Strangers which is already covered here)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1121463/ff-destinys-children-pgs-1-to-5-also-ck-pg-84 ' Destiny's children (The first and the longest fic I wrote)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1152380/invisible-bonds-complete-ff-5-parts-pg-27 ' Invisible Bonds (short story)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1170546/great-expectations-part-xxxi-pg-202-23-5 ' Great Expectations (The most difficult one to write but one I enjoyed writing)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1203345/the-reconciliation-epilogue-page-18-15-7 ' The Reconciliation (Short story)

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kayamath/1192449/the-break-up-one-shot-michi-fanfic ' The Breakup (One shot)

👏👏👏

Opti

i read it and i realised i already told you certain aspect of thoughts without even reading the part..

you had already written what i wanted to voice..

it is always better to know from the horses mouth as they say..
curiosity will always..kill the cat and satisfaction will always bring it..back..

my line..
captivating till the very end...

i loved it...

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Opti

i read it and i realised i already told you certain aspect of thoughts without even reading the part..

you had already written what i wanted to voice..

it is always better to know from the horses mouth as they say..
curiosity will always..kill the cat and satisfaction will always bring it..back..

my line..
captivating till the very end...

i loved it...

Thanks Vru. Yes, it is always better to get it from the horse's mouth however, bitter the truth may be and however hard it may to digest it.

Have not got down to reading your fics yet. Will do so and comment when I find the time.

Originally posted by: LoveManeet

I LOVED IT!!!!
😃

take it easy..time to write a new FF rather than give you old FFs a new packaging...

write something for Maaneet would love read some..