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God he just left her hanging - devious Maan- He knows the effect he has.. When she says No, he pushes and when she succumbs, he leaves her hanging 😡😡😡... Jelebi ki tarah tedha hai Maan Sir 😆😆😆.. Ustaad u to oare devious 😉- ladhi ko tarpta chor diya 😆😆
I am sorry to say this - but I was more moved by the verse than by the prose.. Not that the prose was not good, I was sooooooo lost and having this silly grin on my face when I was reading it.. I was just amused with Maan's antics - the sensual touches, seducing her through carresses and his order Not to close her eyes so all her senses are Open to him and NONE close him out --------ooooooooooooooooooolalaaaaaaa........
But ur prose woke me up with these beautiful lines -
when I wear my bad moods to my mouth, you should
Like a rose without its thorn
Like a bird without a song
Like the fire without the flame
If there's a painless love, we wouldn't be the same
Undress me, undress me
Unlock this chain and set me free
Remind me to be myself, my self
Undress me, undress me
Unleash my heart and make me see
When I become someone else
Reminded me a song (Tamil)---Only if the wings part can the birds fly in the sky - I love this line because for me the wings represent lovers and the bird is the love that bind tthem.. For love to fly (rather bloom), both the wings must let go rise above the insecurities and pass through the agnipariksha of self -realization to soar above !!!
I just loved these lines Vroom, made me get into thinking mode- U just hit the nail bang on spot.. Their love needs to pass through the fires of hell to come out stronger just like Gold passes through fire to become a beautiful jewel from nugget...There have been many indications that the idyllic setup is gonna be blown into a mass couldron of misunderstandings , desolation and heartbreaks 😭😭😭
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