Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 37

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip



ah amrita..

we all know..that those eye locks are the kisses...and that is as much as we are going to get..most of the time..now a hug is nice to see that they have progressed.. but i hope to see some sizzling scenes even without the eye lock..cos it can be done..and they showed how Nissar can play with angle to show us that standing one foot apart..he can make it look like they are walking over each other...

i hope..they do...the kiss...there's always a first...


I wonder why they don't show kissing scenes when they show romantic scenes 😕 just a song and a dance isn't enough..I hope that the cv's show us the most romantic scenes ever in the history of telly world in this, in Geet..they should bring a good kissing scene, I know that they can show us anything they want, the earring scene ended looking like it was a kiss on her earlobe 😳 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
MINDBLOWINGLY AMAZING!! REALLY BEAUTIFULLY DESCRIBED .. IT LITERALLY CREATED THE SCENE IN FRONT OF MY EYES!!
IMAGINE IT ON THE TV!! THE FUSES WOULD BLOW, GIRLS WOULD FAINT AND THE RATINGS WOULD BE THRU THE ROOF!!
HELL .. EVERYONES A WINNER!! WHAT SAY CV'S .. BE A LITTLE BRAVE!!
uZ XX
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Vrushali 🤗 did I get your name right?

What a scene you have written 👏
1,2,3, let me count until I catch my breathe
cv's 😡 where are they? Still sleeping?? 😡 can't they provide scenes like this at least as Maan's dream or Geet's
I hope that whether they confess their love or not the cv's should provide a hawt and sexy scene like one of yours...but just one won't be enough for me 😲 I want more 😆 😆 😆
I loved your way of expressing every bit of it, slow, steady and the feel in your writing is....don't have a word to express 👏
Edited by amrita2010 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow, Prof. Vrush,

Amazing, absolutely amazing. Don't know what else to write.

Thanks for the birthday wishes.

Your student,
Polki 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
⭐️⭐️⭐️....
God he just left her hanging - devious Maan- He knows the effect he has.. When she says No, he pushes and when she succumbs, he leaves her hanging 😡😡😡... Jelebi ki tarah tedha hai Maan Sir 😆😆😆.. Ustaad u to oare devious 😉- ladhi ko tarpta chor diya 😆😆
I am sorry to say this - but I was more moved by the verse than by the prose.. Not that the prose was not good, I was sooooooo lost and having this silly grin on my face when I was reading it.. I was just amused with Maan's antics - the sensual touches, seducing her through carresses and his order Not to close her eyes so all her senses are Open to him and NONE close him out --------ooooooooooooooooooolalaaaaaaa........
But ur prose woke me up with these beautiful lines -
when I wear my bad moods to my mouth, you should
Like a rose without its thorn
Like a bird without a song
Like the fire without the flame
If there's a painless love, we wouldn't be the same

Undress me, undress me
Unlock this chain and set me free
Remind me to be myself, my self
Undress me, undress me
Unleash my heart and make me see
When I become someone else
Reminded me a song (Tamil)---Only if the wings part can the birds fly in the sky - I love this line because for me the wings represent lovers and the bird is the love that bind tthem.. For love to fly (rather bloom), both the wings must let go rise above the insecurities and pass through the agnipariksha of self -realization to soar above !!!
I just loved these lines Vroom, made me get into thinking mode- U just hit the nail bang on spot.. Their love needs to pass through the fires of hell to come out stronger just like Gold passes through fire to become a beautiful jewel from nugget...There have been many indications that the idyllic setup is gonna be blown into a mass couldron of misunderstandings , desolation and heartbreaks 😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Darling Rev...

the song is not mine...but..someone's
in my usual absent minded ness i forgot to give credit.
.let me..edit

the rest i shall respond to in a bit..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

Darling Rev...

the song is not mine...but..someone's
in my usual absent minded ness i forgot to give credit.
.let me..edit

the rest i shall respond to in a bit..

Big deal! U put it here and it suited the mood .. So ur creation 😉😉😉...I see u have edited to give credit where its due-Sweet !!! muah 🤗..
Sorry about yest, ddnt think that we could chat.. I just went off to sleep 😳... Let me know whats the agenda for today!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Uzma...so true..i hope they see this..and think worthy of their time.. and make our wishes come true..

@ Amrita..yeah you did...thank you...i still managed to understand..what you were trying to say without words...;-) my other profession is reading minds..

@ polki my stud (pronounced stewed)...short for student...

you are welcome..and yeah...i would love if you do write..something..else..you name is enough sometimes for me to understand..what you are feeling...

lifafa dekh kar khat ka majmoom pata kar lete hain
tum kuch likho na likho,, tumhara naam haal-e-dil bayan kar dete hain..

oh...how corny can i get..

@Rev.. i heard the song..online and liked and felt it was apt for my prose..so included it... sorry if i misled..in my waywardness..
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Rev i slept at 1 am after a phone call from the bedroom from my hubby ordering me to go to sleep...i am lunatic...
soon he is going to disown me...

today the plan is to watch three movies...with him...salt, inception adn expendables...

quality time with hubby ;-) thora patana parega...nahi to mein beghar ho jaaongi..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

@ Rev i slept at 1 am after a phone call from the bedroom from my hubby ordering me to go to sleep...i am lunatic...
soon he is going to disown me...

today the plan is to watch three movies...with him...salt, inception adn expendables...

quality time with hubby ;-) thora patana parega...nahi to mein beghar ho jaaongi..

😆😆😆... I know me too same haalat, I dont know wen my hubby will throw me or/and my lappie out!! Me wondering - who will go 1st - lappie or Me 😕😕...
Ennjoy ur day with hubby dear.. We will chat tomorrow? In case u coming online later let me know, me ll be awake till 3 😊..Abhi log off karo and conc on jeej

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