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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#381

Tease,

just tore a page off from your book
for i wanted more than just a look

oh that parting line is the hook
to draw you into the nook

as i wrote my fingers shook
and my mind seemed to cook

so here i am..making no brook
of being a tease, the way you took..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#382

Originally posted by: rushtrip
Tease,

just tore a page off from your book
for i wanted more than just a look

oh that parting line is the hook
to draw you into the nook

as i wrote my fingers shook
and my mind seemed to cook

so here i am..making no brook
of being a tease, the way you took..

Did you just come up with that on the fly??? DAMN GIRL!!!

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#383

yeah..i always..do...Tease...

why do you think my name is RushTrip

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538783

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Posted: 15 years ago

#384

LOL... Then I should be called SLOWTRIP... ah.. scratch that, make it slowtease

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--Revv--

@--Revv--

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Posted: 15 years ago

#385

Hello Amrita, Like Vroom said, welcome to the loonie gang!! Thank the lord for our choices in hubby.. They being understanding 😉😉😉..Nahi toh Maan ke darbar eeks I mean Outhouse hai nah 😆

@Vroom-Guess u will be in a queue if the route to his outhouse is ever open!! Can u imagine the stampede 🤣🤣🤪..We can take an apartment close to Maan's haveli and we will be the deewani gang !!

I agree that we have fallen in love with Maan- the character.. I like GC but like Vroom and I had discussed toooooo schweet for our tastes.. Man is the tangy flavor and he is one dish who always gives out a different flavor everytime -- Me hungry , going to have dinner and look at the words I have written!! 😳😳

Hey Just saw the pics -Thanks Amrita !! Vroom u better patent the scenes!! Chori ho raha hai tumhare scenes ke!!! ⭐️👏👏👏

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Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#386

Thank u Johanne 🤗...

Looks like they are looking at a mirror ???? What do u guys think?/

I think Vroom has gone out.. she may not respond for sometime 😔

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Johanne Jahanara

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Posted: 15 years ago

#387

as mention on FB, guess Vroom got her OS on screen, she should get royalties or work with them as she is definitely on the same page.... ;-)

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jazzerette

@jazzerette

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Posted: 15 years ago

#388

wow...d pics def luk lik dey r frm vrush's Ff...well if dey r true den congrtas grl!! n keep predictin...err i mean writin 😉

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BgblZoolander69

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Posted: 15 years ago

#389

You are just an AMAZING writer. you capture the emotions and scenes so well. I wish I could write half as well as you. Loved the last part! 👏

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-RushTrip-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#390

thanks jo...

i hope i did some justice...to the scene they are creating..

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