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Rituparnaa thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#71
JUST OUTSTANDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ROCKIN......................
What is more enjoyable is the Punjabi word ka Tadka in the drama...it is making it more natural as if the real Geet we are watching.........kudos Maanmeet....
Edited by Rituparnaa - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

welcome dear
your ff is really nice.thanks for such a nice updates
waiting for next





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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
that was awesome.........loved reading it and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74
@readers....who didnt like punjabi that much
frens....i will surely try not to put so much punjabi parts in it.....and if i give i will be translating it for u....i cudnt do dat this tyme...as it was already written...i m sorry ...:(
i will keep it in mind fully...thank u for ur clear views...and i respect it fully ....
thanx again but..
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well...i had punched punjabi...as both geet kaur handa and maan singh khurana are punjabis....i just tried to make it more real....
but i will keep ur words in mind frm now on...plz wait for the next part and comment ...m sorry again..n thanx for readin it
@rituparnaa
thanks dear for supporting it ........i m happy that u undrstand punjabi well.....thanx...
@ new readers.....
thank u dear friends...i hav added u all ...and will pm u as i update....
i m glad u enjoyed reading it .....
plz keep on reading as well replying .....
i hope i can reach upto ur satisfaction...
thanx n love
maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#75
yar just a request' thr is 2 mch punjabi goin on here, hope u dont mind bt plz try 2 tk care of this,


n yes rocking updates😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#76
omg that was fantastic
cant wait to read ur nxt update
can u pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
#77
hellow frenz...
i m here with the update.....
i hav tried my best ...hope u like it ....
plz reply so that i can understand how it was.....
thanx beforehand...
part5

After lunch maan went upstairs .he didn't sleep last night..(remember geet's wish to babaji..).he soon had fallen asleep deeply…

Its 7.30 pm at night. Geet is totally bored in this big house..roaming here n there ...finally starts working for dinner ..as the night grew darker ....geet was feeling low inside..this big house was reminding her about her own big haveli at hoshiyarpur..working in the kitchen made her remember ..her mummyjee n tayi ji working at kitchen...papaji ..nothing is forever .not even your own blood relations..she thought..she tried to blame everything to dev..but she knew in her mind. That not only dev but everyone cheated her ..darji n brij tried to kill her..her entire family knew it ..as well supported..except papaji .but neither he had the audacity to go beyond dirji ..and their so called family respect..every little thing was coming back in her mind like flashes..

She wiped off her tears...himmat rakh geet ..aaj akeli hai to kya hua..kal tera baccha tere sath hoga..she assured herself...turned on the radio to distract her ...but it local Punjabi folk song playing in the fm..that made her eyes moist again..

On the other side maan woke up ..he reached kitchen looking for geet ..as he saw geet looking outside the window voidly with her deep big brown eyes moist ...and the song playing in d fm..he had got it what might happen to her..he switched off the fm.

Geet ...his voice broke her trance.

Haan sir..!

Maine tumhe pehle bhi kaha tha...jo yaad aashu lata hai ankhonme..us yaad ko yaad nahi karna chahiye...geet nodded feebly ...

Maan understood ..she is feeling very much low..he neared her..geet dinner order karde..?

Nahi sir..maine bana li hai..aapko bhukh lagi hai?

Nahi..ahem..geet ..aa .ahem..waise tum paranthe acchi bana leti ho..

That made her smile a little..all that maan was trying to bring back d actual geet..

Maan switched on the radio..changed the channel..

Hello mere peyare bro's and unke sisters....mai hu rj rohit..aj ke sham ke suruwat karte hai ek peyar bhare gaan se..here it goes..

" ...here goes"Ekdin teri rahon me" from film "naqaab".....keep listening to 93.5 red fm.u love it all...."

[guyz please download d fisrt song of d list ...it wil tak jus 1 min to download it...so that u can feel the song being present there] http://www.songs.pk/naqaab.html

Dance...? geet amazed to see maan on his knee's spreading his right hand out..folding the left hand on his back..

The timid light of the kitchen was afraid to lighten their feeling..a amazing atmosphere was created in the kitchen of the outhouse..

Geet's heart skipped a beat ..the Maan Singh Khurana kneeling down infront of her....he was looking astoundingly handsome and appealing ..he was wearing a maroon shirt and a black pant..his rugged look..deep eyes...honeybrown eyeballs shining ...mesmerizing smile was hovering his eyes..his cupid's bow lips...she unknowingly extended her hand...

Gripping her hand maan made her swirl around him with the music..pushed her away keeping the grip fixed on her hand..

And pulled her back..grasping her waist tight...her hand encircled his neck...

Sirrr..! she gasped.

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

Ignoring her moan...Maan held her tight with him...making swift movements...

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga

mesmerized geet responded.

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka...............dil to na keh saka....

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka...............dil to na keh saka.......

maan swayed her in the air.. holding her tight by her waist ...geet was lost in the dance.....

Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai

Pulled her closer ..keeping his burning gaze fixed in her eyes..as if he is trying to make her feel the same said in the music..

Tu jaane na tu
Chaahat meri kitni betaab hai
Ho jo barso meri palkon mein tha
Tu wohi khwaab hai

Maan bent her like a flower..

Har ghadi teri yaadoon mein
vaadon mein iradon mein

Aungaa ..............khojaunga.......
Ek din tera ho jaunga

Maan picked her up in the air....holding her by waist....

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka

He felt her breath on his face..while dropping down..

Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
Dil to na keh saka

Pulled her closer ..keeping the gaze fixed on her eyes...Geet couldn't tolerate more the seducing gaze...she lowered her eyes...

Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh lejati hai

Yeh Jhukti nazar
Jaane jigar hosh lejati hai

D song made her red...Blushing she tried to move away..maan drew her back to him...
Mein kaise kahon
Ek ajnabi dard dejati hai

Her heart skipped the next beat

Chupke se Chupke se teri neeedon mein
Khwaabon mein khayalon mein
Chaaunga Khojunga

Ek din ..Ek din teri raahon
Baahoon mein panaahon mein
Aungaa khojaunga
Ek din tera ho jaunga


Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka
Yeh dil to na keh yeh baatein
dil to na keh saka.......................................

The song stopped ....as well they...but they stood their rooted...eye locked...their breath was fast....hyperventilating ..may be due the exertion of dance...may be due some unknown feeling ran through their spines....

They forgot to talk...to move..geet was trying read out something in his longing eyes...

Geet was first to gain back her senses....she pushed maan away and..ran outside..

Maan closed his eyes...a hand running through his silky hairs..he was still remembering the proximity and the hue on her ...her breath on his face..

Kuch jada ho gaya....geet dar gayi hogi.....he guessed it right ..

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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
that was all...plz reply guyz......i m mailbiting..and plz press d like button if u like ...
plz plz plz reply ...
thanx a lot for ur support till date...
love maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#79
reserved wait i'll read all the parts and get back...stop nailbiting!!!🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80
omg that was fantastic
cant wait to read more

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