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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Ayesha_MSK

You update FAST 😃 Thank you!!!
Awww the poor guy escaped to his office to get away from Geet... but in vain 😆 😆 😆
Is he going camping now or returning home (to Geet 😳 )???
👏 Loved all the parts so far ⭐️

lol...yeah i m doing...actually i hav a good amount of part written....
actually maaneet making me do so...m helplessly in love with maaneet
nopes...he is goin back to geet...errr..i mean outhouse
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: pickachu

Veryyyyyyy interestinggggg part.Plzzzz continue soon.Thanxxx for the pm.




fatima

thank u fatima...
m updating soon....plz keep reading...and replying..i will pm u after updating
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Bul3

hey..nice updates...liked both of them a lot 😊👏..derz a request😳-can u use a little less punjabi..actually I am from rajsthan..little slow in punjabi😳..but even if u cant..its fine..I will understand slowly slowly..hmmm..infact I might learn a little punjabi also..good na?..😉..thnx for the updates and pm..keep updating!

ahh....m sorry for the punjabi...okay ...if i have to give more punjabi ..i will be translating it den n dere for u....okay ?
m also nt a punjaban....i can understand ur problem..thanx for sharing ..
thnx a ton for liking d fic..
keep reading..
love maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: Naina2127

wowow you update really fast.....sigh i only i could do that too with my ffs 😆😆😆

anyways, i completely enjoyed the updates :) and thanks for the pm!

~Naina

😆😆

lol...naina...actually i m writting now a days a lot ..as m at home...and free as well...so updating a lot ... plz keep reading and replying...
thanx
love
maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: smiliey

nicee story...add me in ur pm list....pls.....

i hav added u dear ...hope u get d request..
thanx for liking it ..plz keep replying..b in tuch
love maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: revav

hey nice one....if u continue to write.pls add me to ur PM list..........

reva

hey reva
thank u for liking it ...i m continuing it ...i hv sent u d reqst ...
thanx again
keep reading
love
maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

ahh....m sorry for the punjabi...okay ...if i have to give more punjabi ..i will be translating it den n dere for u....okay ?

m also nt a punjaban....i can understand ur problem..thanx for sharing ..
thnx a ton for liking d fic..
keep reading..
love maanmeet

no need to be sorry yar😳..you havent done anything wrong😊BTW u are not a punjaban??😲 and still can write so good punjabi..wow👏..thnx a lot for you help dear😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: neahakhan

Hey dear pls continue and updAte soon and keep up wid ur awesome work. Dying to
read further. And pls
add me to ur pm list. Thanks tons.

aahhh...
hii neha..glad to know tat u found it good..
i will be updating a lot today ...
i hav already sent u d reqst..plz accpt it ..
thanx a lot
love
maanmeet
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: Bul3

no need to be sorry yar😳..you havent done anything wrong😊BTW u are not a punjaban??😲 and still can write so good punjabi..wow👏..thnx a lot for you help dear😃

yepp...m bengali ....its my pleasure ...dn say thanx plz.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
friends here goes the update....thanx a lot for ur loads of support...
i wil be looking forward to it..
i pray i can keep up to ur expectations...fingers crossed..
thanx again...here goes the long update...
part 4

He opened d door of outhouse ….stepped in….piling the files on the table …he looked at the sofa……and colour drained from his face !!!!!!!!!!!

She is not there……she has gone….?????????

Shit….!!! He banged his fist on the table…

(Ohh really maan ….!!its that what u asked her to last night ….isnt it maan??now u r repenting …?lol maan…..!!)

Maan opened his eyes as he smelled some unfamiliar scent …he sniffed…..its coming from the kitchen….what that could be…

Is ………………..is she there….?...is she still there…..?????maan approached there with trembling heart……

Geet having her parantha sitting comfortably in the kitchen dining table….with achar …..ekdam swaad le le kar …..her face beaming with delight with each bite…

Maan smiled…..happy to see her again …..her innocent happy face..

Maan : "Tum gayi nahi abhitak……..?"

Piece of parntha fell from her finger….

Geet : "Oteeri ….tuci fir aagye!!"…..slapping her forehead

Maan : "ghar mera hai,….why should I go ….?jana to tumhe chahiye."

Geet : " par aap to chale gaye the…." Juice of d pickle dripping from her lips….making her more attractive…

Maan replied controlling himself : mai office gaya tha…chala nahi gaya tha…..file lene…..ihaa rehna hai to kaam karna hoga samjhi…..!!!

Aur mere kichen ka kya haal banake rakkha hai….yeh kya hai…he asked picking up one paratha in front of geet's bechari face…

Geet: slammed down her plate ….ise parantha kehte hai….paar baandar kya jane…adrat ka swaad…last sentence in lower tone….

Maan: kyaaa??? Kya kaha tumne….hearing actually what she said….

Geet : kuch nahi sir…mai kya keh sakti hu……khayenge…?looked at his face expectantly …

Maan: "nahi….dur karo isko ..pata nahi kya ulta sidha khate rehte ho.…..

aur haan….mujhe nahi pata tha…dadi ma ne tumhe ihaan parantha khane ke lie bulayethe….the usual sarcasm played in his voice…Jao jakar files dekh lo…table pe rakkha hai….."

Geet unwillingly moved outside the kitchen: khadooooooooosh..dusht danaav….ek mauka nai chadta menu sunaneka…she heeded towards the table…..thinking something she moved backwards silently ……and peeped from the kitchen …and saw…………………………

Maan chewing parantha with achar……finishing one he reached out for another …..he didn't have idea..that geet cooks so well….errr…after having the coffee.anyways….kudi ne kaam badhia kitti hai …!!

Smile played in geets lips….she silently went back to the table with the thought "itna bhi dusht nahi hai….par pretend to utna hi karta hai..."

Maan started dialing client's number ……thinking of resuming to work…..

Sach me sadoo hai….itna sundar mausam hai bahar…..hawayein chal rahi hai…..ek hi ghar me uske heart throb baithi hai ….aur isse kaam ki padi hai…bechari geet se bhi kaam karwa raha hai….dusht danaav…!!

D day went on …..dadima was not really feeling well for the first time actually ..though nothing much….some indigestion problem…..she didn't find time to call geet to talk about maan….and neither she had d idea dat maan is still there at the outhouse…with geet….

Well…..neither I can believe maan khurana is living under same roof with geet …whom he had warned 3 days back….. "mujhse dur rahooo"

Well…everything is possible with maneet!!isnt it ..!

D day went on ……………………god knows why maan today didn't feel like to go out …or …d campaign in jungle…?he was talking something like that yesterday isn't it ???...kiu maan aj jangal janeki nahi sujh raha hai???badhiya hai …..

Its 3 pm afternoon …..geet doing paper work …sitting near d table…maan engrossed in a file…sitting in front of geet…

Geet becoming restless now….she is hungry ….and there is no sign of freedom or food till now…..geet looks at maan…..

Babaji kis mitti se banaye ho isko…na khata hai…na peeta hai….na ghumta hai na maje leta hai….yeh to paida hi hua hoga shayed files khane ke lie….haan yeh khadus sirf file khana janta hai…..nahi…..inko mera dimag khana bhi khub aata hai……geet keeps on staring at maan ..while continuing her conversation with babaji….

Maan suddenly feels something strange…and looks up from the file…finds geet watching him…..he feels awkward …well..i should write nervous…yeah ….don worry readers…u r reading the right thing ….the great Maan Singh Khurana nervous…

he looks aside…again looks back to geet ….she is still looking at him busy with babaji..complaining about her boss….dusht danaav !!

she doesn't notice the uneasiness in maan's eye..

geet tum mujhe ghur kiu rahi ho…??

Aapko museum me rakhna chahiye tha….comes her quick reply …

Whaaaaaaaaaaat…!!! Kya matlab…??

His shout brings back geet to normalcy….otteerii…fir shuru ho gaya inka chillana…geet kuch kar ….she said herself…

Matlab kya hai sir…..aap to paranthe kha gaye ..menu hatake….hun(now) menu jordi bhukh lagi hai……..kya is office me lunch break nai hoti??she asked innocently ….

Maan felt uncomfortable at d name of parantha…he didn't have the faintest idea geet knows about his having parantha….

He picks the phone lying in front of him ..iske sath museum ka kya talukat hai??

Nahi kya hai na sir….maine pehle kabhi shirt pant pehna hua machine nahi dekha tha…..pichle 4 ghanto me nahi aap hile ho…nahi kuch aur kie ho….pata nahi us kagaj pe kya dhundh rahe hai…..to mai soch rahi thi ke…….

Kyaaa…..geeeeeeeeeeeet………!!

Dekha…..firr se aap chillane lage mujhpe….mai to normal insaan hu na…mujhe bhukh nahi lag sakti….

Shut up geet..yeh bat tum simple ek sentence pe bhi keh sakte the….ke bhukh lagi hai….

Aap to aise keh rahe hai…jaise mai bolungi to dunia mere kadmome lake rakh denge…..ek pink tajmahal bana denge….!

Maan lowered his eyes……uff…bina soche kuch bhi bolti hai yeh ladki …..uhh..

Ahem,….geet tumhare marnese pehle mai pink tajmahal nahi bana sakta…u know dats a makbara…..

Geet greeted her teeth at this…..aap aapne aap nu shahjahan samajhte hai??....???kis angel se aap shahjahan lagde bataye menu jara…

Off…fine geet …yeh ph lo…..ring ho raha hai…jo bhi khana hai..order kar do…..aajayega yehi…

Huh…..geet snatches the ph away…

Haanji Namaste jii……mai maan singh khurana ke ghar se bol rahi hu.. aap na….order likh lo ….

1 paneer tikka…1 daal makhni….1 butter chicken….1 mixed chole …1 bengan ke bharta…1 dum aloo…5 gobi ke paranthe…aur haan 10 mirchiyan…..

Geet hold on geet…itnaaaa sab hum dono ke lie hai ….geet …?

Nahi sir…yeh to sirf mere lie hai..mujhe laga sher din me do bar khate nahi hai…..

Geeeeeet…!! He hissed.

Okay sir…thand paiye..todde vaste bhi bolde hai….

Sunie paaji…..yeh sab na double kar dijiye,…..accha paji ..? ho jayega na…Jii paji bohot khub …..aur haan sunie paaji…daal makhni aur paranthe me ghee khuub daliyega…..thik hai…sat shree kal paaji..bye…

Turning back she found maan sitting on the couch holding his head tight by both of his hands….

Oye …ab meine kya kar dia sir…..ohhh…lassi bolna to bhul hi gayi…is lie…haina sir…..par koi bat nahi sir…..aaj apko mirch khaneki jarurat hi nahi hai ….haina …to lassi bhi nahi chahiye hogi…mujhe pata chal gayi hai ..tuci daler ho delhi da…..satisfied geet resumes to her work…..

Maan couldn't help but smiles…..thinking of the mirchi episode….d sentence keeps on ringing in his ears… "…tuci daler ho delhi da…" he sneaks a glance on her face….d way she removed the lassi from his mustache …..maan shut his eyes…his breath fastened at the very thought of her touch….

Yeh ladki bhi na hadh hai…..!!he smiled in his mind….looking at her engrossed in her work again…

plz reply guyz....so that i can again update at evening ...

precap

Geet's heart skipped a beat ..the Maan Singh Khurana kneeling down infront of her....he was looking astoundingly handsome and appealing ..he was wearing a maroon shirt and a black pant..his rugged look..deep eyes...honeybrown eyeballs shining ...mesmerizing smile was hovering his eyes..his cupid's bow lips...she unknowingly extended her hand...

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