FF Pyar ka ehsaas Maan and Geet.Part 48..pg190 - Page 133

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Posted: 14 years ago

so i was really looking fwd to the next update but as ur busy I started reading the FF since part 1..lol i know jobless ya - infact im at work, NOT working and re-reading your FanFic !! Peeeerrrfffecctt

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Posted: 14 years ago
hi.....very nice update waiting for the next.... pls include me also in ur pm list....
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Posted: 14 years ago
hey muskan where are u yaar. update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz


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Posted: 14 years ago
hi muskan
till now i have been a silent reader of ur ff bt i have to tell u now i jst love it....i browse the forum daily twice or thrice waiting for ur update .....plz add me to ur pm list so tht i can read it as soon as u update...
as usual ths part also ws very good.....after four years of marriage Maan finally met his wife....
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanxs guys..sorry could not thanxs u guys enough...
missed u all a lot...
maan - tum ko kya gift chahiya
geet - kuch nahin ..mera pas sab kuch hain..and she leaves..saying
waise bhi hamara aise koi rishtha to nahin hain ..

Part 47


those words went nailing his heart..he knew wat ever he does now she won't believe him
maan stood there looking at her...how could'nt he notice her presence in the house
the more he thought about it..the more he felt the urge to be around her
the whole afternoon..he kept stocking her..
geet was helping krish settle his luggage & making him ready for the evening

geet walks into their room in mansion ...maan quickly comes in & locks the door..
geet turns in shock & notice maan....she was relaxed seeing him
she pulled out her dress & was leaving..maan blocked her way
she looked at him in suprise(there was so much passion in his eyes she could'nt relate to)
maan - mujhe tumse kuch baat karne hain
geet - abhi nahin..
maan - abhi..(he still kept moving closer)
geet - maan sare guest aagyan hain..
maan - mane kaha na ...abhi.to abhi.(he was very close..they could actuallly feel each other )
geet was little unconfartable with his closeness..she tried dojjing him
maan put his hand around her neck..rested his head on her forehead
his breath was falling on her eyes...& hers were falling on his neck
tickling his senses..geet moved back & snaped plesae maan..I have to get ready..
geet was suprised as one rugged arm went around her bare skinny soft waist
his warm, intense breath fanned over her neck..She was self-conscious in the shadow of his
glance, the saree was adding to her insecurities
maan felt her softness under his embrace. Did she know how beautiful, how alluring and
innocent she appeared? geet wondered..he should not be touching her,
but he seemed powerless against her. Geet suddenly desired to fire his soft emotions;
she felt much safer when he was angry with her.
maan aap yah kya kar rahen hain? please mujhe jane do..she pulled herself out
& she left..saying aap ka shirt iron ho raha hain..nakul will get it soon..
maan realized his mistake..he remembered their intense momement in the hotel..
he knew after all that she may not allow him to come close to her...he was so
helpless & desperate to feel her ..every hidden desire in him was getting life
and making it impossible for him to control himself..he splashed some water on his face..
maan gets ready & comes down...guest had started coming in
maans eyes were skiming through the crowd ..looking for geet
she wore a beautiful black saree ...& looked sparkling...with those diamond set
maan was magnetically attracted & walked towards her..slowly wispered into her ears
maan - geet suno..
geet - abhi nai..mujhe aapko gift dena hain ..challo
she held him from his arms & tragged him towards the door..he helplessly followed
maan - geeeet please mujhe tum se bhut kuch kehna hai
there were guests walking in..every time maan tried to say a word some body would
come & he would have to greet them...
geet stood next to him greeting the guest & excited..he was getting restless..
maan tried pulling geet away from there...she just jumped at the next guest & hugged her tight
with a smile said..aap ka gift..maan..(he was barely listening)
maan just glanced at the lady in pink saree & smiled
& pulled geet aside please I need to talk to u
geet wispered into his ears
geet - are u mad...? phele unse baat karlo
maan - mujhe tumse baat karna hain aabhi...
geet looks at her & looks at maan being indifferent..geet shouts at maan..
geet - itna gussa teehk nahin hain maan..ek to priya di is come all the way to
meet u & showing her attitude
maan looked back..to notice..the lady he glanced & did'nt notice was priya
priya stood their smiling at maan arguing with geet
maan was shocked he could'nt believe his eyes..
he pulled geet & walked out and pushed her against the wall..& turned away
geet - maan wat is wrong with u..aap ko itna gussa kyu aa raha hain?
maan - wat is all this geet..why are u doing this to me..(his voice was spitting anger & pain)
geet - mujhe to aapke baat samjhe nahin aathi
maan - aur mujhe tumari..
geet - maan please aap ek bar unse milloo..(maan turns back & punches the wall behind her)
she could feel the heat & impact of the punch which just missed her..
maan - just leave geet..ise phele ki I lose my temper just leave me alone..
geet walking away mumemers..kuch kho to gussa, na karo gussa..I don't know why he hates me so much..& she bumps into priya was still standing near the door
geet - di maine aap ko kaha tha na..He hates me..I don't know why he hates me so much
kitna bhi kar lo inke liya kam hi hain..
priya hugs geet..
krishna came running & said hi priya mom
geet left them alone & attended the other guest...
geet was looking for maan..every where..she tried calling him ..he did't answere the call...
maan went to his room in outhouse looked at priya's pic wondering wat was happening..
slowly he could notice her reflection merging into the picture ..he did't turn back
maan - aab kyun aai ho?
priya - aan padha !!
maan - kise kai liya..krishna key liye ..jise ko tum rota bilhatha chodkar gayi thi
priya - nahi tumahre liya
maan - mera liya?
priya - 2 saal se mera dimag karabh kar rakha geet ne...every day every single day
please come back ...maan loves u..he needs u...how u still have my picture here
my earrings..my dupatta, my glass..my lipstick mark on them...
u love me ..how much u miss me ..making it difficult for me ...
she had tears rolling down her cheeks..& her voice weakening
maan just turned & hugged her ....geet walked in..looked at them hugging.. smiled
& slowly closed the door & walked out..


precap
priya pulling maans leg..

sorry for the delay..moved my place..so no internet ...just managed to come out..
thanxs a lot for all ur love & support...please to reply & let me know how u feel about
the flow..I have been missing u all a lot...really missing u all..
love
muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update!!! muskaan maan was trying to talk to geet..........n geet grossed in giving gift to him.......tan tana here comes priya n maan n she hug.........wah geet u d'nt feel anything wait n see u'll feel a lot.....lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sweet part.
So priya has come back.
Lets see what will happen next.
Continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.




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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet is stupid. and why the heck did Maan hug Priya? didn't he say he loved Geet? so confused. continue soon di. looking forward to what happens.

P.S. u didn't reply to my pm di
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Posted: 14 years ago
Priya is back, I hope not for ever, just when Maan realizes that Geet is his wife, you bring back Priya. Nahi, Nahi, Nahi. You love to torture us don't you. Bad Bad Bad.

Hopefully Priya is back to bring Geet and Maan together, to have Geet realize that Maan is in love with her not Priya. As for Maan hugging Priya, I think it is normal. It is normal to hug a dear friend regardless of their gender, so I am not concerned. I am just hoping Geet sees the light eventually.



Looking forward to the next update.

Edited by Poli.Geek - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Muskaan,
Firstly congrats on a wonderful FF .. I started and finished it all today .. just loved it!!! its 1135pm and i need to get ready for work BUT need to read the next chapter ..
so PLEASE add me to you PM!!
thanks soooooooooooo much!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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