FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 27

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Posted: 15 years ago
Part 11 : for some one special who was crying 😆
Maan: how you know I need that?
Geet: if you remember I am working with you for last 1 month." She picked up files & sit start lookig at that. She didn't like Sasha presence. She was giving weird look every time Maan address Geet.
There was silence in room.
Geet was free she was just playing with her pen.Maan notice she was writing something on her note pad & giving a shy smile .
Maan: in low voice Sasha you do rest of work in your room. As she left he very silently walk to her
Maan : he seize the note pad from her
Geet: Maan kya ha give me it is mine trying to take away from him
Maan: let me see what are you writing for last 15 mins.
Geet: lost her balance and about to fall down he grab her from her waist she was hanging in left arm clutch his shirt tightly .he very carefully make her stand .she was breathing heavily she rested her head at his arm. He without a thought held her tight in his arms. his left hand around her waist & right behind her head.
Geet slightly push him.
Maan: realized it is office he let her free she walk to the window and open it. he picked up the note pad and smile
Maan: oh I see smiled . she wrote many time her name with his "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana"
There was a taxi stand near the office the driver was listing radio
Zindagi do pal ki, zindagi do pal ki
Intezaar kab tak hum karenge balah
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge balah
Zindagi do pal ki
Geet was about to close the window but Maan push it open again.She felt he is again very close to her she just waited he move away
Maan: whisper jee MRS.GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA what will you have for lunch?
Geet: shyly kuch nahi i am not hungry
Maan kyun... don't worry i will not cook this time
Geet aisi baat nahi ha
Maan: phir kaisi baat ha
Geet : woh.......... paused
Maan: acha lobster khana ha yeh mujhe ko mirch khana ka leya phir challenge karna ha? he trun her face towards him self.......
(this part was coming on RADIO)
Dil mein tumhare chupa di hai maine to apni ye jaan
Ab tum hi isko sambhalo hume apna hosh kahan
Bekhudi do pal ki, zindagi do pal ki
Intezaar kab tak hum karenge balah
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge balah
She hide her face with her hand ....
Maan had a big laughter chalo mein tum ko aik aik jaga laker chalta hoon. he grab her hand pick his
cell and walk out
Geet: haath to chora sab dekhe raha ha
Maan: koi problem ha aap ko kya. i am holding my wife hand
Geet aap se baat karna bahot mushkil ha
Maan: Oh Meri woti haar gai .......he said the same way she talk
Geet: delight smiled to see the change in Maan attitude. The rigid Maan had vanished. now is a caring & loving Maan
in parking lot. the taxi was standing near there car

Ik chota sa vaada iss umar se zyada sachcha hai sanam
Har mod par saath iss liye rehte hain ab dono
Dosti do pal ki, zindagi do pal ki
Intezaar kab tak hum karenge balah
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge balah
Zindagi do pal ki, zindagi

Maan: smiled at her after hearing the lyrics " will you be my friend?
Geet: amazed at his question .....mein
Maan: " bolo na yes or no i don't have any".
Geet placed her hand at his hand. He drive to a near fast food shop.
Maan: you sit i will bring pizza
Gee:ok
Maan: came back " i forget to ask do you eat pizza "
Geet: yes i eat.

He came back after 10 min with a parcel.
Maan: open it Geet?
Geet: you will eat here
Maan: nahi i will take you on Moon we will eat there.
Geet: smiled acha theek ha . phir wahan jakar kaha laa ga.
Maan: Oye Mrs Geet Maan i am hunger.
Geet open the box took a piece she turn to his side : yeh la open your mouth. he took a bit she wipe his lips with tissue paper. bring straw next to him he took sip smiled
Maan: yummy today pizza is more tasty. try karo"
Geet took a bit from same piece. "yes it is"
He with out reason drive car till they finish there lunch
Maan kaise ka haath se khana ka maaza he kuch aur hota ha.
Maan whistle the tone
Dosti do pal ki, zindagi do pal ki
Intezaar kab tak hum karenge balah
Tumhe pyaar kab tak na karenge balah
Zindagi do pal ki, zindagi

Geet wondering who is this guy .......

to be cont is you guys will like it . do comment plz as your comments make me write

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: neha2005

great update as usual!

what is great dear tell me plz 😕 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww that was so beautifull
i cant wait for da nxt part
it was fantastic like always
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Posted: 15 years ago
although its story but geet is really lucky gal


very nice update ......::) 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
waoww yr its very nice.... :) lovely MANNET moments wish this happened soon :)
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: lyfwidluv

although its story but geet is really lucky gal


very nice update ......::) 👏



her prince charming is with her 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
omg omg omg nadiya
omg 10 and 11 parts are awsome dear
awsome dear truely loved it maan geet and baby part omg truely nice dear
and wow maneet and pizza nice dear
and sasha face was worth watching
maan taking care of baby omg omg nice dear
loved it loved it and loved it
and the song too suited well dear nice
ur updates are really and
sravs






Edited by sravani899 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Maan: oh I see smiled . she wrote many time her name with his "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana"
Maan: nahi i will take you on Moon we will eat there.
Geet: smiled acha theek ha . phir wahan jakar kaha laa ga.
Maan: Oye Mrs Geet Maan i am hunger
isse kehte hai ...chand ke paar chalo ....
haye....the way he told i see...mrs geet maan khurana....kash yeh sentence ek bar starone geet pe dikhade....
fantastic...!!
love derr cute convo...
nice dear ...
plz continue soon..and pm me..
love maan meet
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome update.
i dont know but i felt like as if i am not reading a FF but the real episode of geet.
u have done it so well that i wish the cvs would get some points from ur this update.
good going
waiting 4 d next , a very soon lovely, update.
luv
m.s
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Posted: 15 years ago
please post the next part soon... cant wait!!

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