FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 29

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: maanmeet8

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Maan: oh I see smiled . she wrote many time her name with his "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana"

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<strong>Maan: nahi i will take you on Moon we will eat there.
Geet: smiled acha theek ha . phir wahan jakar kaha laa ga.
Maan: Oye Mrs Geet Maan i am hunger

isse kehte hai ...chand ke paar chalo ....


haye....the way he told i see...mrs geet maan khurana....kash yeh sentence ek bar starone geet pe dikhade....


fantastic...!!

love derr cute convo...

nice dear ...

plz continue soon..and pm me..

love maan meet

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i am very happy that you liked my short update
i dont know they read FF"s or not
I will for sure update and pm you
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Morning Star

awsome update.

i dont know but i felt like as if i am not reading a FF but the real episode of geet.

u have done it so well that i wish the cvs would get some points from ur this update.

good going

waiting 4 d next , a very soon lovely, update.

luv

m.s


oh dear ..... you made me blush...
i will update soon
i am speechless 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: tinap_83

<font color="#cc3333">great update..... p;z continue soon.... maan is so romantic... i love the way he is taking care of geet.....do keep writing.....update soon.....</font>


thx dear ... your support made me write
i am glad you liked my FF Maan😳

Originally posted by: MaanEetluvr

please post the next part soon... cant wait!!



ok dear i will update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice update.loved it.
love the scene between maan and geet.
continue soon.

thx dear you plz do let me know what you like
your comments are very imp for me😳


Originally posted by: anufa

awsum....superb!!!


loved iT!!!👏❤️


update sooN!!!

😳 thx .... you are superb ...
do comment in future
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Bul3

very nice part!!👏..I liked how Geet was writing Geet Maan Singh Khurana in her notepad😳..aw..she is such a sweetheart..and Maan..hayye..he is a super sweetheart..who won't want a loving,caring and HANDSOME😉 man like him..the pizza part was very very cute!!..keep writing!!

thx dear.... i added in afternoon i will not update as i thought i am just messed up. your comments force to update a small next part ... i am obliged that you all have giving such encouraging comments. i just write for you all who read and comments 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly
















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WELCOME


Originally posted by: cute-aly


<font color="#330033">FIRST OF ALL THANK U K ROTEEE HOE BACHE PE RAHM KAR DIYA </font>




<font color="#330033" size="5">REALLY GLAD K APNI IS READER KA RONA TUM SE DEKHA NAHI GYA . ITNAAAAAAAAAAAAA BARA SHOCK DIYA THA </font>


<font color="#330033" size="5">WO KAHTE HAAN NA <font size="6">KHATRA 440 VOLT</font></font>




UPDATE IS GREAT

<font size="3">Maan: how you know I need that? ( Itneeeeeeee arse me geet ko itna to pata chal hi gya he k zehr ko zehr hi kate ga ..........ohhhhhhhhhh silly me)</font><font size="3">
Maan : he seize the note pad from geet.</font><img src="http://content.sweetim.com/sim/cpie/emoticons/000203FC.gif" alt="" /><font size="3">

Geet: lost her balance <font color="#990033">(oyeeeeeee itni bhi kya pareshani k girne hi lagi apne maan ne hi note pad liya he)</font>and about to fall down he grab her
from her waist<font color="#990066"><font color="#990033">(kya timing he grab karne ki)</font> </font>she was hanging in left arm clutch his shirt tightly .</font><font size="3">he
very carefully make her stand .she was breathing heavily she rested her
head at his arm. He without a thought held her tight in his arms. his
left hand around her waist & right behind her head.
Geet slightly push him. </font>


<font size="3">Maan: oh I see smiled . she wrote many time her name with his "Mrs. Geet Maan Singh Khurana"</font>

<font color="#990033" size="5">wah wah kya song ki timing he (perfect)</font>
<font size="3">Maan: whisper jee MRS.GEET MAAN SINGH KHURANA what will you have for lunch? <font color="#990066">( maan ese question nahi karte agar geet ne tumhe hi kacha khane ka faisla kar </font></font><font size="3"><font color="#990066">liya to)</font></font>

<font size="3">Maan: acha lobster khana ha yeh mujhe ko mirch khana ka leya phir challenge karna ha? he trun her face towards him self....... </font>

<font size="3">Maan: koi problem ha aap ko kya. i am holding my wife hand </font>
<font size="3">Geet aap se baat karna bahot mushkil ha</font>

<font size="3">Maan: Oh Meri woti haar gai .......he said the same way she talk </font>
<font size="3">Geet wondering who is this guy ...... </font> <font color="#330000" size="4">I THINK MAAN HI HE

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😳

i was thinking to take a break but i rally felt bad when i saw comments from you all.
i said nakhra kyun dekhao why not i Update. i worte this part after you added that rona wala comment... i never thought i will get positive comments.
but you all made me speechless today
love you all
thanks for reading and liking this Part
Nadia
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: platy01

Wow....great update...seeing Maan's other side...Update the next part soon..


thx dear you are great... your comments make me write
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow this is so nice maan with this attitude
wow
do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26



i was thinking to take a break but i rally felt bad when i saw comments from you all.
i said nakhra kyun dekhao why not i Update. i worte this part after you added that rona wala comment... i never thought i will get positive comments.
but you all made me speechless today
love you all
thanks for reading and liking this Part
Nadia







so sweet of u




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Posted: 15 years ago
heyy nadia............
im ur new reader...... i really really lyk ur FF.....
please pm me wen u updte another part........ u r writing superb...........
please continue soon..........

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