FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153 - Page 10

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Posted: 15 years ago
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uff naddiya it is such a pleasure to write ur maneet updates..
specailly on a weeken
i really luv it when guys kiss the forhead ...a sign of repect
wowow the next pt sounds exciting...DONT TAKE TO LONG UPDATING IT..k...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi, luvd ur ff, do add me in ur pm list😊
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PART6

Maan: thinking now he can spend some more time with her..........smiled recollecting what had happen between them...... talking to himself how suddenly she had became so imp for me........... called tasha
Tasha: yes sir cancel my all meet for the after noon & ask pinky to see me......... she went

Tasha: sasha oh ........silly me maam MK is changed he cancel his meetings
Sasha: in anger so what i do? stop telling me about MK.
Tasha: ok
Maan ask pinky to collect Geet luggage & drop at home.


At home:
Geet : went in room & she was searching for her tablets she open draw she found taweez " babji yeh yahan kaisa woh bhi Maan sir ka paas..... she remember the old man words......"yeh tum ko tumhara humsafar ka paas la jai gai" kya maan sir sach mein mera humsafar ha....quickly put her hand on her mouth .........OH! Babji meri help kara."
Geet was lost in her thoughts she heard knock at door
Geet: come in
Pinky : oh Geet tum kaisi ho ..... pinky started talking as she enter the room. she hug Geet
Geet : mein theek hoon tum yahan
Pinky : ha yar DD send me to give you company & to drop your luggage ..... pinky looking the room.
wah Geet kya baat ha.... itna romantic sa room ha tumhara har corner me phool...
Geet: blushed at pinky comment
Pinky: geet i am sad you didn't trusted me ..... Adi bhi kha raha tha ka Geet na hum dono ko apni shadi ka bara mein kyu nahi bataya ..... pinky with sad face.

Geet : woh mein....
Pinky: bus now you can't hide DD na kal media ka samana bol diya that you are His wife.
Geet thinking what suddenly changed Maan.

Servant enter : ma'am dadi want your signature at these paper
Geet without read sign it
servant :she asked you to join Her in Half hour .

Geet : nodes " pinky dear help me in getting ready.

Pinky:sure my sweet geet .deko aaj me kaisa tum ko taiyar karti ho Maan sir will have heart attack after he will see you
Geet: chup achi baat bola karo.............shy at her own comment
Pinky acha jee ....aag dono taraf lagi ha . you know he had cancel all his meeting & office staff invite you both on dinner he said i will ask geet first then let you know."

Geet wore elegant red there was a set of kundan with ruby she her self feel shy after looking her self in
mirror.
pinky: aaj kaise kai khaar nahi at Geet.

they both heard someone coming fast upstairs
Geet open door she bang in Maan chest she lost her balance just grab his strong arms
Maan hold her from her waist his warm hand was touching her soft skin both stare at each other( mahi time)...... they didn't notice pinky quietly ,
Maan staring at her cute innocent face there was a broken eyelash near her nose.
Maan: make her stand properly still his left arm around her waist "geet wait he very carefully pick it up with his right hand index finger,staring at her......"make a wish geet" bring his finger near her beautiful lips there was hardly any distance between them.
Geet let free her left hand place it on her abdomen closed her eyes and slight blow the lash her right hand was still holding maan left arm .....Maan smiled as her breath touch his face (uffff ).

Maan: if you are ready lets go.
Geet: Yes i am wait let me wear my sandals
Maan: smiled ok tum hamash iss tarah ki harakata karti ho?
Geet : nahi sirf aap ka saath trying to wear her sandals but it was tingle with her saree ... she was losing her balance (she was standing while closing it.)
Maan: wait let me he kneel down with out listening her
Geet : no plz i will do it dragging her feet away
Maan: shhh (he quickly closed her both straps )
maan quickly stand offer his arm:" lets go Miss Geet"
Geet: i can handle saaree.
Maan:" i know you can handle just be careful for baby "smiled hold her hand
Geet:

bride & groom ready for shadi ..............sorry guys geet took alot of time in getting ready & Maan staring at her mein kya karo ? ...........shadi in next part ....hope you all liked it .......do let me know
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Posted: 15 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: brba

hi nice interesting ff...keep updating freq ya...eagerly waiting to read d upcoming post.


i added dear . hope you like it 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: febinyusuff

next part please.... saath pheres and suhaag raat.. jaldi jaldi 😆


i am blushed while thinking of it 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: naddiya26


i am blushed while thinking of it 😳



I was waiting for that :( .. update soon :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: febinyusuff



I was waiting for that :( .. update soon :D


wait wait coming very soon weekend special 😳 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hehehe!!!! awsum!!!

can't wait!!!

jaldi update kro plzzzzzzzz!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Yay! They are getting married! I think Dadima either made Geet sign the wedding registry papers or property papers. Hmmm....Can't wait to read more of Maan and Geet! Update sooon!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: anufa

hehehe!!!! awsum!!!

can't wait!!!

jaldi update kro plzzzzzzzz!!!!



i am happy that i made you smile 😊 ......thanks you liked it. 😳

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