FF*Simply love*(Maaneet)pt27at pg14(note at pg153

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Nadia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: celestae143
<font color="#cc0000" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Great update...... Eagerly waiting for the marriage sequence.....

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soon dear thanks for comments

Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago

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Nadia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: XAiShBaBy08X
Yay! They are getting married! I think Dadima either made Geet sign the wedding registry papers or property papers. Hmmm....Can't wait to read more of Maan and Geet! Update sooon!

lets wait & see what is that.....dadima is dadi maa dear if they both are stubborn she is more 😳

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charlie1950

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Posted: 15 years ago

#113

jaldi jaldi update kijiya pls .eagerly and patiently waitin for the update.u write beautifully

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simzzzzcool

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Posted: 15 years ago

#114

lovely ff, read all parts......
pls send me when u'll update.

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suji

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Posted: 15 years ago

#115

fab job

am eagerly waiting for the shaadi scene😳

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Neha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#116

i just read all ur parts ... awesome .... its turning out to be a very sweet love story .... the kind of that I like .... i really loved the kiss on the forehead part and Maan helping Geet with her sandals 😍

I am eagerly waiting for the next part .... thanks for the PM dear and do PM me when u update 😊

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Muskan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#117

Just loved it.. So sweet..the sandal prt..very well narrated...

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Nadia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#118

PART 7

After days Geet felt very secure while walking with Maan to Dadi's house
On other Hand Maan happy for helping her out in most tough phase of her life
(both hiding there feelings )
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
betabiyon mein dhadkan meri chal paye
shayad yahi to pyaar ha
Dadi : smiled seeing them coming together ....."they are made for each other*
Geet left Maan arm bow to touch Dadi feet. she pull Maan too to bow
Dadi : beta no need of that gave her blessing

Maan gave a smile to Geet as if he liked her deed
kuch bhi kaha na
kuch bhi suna na
phir bhi
bechain dil hai humara
Dadi : Geet i liked you being so traditional .
maan was about to go dadi hold his arm
Dadi :where are you going beta ...you both come in party hall with me i have arrange pooja today.
Maan and Geet followed her
As they reach there
Adi...he he he sir
Maan: yes kya baat ha
Adi: plz wear this ..............foward a black sharwani
Maan: why? confuse something fishy fishy is going to happen, he had no choice other than to wear as He looked at Geet who was too puzzle
Dadi :to Geet help maan quickly beta my guests are waiting
bechain dil hai humara
behke kadam hai
mushkil main hum hai
dekho
sambhle bhala kaise yaara
chahe bina bhi
nazdeek hum chale aaye
shayad yahi toh pyaar hai

Geet walk to him and closed his sharwani button she was not able to look at him he was staring at her face she could feel it. Maan saw her hand shiver
(nazrein bichade
pehre laga de
dil pe
par dil kisiki na maane)
Maan: "Geet" raised her chin with his finger saw a tear in her eye. he was about to talk to her dadi came
Dadi : chalo dono mera saath she grab their hands Geet on her right Maan at her left Adi open hall door it was dark inside only spot light on them .........they walk on red carpet

Kaaton pe chalke
sholon mein jalke
roke
milke rahenge deewan

pinky & tasha were throwing rose petals on them they reach to the center of the room suddenly the hall was lighten about 200 guests present there. there was media people and at there back there was small stage with pandit.
Maan & Geet where in state of shocked
Dadi : today it is wedding of my grandson Maan with Geet . i know the society very well they will not let them live so therefore i call you all here to attended the wedding yourself .
Dadi : to Geet & Maan please beta today dont disappoint me with her teary eyes
Maan: but dadi how is this possible?
Geet: i will not disappoint you....looked at Maan as if saying have heart people are watching us.
Dadi hug Geet

(chahat ki lau to
aandhi mein bhi jilmilaye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai )
(OLD Maan back)
Maan wanted to go from there as soon as possible but people eyes made him follow Dadi and Geet
dadi ask him to sit unwontedly He sit pandit proceed the ritual the exchange garlands Maan felt Geet is ignoring him she never let him see in her eyes .she was just looking at floor. they took pehra he could feel her trembling hand in his
dadi gave Maan Mangalsutra to placed it around her neck for the first time he say her face it was full of tears
(yeh mulaqatein
yeh teri ankhein
ek pal na main bhool pau
kitni mohabbat
hai kitni chahat
tumse
kaise bhala main bataoo)
Those tears eyes melt his anger .... thinking all was my fault yesterday i said she is my wife .... he placed sindoor in her Maang......( see mr Maan she is your wife now smiled at his own thought)

Tasha :sasha why Mk smiling
Sasha: who was clean her tears ........Go & ask him.... walk out.

dadi kissed their foreheads they took blessing from her. Geet through out the time ignoring Maan.
Media people please if you stand together we will take pictures of your's
Dadi made Geet stand next to Maan both felt strange Geet hand touch Maan but she quickly wrap around herself.
Pinky :PLz Geet upper to dekho
Maan : wispher " agar mujhe ko pata hota ka tumhari zuban ko yun break lag jai gai to mein tum se bohot pehla shadi kar lata. he smiled
Geet:looked at him with a sheepish smile

Acha lage jo
to samne muskuraye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai
Ek ajnabi sa ehsaas dil ko sataye
shayad yahi to pyaar hai

the cameras capture Picture

lunch was serve Geet was trying to stay away from Maan when ever she saw him coming close to her she use to go other side of Dadi. Maan throughout the time kept his eyes on her
It was late evening when party was over. thanking all guests Geet didn't noticed when Maan came closed to her she thought it was pillar behind her she try to take rest next to it she felt hand on her shoulder she turn back saw Maan very close to her . she try to move away but Maan hold her from waist
Maan: itna bura hoon ka tum mujhe se baar baar duur ja rahi ho. looking in her eyes
Geet: didn't have reply
Maan: theek ha mein what you call me DD....paused
Geet: woh mein.... try to loosen his hold on her waist
Maan bring his face more close to her as he knew it was dark & no 1 can see him. he can tease her.
Geet: felt help less she didnt get what to do?
Maan: bolo mrs Geet Maan?
Geet: Maan...........Dadi.
Maan let her free she ran showing him thumb .... Maan had laughter

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Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago