FF:You complete me!pg 193,p47+imp note on 194 - Page 134

Originally posted by: pickle6586

hi palo,

thanks honey...!!!! 😛 ..... i was blushing too while writing it... imagine u had trouble just reading it but i had to imagine and write stuff...... 😳

yes pinky and maan are a team now, just like geet and daadi are...!!!! 😉.... no shaadi and all haaaan....only XXXX rated ness minus the shaadi...!!!! 😉

lol, yes , innocent mind??? and what were you reading???? such a XX rated update??? 😆

i've updated it...read it...!!! maan got bold last update and now its geet's turn...!!!!

pffttt.... my mind is soooooo innoncent.... 😉 .. well it used to be but after the last update ahahah maybe not so mch anymore ahahaha 😆😆😆😆 jkz.. lolz so like i tottally heart this update!! it was just like awesomly good!! 😊😊 ..it was soo good that i reread the whole thng 👍🏼👏👏👏👏... oh my god u weren kiddin when u said that geet got bold eh...hahahhahah lolz get isn't too innocent anymore either...honestly these two aare just sizzlin up ur story like oh my god!!! hahaha .. u kno wat i thought of when u said they were gonna hve all the xxx rated minus the shaadi ahaha it occured to me ki farak phenda hai...isn' geet already pregnant.. lolz its not like she can get pregnant again ahahhahaha jkz but my innocent and bhola mind 😉would like it better if they got really intimate once they get married i think it'll make it more speciall but thtz jst my opion ... and lolz obviously all of maan and geet were my favourite but another really good scene was the phone call to pinky ahaha i jst loved how she called him jeeju and he called her saali ahaha lolz i'm jst waitin for this to become official now 😊😊 ...lolz totaly lving this jeeju salli jodi!!! so now u have to update really really soon b/c i wanna read more now plllzz!!!! 😊

i will have heart attack OMG your FF Maan it too romantic..........i loved that... speechless

That was amazing dear

Originally posted by: pickle6586

looks like XXrated ness ka dose kuch zyaada hi ho gaya...... kyun priya???? welcome to the ICU.... 😆....we have another person with us.... sravani...!!!! uzmmaaa is already there...

i understand... ur hosh udh gaya despite that u made such a big comment i am so so so so so so happy.......

memory loss ho gaya??? so next update kya mujhe yeh likhna padega ki maan aur geet ka kya rishta hain????? 😆

sweetheart i did not see ur comment before the time u specified so i'm sorry...!!!! but the next update is ready... and btw good morning...!!!!

read the update with something cold... so hot and cold balance ho jayega.... 😉

no problem apology accepted. and btw i was on till 2 am last night. 😆 and ab main yeh kuch cold kaha se layoo? main toh breakfast kar rahi hoon. woh bhi rice aur curry se😆.aur next update thora jaldi karna yaar. waise aaj agar update nahi kia toh koi nahi par weekends pe plz jiyada update karna warna main mar jayoongi. aur haan jab KSG kuch din ki liye DMG mein nahi hoga tab bhi double updates karna yaar. kya haina tab main DMG nahi dekhoongi na.
and WELCOME to the ICU Sravani👏. yahan pe khane ki liye dekhne ki liye sirf x-ratedness milega tumhe from Soumya. hope u enjoy your stay at the ICU😆

hi Soumya, the detailed comment will be done later. tell me one thing, when I suggested you to make him to call her & get in to her room, you said he has already gone to her room many times and here you made him to stay for such along time with all those x rated kisses. how come dear? btw, why did he took out the fuse? just to have a candle light feast of Geets beauty? or was he trying to gain the courage ot kiss her in dark first and later in the board light?

👏👏👏 classy update. Will text you the balance later.
Jaya

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Originally posted by: desigurl953

kya baat hai soumya di?
mere comment ko reply hi nahi kiya
u didn't like it?
boo hoo
i took ur words so seriously and wrote this long ESSAY fro you and you!!!
Now i know how you feel when people dont comment to your update
but please reply

hey nothing like that...sweetheart.... 😛

i was out for dinner with my family and now i'm back.... wow... that was quite a long post .. took me quite some time to read..!!! lovely post i thoroughly enjoyed reading ur comments...!!!!

i'm glad u took my words seriously.. i like it when people pick their fav lines and scenes from my updates and when they are more specific about what they liked in each update..
u know that makes me write better and i know what u expect and accordingly take the story ahead...

so thanks a ton....!!!!! 🤗 🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

u actually made a rough draft before writing this post??? awwwww... i like it, i like the effort u took to comment.. thanks honey...!!! muaz.... muaz........

i know there were too many kisses in this update... it was flooded with kisses and no wonder everyone's been losing track of how many times they kissed each other...!!! 😆

and yes, its been a little XXX rated too... i had to make it that way because some of my readers wanted it... 😉

haahahhaha i like your irony in the speechless statement... but please do comment the same way..!!! i like it... 😛

and yes, i'm glad u can sleep in peace now...!!!

yep, i'll be updating tomo... !!!!! 😃

thanks once again honey.... keep reading and keep commenting... increase the size of your posts and u get to read more of maneet..... 😉

Soumya

Amazing update!! Loved it...do cont.soon

Originally posted by: Maan_Mahi4Ever

Soumyaaaaaaa!!! p44 was jus hot ... maan was challenging geet!! n p45 was jus awsum yaar ... geet tried to make a smart move but maan knew what it was 😆 aur pinky ko "saali" haii is dis da same msk we all know??? looooveeddd da upd so much! 😉

hi dear,

thank you so much...!!!!! 😛

and yes, this MSK is madly in love with geet and and adn the imp part is that he has accepted it unlike the MSK in the serial... so there's obviously going to be a lot of difference.... u know...!!!!!

SOUMYA!!!!!!!!!!! Main kuch kehne ki halad mein nahi hoon. apni mansik santulant phir se kho chuki. thora bohot memory jo wapas aaya tha thanks to u phir se bhool chuki abhi toh meri dimag mein itna xxxxxxxx ness chal raha hain ki mujhe chakkar aa raha hain. main doctor ko dikhake wapas aati hoon.*actually ima go read pallo di's update and see if i can feel a little normal. kya haina main bohot hi lamba comment karne ki planning kar rahi hoon toh prepare hoke aati hoon*

Originally posted by: -afsha-

Ok forgave u this time

Jus check whether ur sending me only or any other Afsha

As there are many Afsha's here jana

awww... thanks afsha....!!!! 😛

and i'll check it once again... or u send me a buddy request...!!!