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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: deejagi

hi Soumya, the detailed comment will be done later. tell me one thing, when I suggested you to make him to call her & get in to her room, you said he has already gone to her room many times and here you made him to stay for such along time with all those x rated kisses. how come dear? btw, why did he took out the fuse? just to have a candle light feast of Geets beauty? or was he trying to gain the courage ot kiss her in dark first and later in the board light?

👏👏👏 classy update. Will text you the balance later.
Jaya

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hi jaya,

i knew this was coming...!!! 😛... i knew you would say this in your comment..but i could not help!! i had to get him to her room and clear the misunderstandings she had about andy u know..!!!😊

and i was thinking about you... jaya had suggested this and i said no but i could not think of anything else..!!! and u know everyone wanted a XXX rated episode for keeping geet away from maan when he was in shimla so i had to give in....
and pinky pulls out the fuse because she does not want her dad to see maan coming into their house at that time and geet was also angry when maan left her the last time in the office, so obviously he will not be accepted if he comes and asks her straight about what her problem is...!!! like he says, he has to subject her to sensitive situations to get things out of her...!!!

and thanks for the suggestion..!!! everyone liked it... though he came walking thru the main door...!!! and yes, i waiting for your detailed comment for both parts 44 and 45..!!! i dont think you left a comment for part 44 since u were busy.

and yes, i'm sorry, i was busy when i saw ur PM and hence i could not update then! but nice of you to reply even then...!!!!

looking forward to ur comment..!!



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever


oyye Soumya. Main ab kuch nahi likh sakti. I am feeling very weak. have butterflies in my stomach. maf karde yaar par abhi abhi DMG aur geet ka ajka episode dekha. Armaan in SHOWER SHOWER MIND U. and MAAN AGAIN SHIRTLESS. BOth of them shirtless. meri memory ab kabhi wapas nahi ayegi aur meri dimag se xxxness bhi nahi jayoongi. main pagal ho jayoongi. mujhe asylum jana parega.



oh my dear, priya😳

how much of shirtlessness can u take priya???? awwww... i pity you..but girl now i feel like watching DMG and i'm doing that right after this post...!!!! 😆

can it geet any hotter, arMAAN and MAAN both shirtless...i can completely understand ur mansik santulan and it is justified... 😉....

koi nahi, baad mein likhna agar memory wapas aa jaaye. nahi aaya tuo koi baath nahi mein laungi usse wapas...!!! tumhare liye ek special update likhungi...!!! with billa billi romance, tab na chaah kar bhi tera memory wapas aa jayega.... 🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣

good luck girl...!!! and take care, dont forget to breathe..!!! 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
yaar agar tuu DMG dekhti ain toh i'll say leave all this go run to YT watch the episode NOW!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kooliio

Amazing update!! Loved it...do cont.soon



thanks honey...!!! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: loveangle_4ever

yaar agar tuu DMG dekhti ain toh i'll say leave all this go run to YT watch the episode NOW!!



i do watch it now and then...!!!! was it that nice??? gosh, i'm running now ...will back n PM you or catch u here...!!! after watching it...!!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wonderful update.... am speechless.. Maneet scenes were cute n romantic... do continue soon..
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Posted: 15 years ago
hahahhah........
geet pinky ke hath pakad ke khichne lagi ..maan samajhkar ....
awsum ......din me sapne bhi dikha dia maan ne isko...kahin sachme geet pinky ke sath mandap na chali jaye...
bawri ho gayi kudi us firang ke chakkar me...!!
aye haye ....todda munda badda shararti baneya hoya hai...!!!
kudinu patanwaste sali nu bhi pata litta hai...
oye kamal kar diya oye..!!!
ki andaaj hai munde da.....
todda update na.....bas ...too sizzling si ...
ahem......
aj da episode te tarah....!!!
fantastic update soumya
loved it dear ..
very well written.....!!
idea accha tha sach me.....don taraf geet ki hi loss thi.....i mean ...leave it ll...😉.!!!!!!!!
wait ....i will go and catch up with the next update
love
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Posted: 15 years ago

great update as usual! loved the romantic scenes!

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Posted: 15 years ago
She looked at him, grinned, and went so close to brushing her lips against his. That very instant he left her, stunned.

She moved back immediately and laughed. He looked at her angrily. "It's not that easy to get away!"

ise kehte hai eet ka jabab patthar se dena.....typical geet ..!!!aise idea to uski hi ho sakti hai....... aye haye....
u know what i liked most ....
geet hugged maan and he tied the dories...and doing that said ....."bolo..."
i dont why ....i felt so good .....u kno .....like a husband...who is used to tie the knots of his wife.....such a care was hiding in that word....
loved it dear ...
loved the whole update ...
care and romance .....was filled in it totally ...
sach me....geet only geet can dare to kiss him so boldly ....and nt repenting after that ..i liked when
maan waited for her permission ...seriously ......i loved it ...amazing..
touched my heart yaar ...
khus kar dia tumne...
u know ..i dint like to geet repent after the kiss in my fic....bt she did....nt cause she shouldnt kiss him....because she shudnt let him know that she too loves him....i hated imagining the situation...i hated r condition ...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi,
I just read the last part of your FF (haven't read the earlier ones) as I am new to the forums. But I liked how Maan and Pinky are working together. Its nice to see Maan playful. I can't wait to read all the prior posts. This is going to be a really long weekend for me as I am planning to catch up on all the FFs here in Maneetland. I am just afraid that come Monday I am going to be a 'chalti firti disaster' due to lack of sleep. Please add me to your PM list. Promise to comment once I have read a few parts.

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